Reviews For Below The Surface
Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful, Wonderful update...Chance and Angelina will need to work hard keep the crazies out of their lives. Keep her strong not weak

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Jen is a piece of work, she honestly thought Chance was going to stay with her after she killed his child, this women is not working with a full deck. I'm so sorry Moppet died that woman was special she remained me of my grandmother. I'm not mad at Denise she had to deal with her grief of losing her mother in her own way. I think Chance and Angelina has a special kind of love that not even his mother or Jen can break they might try but they won't succeed. Glad you are back! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 06:04 pm

Title: Chapter 7

made my day - missed this story! thank you! thank you! thank you! and keep it coming whenever you can XD

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 01:24 pm

Title: Cast

I don't know if Donna is evil, yet. She sounds bored, taken up with appearances, and not a very good judge of character.

On the one hand, I feel for her being linked with Colburn. I can't take Colburn's word that she's a golddigger, coz he's a jerk. So I am very curious about what next will come out of her mouth!

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 08:16 am

Title: Chapter 6

What Donna doesn't realize, is that Angelina's heard about her too! Hold your own, Angelina!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 08:12 am

Title: Chapter 7

Please.... Make sure that Angelina is smart enough to read through all of Chance's mamas bull shit.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 7

I was mad but now I forgive you! Moppet reminded me of my grandfather who passed away two weeks ago :( it's hard. And I bet that psycho bitch Jen or weirdo Harris told her about Angie 



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for the delay. My condolences go out to to you for your loss. I think that my muse left me because I know I had to let Moppet go. She had a lot of qualities that my grandmother had. I just lost my grandmother in Jan and I know it's hard. She was so young and full of life and writing that with Moppet was hard. It'll get better, I promise you.

Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 7

OMG!! And it begins. Jen is nuts!! Now Donna has approached Angelina. I just hope Angelina stays safe in all of this. Two crazy women can't be good. Donna may not be crazy, but she certainly wants her way. Chance is going to do damage if Angelina is Can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 7

That heifer has the nerve to show up, don't trust her Angelina. That woman introduced crazy ass Jen to her son on purpose. His incubator ain't wrapped tight!! Insane in the membrane!! Dain bramage!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 12:19 am

Title: Chapter 7

Oh, Moppet!! That sucks! Its also sucks that Denise would just up and go like that.

Now the mother has some words of advice for Angie to stay away from her son now I guess. Because crazy Jen is the perfect woman for her son! Yikes!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 08:08 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Glad to see this story is back!

 

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 6

very gooood updates! thank you!!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 2

Honey let me tell you...that Jen is obviously two screws loose and is too busy in everybody else's business but her own. #takeseveralseats 

Now, that's  off my chest I love it that your characters are never one-dimensional, they are human and perfectly flawed. 

Can't wait to read the next chapter. 

P.S. Though I'm disappointed in Chance ' s actions I sympathize with his cheating ass. 

P.P.S. I suspect my chocolate drop is not all what he seems but he can still get it. #rideordie

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

Chance did the right thing by cutting Jen loose, but he should do it to her face, man up. Angelina should have done the same thing with Harris, she was in some what of a relationship with him not Chance. Chance's daddy is a little to old to still be acting like a child. His mother is another story altogether, I don't care if you are trying to keep your self right and tight for your man, if he don't love you there is nothing you can do to change that. Mama and great-grandma is a hoot!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 01:47 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Yay, Chance laid down the pipe and Angelina can't get enough.   Moppet and Denise are cracking me up asking how big Chance is.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

Guess we will see how all this plays out, however.....


While Angie owes Harris nothing, and its right for her to stop seeing him if she doesn't really want him, she should have handled that herself. Tell him herself to his face so he knows from her, not a third party. And certainly not from the man he's being replaced with. That wasn't Chance's place to do that and it has never been his business. She was the one seeing him for whatever it was worth to her. I have absolutely nothing for Harris, but that was still kinda f*cked up. Meanwhile, she's listening at the door like some scaredy cat. All that talk about being grown and taking it and calling it a day, and she couldn't do that? Ok.


That may be the end of it from Harris; some people can take a hint and go on about their business, feeling its not worth the trouble, but I wouldn't be surprised if he shows up again wanting to talk to her this time. 


Same with Chance. When Jen gets out of the hospital and eventually comes knocking, no one would expect Angie to handle that for Chance. And I don't think Angie herself would expect to handle that for him either. And Chance hasn't even done that; tell Jen to her face. She will come looking for him for an explanation of some kind. Does Chance really think she wont? He probably needs to tell her some things concerning his feelings about her killing his baby and their relationship in general for his own closure as well. If he didn't I'd be surprised. That's just human. She really hurt him with that. They were actually in a long-term relationship. Yes, she's crazy as hell, but he should tell her all this to her face. Again, so she hears it from him without any misunderstanding whatsoever. 


Kinda sloppy, Angie and Chance.


Good work!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Perfect. Leave it to Moppet.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 09:56 am

Title: Chapter 6

My mouth literally dropped open when Harris caught them.  He had the nerves to order her to him, like she was a dog.

This story is funny, sexy, and suspenseful---Chance handled his business, but he better get that lock changed.  Jen should be ashame to show her face, but she is unstable; wanted to end it with Chance, so she cut all ties.

Well, we know how he feels about Angie, but how does she feel about him?  

I feel Denise and these two should get to know one another better, it will make all that hot sex even better.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 6

Chance taking Angelina to the skating rink was a really cute date...though they seem to be moving fast, they have been atracted to each other for quite a while as Angelina's grandmother noted...Jen has always been a crazy gold digger and Harris is a controlling freak...not sure if Angelina has heard the last of him but it's good Chance defended Angelina...let's see where this goes...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 6

very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 6

I love Moppet!!  I am so glad that he told off his momma, that ish makes my teeth itch.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 03:05 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, Harris is a nut and not her boyfriend. Chance is trying to do the right thing and had backed off so I m not mad at him. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 01:06 am

Title: Chapter 5

You've just made Harris officially "Sleeping with the Enemy"-creepy.

And there are no words for Jen. Glad you followed your muse: I never would have seen Jen going for an DIY at-home abortion. I know she's flaky, but that takes some serious gumption. Just OMG. 

And Chance has now officially cheat. Even though he's clearly done with Jen. 

What's his Mom's story? To sick a gold-digger on her own son..?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2015 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wooo girl! I've been waiting since the first word in the first chapter for them to have sex. And boy was it steamy. You are one of the best writers on here girl (: keep it up!

 

 

 

Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2015 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 5

Aww suki, suki now! I don't like Harris! He is controlling and looks like he can be abusive.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 11:18 pm



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