Reviews For Below The Surface
Title: Chapter 2

Although his girlfriend is a damn nut Chance was wrong. All the therapy in the world couldn't help them & starting something with Angie isn't fair to anyone.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Excellent

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 09:33 am

Title: Cast

angie was right to trust her gut instinct when she suspected that Jen was a big gossip. now add a splash of crazy too the mixture also. feel sorry for chance - he seems like a good guy but now he has kissed angie and staying away from her isnt going to be easy

reaeeal great update! thank you!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 07:49 am

Title: Cast

How did Chance and Jen go from happy and spending the rest of their lives together to counselling and cheating???

Reviewer: blackpanthershay13 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 2

What! Jen is pushing him away with her jealousy, she got some serious trust issues. Plus Chance acting like that doesn't help the situation. Chance acts like he is into BDSM, Angelina was weak for a minute until she saw the light.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

OML!!  What kind of neighborhood is this?  Jen is crazy and is it my imagination that she wanted Angelina away from Harris?  Exactly whose baby is Jen carrying?  Angel is right to watch this nut case.  

While I can understand Angel kissing Chance back, I was glad she broke away from him.  Angel needs to focus on her career and herself.  Harris wants kids, while Angel is not ready.  

Poor Chance...at least he is not letting Jen walk completely over him.  Her behavior is pushing him away and he should put the engagement off for now.  

Whose idea was it to get pregnant anyway? I was expecting her to say Chance had attacked her or something.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Soooo Jen and Chance are two effed up individuals.  Angelina...you in danger girl. LOL!  Loving this story.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Now see, I have only ever loved me some vanilla....my husband and all of my previous boyfriends can attest to that lol

But........... I don't know Alexandria Glass, I just might have dipped myself in some chocolate if a Harris Luther came along first, your description of him was too delicious.

Chance went all crazy alpha on Angie, which would have been supper hot if he wasn't committed to another woman who is pregnant. Loving this story because I have no idea where it's going. Fantastic!!!!

Update Soon!!!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 11:00 pm

Title: Cast

The only sane one is Angelina! I am looking forward to seeing you iron this one out! Hehe.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Well...that escalated quickly, didn't it?

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 07:36 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I've been enjoying the story right up until the scene with Angelina and Chad outside the doorway.  I'm not sure if I liked it.  It seemed a little odd, out of place even.  I'll keep reading and see where you take it.

Reviewer: Dinndee Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 07:20 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Jen is crazy, has Chance cheated on her in the past? I have the feeling that she got pregnant on purpose to try to hold on to Chance.  Did he ask Jen to marry him before or after she got pregnant? I don't like Jen!  That ho Janelle, really throwing yourself at a man with a fiance and a child on the way. No class or morals! Angelina seems a woman of integrity. Chance you need help and he is definitely not ready for marriage. Jen is not the woman for him, she psycho!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, that was good. Going to love this story

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 06:52 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Omg!!! Wow!! What in the actual fuck?!  And why is Jen so crazy?? Lol!! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ummm..... is that one of my husband's (Michael Fassbender) pic chosen as Chance. I may need that back lol

Loving the start. I need more.

Update Soon!!



Author's Response:

ROFL!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 11:49 pm

Title: Cast

This is going to be good. Everyone seems so innocent. I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

NOW IM LOOKING 4 MOTE

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Excellent beginning, I can't wait to discover who the monster/sociopath are ! Surprise me !

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 09:51 am

Title: Chapter 1

Chance is a DOGG!! Jen seems like a " throw the rock, hide your hand kind of girl". Angelina is looking at Jen like this B*tch is all up in my cool-aide and don't even know the favor. I like it!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 11:58 pm

Title: Cast

the girl you have as Angie is gorgeous - what's her name? Jen gives me weird vibes while Chance is downright cute, lool!

great start - look forward to the read!



Author's Response:

Hi! 

The female is a rapper named Trina. My Chance is Michael Fassbender. It's something about that man and I love that pose of the picture I chose :D

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 07:13 am

Title: Cast

I love the pictures, I can't wait to know more about them. I'm not a big fan of Chance right now, I mean he's in a serious relationship (it seems) and has a baby on the way. I don't think he deserves Angel.  

Jen is a little too forward and noisy.. I'm getting a trouble maker vibe from her. I hope Angel has a backbone and respect.. I can't wait to see how this goes. I LOVE "For Her Pleasure", so I'm hooked.

 

Great Job, please post soon :D



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! I'm still updated "For Her Pleasure" but...I'm about to round that out. I hope you enjoy this story. I appreciate you reading!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 06:20 am

Title: Cast

I can tell I am going to enjoy this one didn't really get a good impression of Chance and Jen definitely seems like a character I guess we shall see can't wait to see how this goes 

Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 01:19 am

Title: Cast

You had me at Fassbender.😍😍😍



Author's Response:

On the picture I posted of him...that pose....yassss!!! I like to fantasize about him looking down at me like that as I worship him...orally...lol

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 1

Jen seems nice, but a sieve; Angie is so right in keeping her biz to herself.  Never heard of wearing a bikin to a block party; if Angie goes in a bikini every man is going to have an erection and all the women are going to be jealous.  

I am glad Angie is focus on her career and not making moon eyes at Chance.  Good Chance can feel guilty at his instant attraction to Angie.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 12:34 am



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