the photo for the female character is not working
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 21 2015 12:19 am
Can't wait for the first chapter.
Dominik looks like my type of guy😊
Reviewer: kiki Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 01:07 pm
Are those her children that she resents, because she can't kill herself? Give them up foster care and go kill yourself, those babies can feel your anger. Those beautiful babies deserve to be loved. Don't like Rose at all right now. Great casting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 12:12 pm
The prologue is completely too short to even grasp a feel of what is to come. I think it would be better if you added onto it or just wait until you have a longer chapter beta'd before uploading anything to be honest.
Author's Response:
I completely agree. I didn't know how much shorter it appears on here than it does when on Microsoft word. Thanks for reading and the advice.
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 09:19 am