Oh wow this was a wonderful story that had me falling over for more. I love the language that you used to express the feelings of both characters as well as draw us in. Thank you so much. Now I'm going to go sit down with some ice water a fan and try to cool off.Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2019 05:31 pm
Wow!!! That was really really steamy and very very hot!!!! Also well written, even though it was a tad bit long, but I understand why it had to be. Looking forward to the next instalment. Thank you 😊c6;a039;Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 06:49 am
sexy sexy sexy...! i've been wanting to read BW/AM stories for awhile now so thank you, thank you, thank you for bringing the heat!! i hope to read more of these two but if not - please update more BW/AM XD
the only remark i've is that the chapter could've been shorter. in other words just cut into more chapters because it was a long read but other then that i really liked this and how you used chinese words to describe certain things.
thanks for the read - hope to see more!
Thanks for your enthusiasm! It was all my pleasure bringing the heat to you. It makes me feel so good that a black woman feels such passion for this too.
I have already thought of the second part to this, in the same very detailed vein but describing a more relaxed interaction. The after sex where they shower together and involving another Chinese word for you, (219;(230;浴 yuan yang yu .
The reason why I left it as one long uninterrupted read is because it is the best way to perfectly capture those intense events. In the story there was no break in time, everything I wrote happened sequentially. For the characters, they were so caught up in their situation together that they moved from one stage to the next before they even knew what was happening, there were no breaks for them, consequently this way it is read as they experience it.Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 03:44 pm
Wow!!! Fire!! This was sooo good! I need a cool drink and an Asian man!!
Thanks for sharing the hot feelings! Come to Taiwan and be Angie, then you can drink all of the milk bubble tea you like and find yourself caught up in the rain, and a tight little Taipei apartment as well.
Maybe you could have been if you were there two years ago.Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 04:16 am
Sexually combat, I love it!! These are so hot that are combustible! More please.
You have a keen sense! That was the key to their encounter. When two opposing sides want each other so much, more than any other being, then the sex should be combustible, or at least far from the sweet way which they imagined it solo.
Thanks for your appreciation!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 02:17 am