Title: Chapter 7

Im so in love with this tory already i cant even i love it so much please update soon

 

Reviewer: yamiik Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Oh my gooooosh I feel like I'm going to piss with excitement at what is going to happen next!!!!

Reviewer: anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 05:08 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Dun Dun Dun. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 04:43 pm

Title: Chapter 7

It's on now! do all the Marino men like chocolate.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:55 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Loving this story more and more

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:37 pm

Title: Chapter 7

OH BOY

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 12:09 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Cameron, why do assume that Aries is lying about having your son? Just because Hosia is a lying slut monkey with a skanky personality doesn't mean Aries is the same.  Aries should  have told you that she aas pregnant but skankella De Hosia was spewing evil all over Aries. I can't wait for my shero Aries to tell Cam about the back alley abortion.  Fireworks!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 11:08 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is a good story... Your writing is getting better as well. But I also feel like chapters should be longer. I'd like to read or see more depth in the characters, their struggles & so forth. Also just be careful & more aware of your grammatical errors! Keep up the good work though! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 7

It's about to go DOWN!  I can't wait!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 06:19 am

Title: Chapter 7

1:Ambrosia is delusional. 2.Anthony is bringing his girlfriend to meet everyone because he loves her. 3. It's about to go down she let the cat out the bag not knowing that pops & Christian didn't let the other brothers nor Cameron know the situation which was her & Jaylen. 4. Everything is revealed now Cam is on his way to the New York. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: KVGURL Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 7

great update and pace - loove Christian by the way! look forward to Aries and Cameron reuniting...! thanks for the update!! 

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 7

Love the pace of this story. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 7

Yes, please Cameron, go to New York. I want to see this little meeting at last. Because all this sh*t still goes right back to his lady love, Ambrosia...ughh!

I'd like to see him try to come at Aries in some type of way! She is nobody's pushover. Life has been too hard for her to be. She's had to be tough, resourceful, and resilient out of necessity. Having not a living soul to depend on in the world does that to you. It can humble you in ways you never thought possible. So, no time for bullsh*t from folks.

Now, did he have a right to know about Jaylen, maybe; but all indications suggest that still might not have been the smartest thing. Honestly, they got drunk, had sex and she got pregnant. How the hell do you explain that to your son later on? Not exactly their finest hour and Ambrosia was between them. Her "friend" that suddenly became an enemy. I see her reasoning here. A big mess!

Love that baby!

 

Cant wait for this.....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 7

Good story so far...ready to the meeting between Camerson and Aries.

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 7

Your chapters are getting better and better.  Great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 7

I love your fast updates; I swear though, as good as they are it seems like it's never enough! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:19 am

Title: Chapter 7

This is a great read and your pacing is excellent.  It is worthy of publishing and I will be purchasing.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next install.

Reviewer: Karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 7

This is a great story. Wish the chapters were longer.

Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 7

Damn, Cam where's the love? lol. Ohh shit bout to go down in NYC. I'm waiting for Cams excuse on why he didn't stop Posion in college from bullying Aries. 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 7

It is getting good (rubbing hands together). I can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter had me laughing so hard especially if they were to see o'girl to hit her with the car lol.

Reviewer: precious Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 7

OMG,  When is the next chapter. No pressure but can we make it Tuesday..  LOL,LOL

Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 7

Father and son are about to meet, let the fireworks begin.  I love Jaylen he is such a sweetie pie!  Hosia needs medication!  Cameron is a criminal defense attorney, so why hasn't he files a restraining order against Hosia?  Did he changed the house on the house?  Who bought Hosia the car that she drives?  I am putting in a request for Hosia to run over by a semi. Just saying..,

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 7

Chile please don't hold us in suspense!!!!!  When will there be another update, please make it be in like 20 mins from 7:30 a on May 18, 2015!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 12:30 am

Title: More Characters

Nice pics!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 10:46 pm

Title: More Characters

Who are the Banks's? New characters that haven't been in the story yet. Gregory is cheating on  Iman with that little trick Hosia, really?Smh

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 09:35 pm



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