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Title: Chapter 10

Asger chances with Denise are looking better because Gio just wrote his ticket out the door.  

Chase needs to calm down and set a trap--I still don't trust Jen or Janor his mama.  He has money, hire invisible bodyguards and two investigators.  

Thing I don't get is that this is just not about hurting Angelina, because Chance was in the truck, too.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Ok... I thought this story was over. I already figured who the true culprit is and thought this to be the epilogue. I started not to read it, but I like this couple. Half way through I was planning my review. Nice way to reinvigorate the story. By the way, I would love a sequel centering around Denise and Asger.

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Did Jen know about the cabin?? I still think that it's her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 10:03 pm

Title: Chapter 10

YAY!! You're back and hurting me with the BIGGEST cliffhanger, LOL!! I love your writing and I miss Angel and Chance, they are one of your best orginial characters. I can't wait for Chance to get at that crazed killer trying to get Angelina. I love them both happy and being a family, I would really be crushed if anything bad happend to them.

 

I hope Denise comes back and look out for her daughter she could use the support and protection.

Great Job!!

Please post soon and Happy New YEAR!!! :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 09:52 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Girl this chapter right here! has brought back some delicious memories of when I was carrying our twins. I guess my suspicion of Janelle was wrong ( I still don't trust that hoe) could it be Jen ( hiding in the trees )but it had to be someone at the wedding right?. My vote is for Denise and Asger to become a couple. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 09:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Wow. There was so much in this chapter. As I was reading I had to remember that Denise is Angelina's mom. I feel a bad for Giovanni, he seems to really be in love with Denise, but he is young and there will be other women. But it doesn't always feel that way when you're being dumped. He seems like a sweet guy, but too young for Denise as she knew, but who can resist how he worshipped her? Anyway I hope he continues to excel in his career and meet someone where the feelings are mutual. Maybe you can do a story for him and bring it seven or ten years later where he is somewhere in his early thirties. 

Anyway, I know Asger is a Priest, but why did you have to make Denise get hot and bothered with him. He knew the effect he had on her, but he is cool as a cucumber. And he takes his job as a Priest seriously. He didn't flirt. He was easy to talk to and pleasant, and as Denise described, FINE. Who wouldn't be attracted to that? But she knows he's a Priest and started acting normal. So are you going to do a story for Denise and Asger or just let them go on the'r merry little way? Well, think about it, it would be so good. I already know because this story is great.

I am so happy Harris is off the street and in jail. His parent's and brother seemed nice though. Hart seemed like a good guy. I wonder if he and Angelina will call each other. Wouldn't that be a little wierd. I know Hart seems to be nothing like Harris and they don't get along, but Harris is nuts. I knew Chance would go postal as he should have, Angelina is pregnant. Great update!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 9

Good update and I had gut feeling that it was Harris. But Yay, for Angelina and Chance..taking a little getaway trip together for the sake of their child and peace of mind....I can't wait for another update :) this was really good.

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 04:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Denise was getting her grove back and being a cougar ontop of it. I knew Harris was a psycho, Angelina sometimes other people can see a person true nature before you can, especially when you are not even looking. I don't think that Harris is the one who broke into her house I think Janelle did it. I bet the next time Angelina will listen to her man. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I'm not convinced that it's Harris stalking her. If so, he would've seen that she was pregnant at the very least. I like Hart.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 9

I don't think it was Harris doing everything to Angie; if it was, he would have written it down in his detailed way.

 His brother shouldn't have left her alone with crazy Harris and like Angie thought, she should have kept her butt at home.  She ought togivechase some for being her hero.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

DAMNNNN!!!! So much drama in one chapter, this is defintely a record. LOL! Pretty please post soon. I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 9

Angie your stupidity almost cost you your life and the life of unborn child.  Denise is a trip but she was getting her groove on!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 5

Why you gotta make my sexual chocolate a creep!? Why Lordt? I suspect somethings up with that offer on the house...perhaps Harris is hoping for a bigger cut for his services.

Jen's mental state is baffling. I hope we get to see more of her back story especially from her perspective. Jen doesn't come off as a money hungry bish but she's still a few screws short. 

I see moppet's intuition paid off again. Granny just setting up everybody. Even though I'm side-eyeing Chance he brought that fiyah to the bedroom. Can't wait to read next chapter. 

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 06:04 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Moppet is a hot ass mess. Her intuitive skills may prove to be spot on. I'm still holding out for sexual chocolate though #rideordie

Angie and Chance's chemistry are pratically palpable. There's a heap of tension there. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. Great job!

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 3

Hmm! So much happening in this chapter. Kudos to Chance for recognizing Jen needs help. However, his thirsty-parchie ass is still sniffing around Angie's knickers. No good Chance. No good. 

Gat damn I knew my sexual chocolate aka Harris Luther was gonna be a smooth mofo. That no kiss ploy on the first date and asking for a second date before the first date is even over is a killer move. I sure as hell would've fell for it too. Yummy goodness.

Waiting to see what role this new character, Uncle Asger plays. 

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 8

i like the characters in this story - they are all strong even the bad ones so thanks for a great update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 07:52 am

Title: Chapter 8

Five Stars

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 08:16 am

Title: Chapter 8

If the person who vandalyzed her place was tall, then it could be someone Chance's mom hired, could be Chance's dad, could be creepy Luther.   At first I even thought it was the female cop who was a bit too nosy 

To take a butcher knife makes me think woman; a man won't cut up all your stuff unless he's hired.  All this attack has done is moved her close to Chance; I see Aster marrying them.

I hope our girl can fight, bc sooner of layer she is going to have to take Luther down. I am so glad she don't play with this stalker.   

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 8

There's a crazy person on the loose. Janelle is a little strange, I don't know about her?!

Loving the update...need more!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 7

Love this story...I forgot how much!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 8

I am in love with this story!! Please update soon, I feel like it was the mom and Jen that did it. When Chance comes back he is going to be PISSED!! I cant wait

Reviewer: OMGAMG Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 8

Donna cares nothing for her son and her behaviour  towards Angie proves that.  Really, calling our girl a vile little cunt?  I trust none of those fuckers, Janelle included!!  Chad and Angie protect each other, as you are surrounded by evil!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 12:39 am

Title: Chapter 8

Sadly, anyone on that list is capable of doing this. Is ex out of the hospital? Harris seems to be a little unhinged. And there seems to be something kinda hanky about that Donna person and what she and the ex has going on. Something smells there.

Good update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 10:59 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Angelina is a better women then I because I would've showed her what a "Vile little cunt" could do to a decrepit old bat. I don't trust Harris I think he's the one who destroyed Angelina's apartment and making it look like Jen did it. Harris just gave Angelina a reason to go live with Chance, plus Harris is real creepy to me. I got my side eye on Janelle I don't trust her either. I'm feeling Asger Gyllenborgh I think when Denise gets back they would make a perfect couple. I also think that Ms. Angelina is pregnant with Chance's baby. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Forget Chance! I think Asher and Angie should get together. LOL! There is chemistry between them.I do think Angie maybe pregnant.

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Date: September 29 2015 05:46 pm



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