Reviews For Below The Surface
Title: Chapter 12

I lived Angelina and Chance, the along came Cole and they were even more petfect.  I knew it was Jen and whwn Angelina hit her in the face was perfection.  So not surprised about Donna, glad they're in the hoosegau!!  I am doing the happy dance!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Girl i'm breastfeeding, pumping and working out too. I have been boxing ever since I was 9 years old, because my father wanted his daughters and sons to know how to protect themselves. I scrap our babies in their jogging stroller and my husband and I will go running everyday in a inside gym because it's getting to cold to have them outside. I want to try Crossfit, I don't want to lose weight I just want to be fit enough to take care of my babies. I thought Janelle was the psycho but I was wrong it was those two mitches Jen and Donna. If I were Angelina when I saw that mitch with my child i would have went ballistic too. Talking about she had a little girl, mitch! you killed your little girl, Jen needed to be pump with a lot of bullets because that kind of crazy will fine a way to come back. And Donna i just don't know what to say about her. Denise and Asger this will be very interesting. Thanks for this wonderful story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 04:47 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Oh I love this chapter, Angelina and Chance are so cute together and I love the name Cole Asger Gyllenborgh. I do think that Denise and Asger is having a little affair going on. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 04:28 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Wonderful finish! I'm glad you continued it. I want to say I was surprised by Donna, but I thought her quick acceptance was suspicious. 

Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 12:39 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 12:13 pm

Title: Chapter 12

I enjoyed reading this story very much. I am sad that it's over. I'm looking forward to your next one. 

 

I cant wait!!

 

Thank you. 

Reviewer: Iliketoread Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 11:18 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, Denise. To do that to your own child. Damn.

Asger and Denise, yes.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 08:57 am

Title: Chapter 11

Denise and Chance had me cracking up. Cole. cute.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 08:46 am

Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the updates. I was reading the first update about Cole's birth and was glad it was a boy. By the time I got to the end of the chap, you had updated again. I didn't expect that 😌 I almost hated the story ended.

I had expected his mom was behind it! Some crazy mom. She is just as sick as Jen.

I really enjoyed this story about Chance and Angelina. A great couple.

Maybe a epilogue????

Reviewer: Helen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 08:10 am

Title: Chapter 11

Nice update...please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 02:42 am

Title: Chapter 11

I'm a little iffy about Asgar and Denise.  I don't know.  If he wasn't a priest, I would feel differently but knowing about what he chose to do when he was an adult, I feel bad he is being tempted by Denise and honestly she appears flighty to me.  I love Chance and Angelina though.  I guess I am also sad her boy toy will be very hurt and that could weigh on Asgar as a Priest.  Hmmm, I'm waitng to see how you set their relationship if they do have one.....as grandma said, don't go putting the cart before the horse now.  LOL.  For a taste, it was very delicious.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 11

I love this simple family chapter...Asger may be leaving the priesthood for love, it seems...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 11

Welcome back and thanks for the update! A good calming update. A boy. That made Chance's day!!!

Reviewer: Nena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 11

I am waiting for Uncle Asger to leave the priesthood for Denise.  The baby is here and his name is Cole.  Love it!!!  What kind of book is Denise writing? Chance and Angelina are a beautiful couple!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 10

Well, I thought I would check back for an update.

The culprit(s) had to be someone at he wedding or that crazy Jen.

Please update soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16 2016 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 10

So who's doing this???  I know the whole Uncle asger and Denise storyline is a trip!!!  I have a feeling something might happen between those two.  I know he's a priest, but I just feel he may slip a little where she's concerned...haha.  Loved the secret wedding idea, great update!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 10

This was a great update. Chance planned the get away, the wedding and everything. Who wouldn't want a Chance?

I like the suggestion about them having twins. It would be nice if they had a girl since Jen killed his first child that was a girl. I am sure Chance would like a boy to pass the business down to when he gets to retire.

We do have a lot of suspects out there that want to bring harm to Angelina and/or Chance. I wouldn't be surprised if it wasn't his dad or the friendly cop Janelle. We will just have to wait and see. The suspense is definitely high.

Cant wait to see who it is and to see what else is going to happen.

Reviewer: Misty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2016 09:31 am

Title: Chapter 10

This story is great. I love reading it. When Chance falls in love, he falls hard. WOW!!!

Jen has some serious issues, just as Harris.

We see Harris went off the rocker with Andelina and is in jail. So who is still trying to do damage to Amgelia or Chance this time. Who knows, it could be both.

Jen, Harris and even Donna would seem to be the obvious one wanting Angelina harm. But then there's Chance the new CEO of his grandfather's company. His father did not seem to like that. Could it be Chance's father that cut the brakes? Something to think about. The obvious is not always the obvious!

update soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 10:12 pm

Title: Cast

Thanks for the updated pictures of the characters. Chance is indeed a looker.

Reviewer: Helen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 09:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Where is Jen?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 08:58 pm

Title: Cast

Do you have a front view of Chance?



Author's Response:

Here's one. I'll put another in the characters chapter.

 

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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 10

That Chance is some man. I hope they have twins (a girl and a boy). 

In that Harris is in jail, I believe Chance's mother could be behind the attempts to bring harm to Angelina. She had stated she had a lot to gain if Chance and Jen were to marry. I don't think she would let that slide.

I am hoping for an update soon😊

Reviewer: Helen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 05:08 pm

Title: Chapter 10

It's Jen or his mother 😡

Update soooon!

Reviewer: Nancy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 07:20 am

Title: Chapter 10

I really like this story, you are a wonderful writer and storyteller.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 10

Fantastic update...please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 02:26 am



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