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Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for the updates.

Duh, Gabriel! He's finally seeing for himself what Adele went through.  He'a a little thick, but I still like him with Adele.  Also, I think Max is gay. Just a vibe, but I'm probably wrong. lol

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 17

Just keep on thinking Gabriel. It'll come to you. He's looking at how ugly he was through his buddy there and its not comforting at all. I'm sure he's starting to wonder why Adele would even talk to him, much less be his friend or consider dating him like he wants.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 12:24 am

Title: Chapter 17

Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 12:07 am

Title: Chapter 17

ding, ding, ding!  He finally got it.  I can only imagine the tears Adele shedded and the stress she experienced from the majority there.  He needs to let her know and perhaps become Surinder's mentor; after her internship is up, steer her Adele's way.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 11:22 pm

Title: Chapter 17

So Gabriel is finally beginning to understand the part he played in the struggles Adele may have had with Northfields.  More importantly I hope he begins to understand her reluctance to be more than friends with him.  I hope he feels terribly and is moved to really change.  I think his relationship with Adele has made him more sensitive to see Surinder's situation and to stop excusing Humphrey's bullying tactics.  But what will he do now..Okay, so Gabriel now has a clue since Humphrey's spelled out his appalling comments about Adele for him...he seems to feel remorse, but will this remorse transmit to true change in Gabriel's life...Good story!  

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story for a number of reasons, mainly because Adele is strong and relatable. Gabriel, *sigh*, its like I want to like him but I just can't commit to it. No wonder Adele has her qualms. Honestly, Gabriel is like most white people, living ignorantly and secure in their white privilege. Never having to think about it unless it somehow touches their lives, and if they are directly accused of it, first words " I know many black people and have always been friends with them." Usually forgetting the BS comments made so flippantly to friends about other ehnicities or cultures, comments that are so obviusly the norm, that they don't even realize what they are saying or even remeber BECAUSE its not that unusual for them to make it in the first place. And finally, when a situation forces them to confront their own inner views and values, its like they are thrown for a loop cuz now they have to see the world in new eyes, more inclusive eyes and guess what? They struggle. They struggle cuz not only are they on new learning territory but now they have to reconcile their own history in all of it. Good luck with that. Whatever Gabriel gets, is what he deserves and if Adele chooses fully accept their relationship I hope he realizes the gift that she has brough him, not only of herself, but of finally being fully awake. Thanks for sharing, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: interrupted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 07:50 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Interesting update! Seems like Adele's conversation gave him food for thought. It's good to see him reflective about his words and actions....

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 07:28 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Yes, he needs to think long and hard about it. Does he actually feel that way, or just conforming out of indifference to others and their lives. Its a fundamental question that he needs to resolve within himself first, and then tell it to Adele, second. Because despite what he says, its the physical that's got him going right now. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Finally, Gabe's light bulb is flickering, but will explode once he meets with Humphrey--who is sure to say something nasty about Adele.  

Gabe's chances with Adele will improve greatly if he leaves the company that treated her so badly.  It would be hard to impossible to date someone willing to stay under the wing of those who mistreated me.    

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 04:54 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Gabriel seems to be confused not sincere.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 04:51 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Oh my! There's some chemistry going on up in here!  Gabe wants Adele and nothing is going to stop him--it's like she soothes his savage beast.  

Now I am afraid he is going to be in for a rude awakening with his family and work place, bc they are not going to be happy.  Oh and wasn't Gabe up for partner? Where does Adele stand, being that she is with the competition and does not look like the others.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 04:47 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I am glad Adele is taking her time with him.  Gabe is going to wear her down, but in the process he will get to know Adele and she will get to know Gabe.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 04:40 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Now we are getting to the crux of the matter!  Gabriel is loathe to acknowledge his privilege, a privilege out of reach to Adele, yet he wants to bring her into a world in which she can never truthfully exist.  He's just beginning to think about it but the fact that he says he is loathe to know how to overcome the issue shows his being clueless reigns supreme.  I so don't like this guy, in spite of his trying, because he's so stupid!  His privilege is so automatic that he has not ever questioned it or its effects on those who don't "fit", hence his being loathe to change it.  I am so glad Adele asked the question about his attraction to her before she changed her appearance!  Now Gabriel is forced to confront a harsh truth that is the true barrier to his relationship with Adele.  However, it's more than being a barrier to his relationship with Adele, it's a barrier that affects the lives of the excluded candidates who in spite of their merit, don't fit the physical privileged mold.  I love Adele for being strong and standing up for herself not to fall for Gabriel in spite of her attraction to him.  She wants a man with whom she feels comfortable in knowing he wants to be with the real Adele, the beautiful person she has always been.  That's the difference between Max and Gabriel.  Max always saw the beauty within Adele that Gabriel was loathe to acknowledge until she changed her appearance.  I love this book!  Excellent work!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 03:36 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad for Adele's caution with Gabriel. He s still clueless to the obstacles in their relationship. Sometimes I wonder if he's even trying to understand.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Yes, Adele finally broke it down to Gabe, and he listened and thought about it.Adele you have me proud! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Adele, Adele, Gabe is slow on the uptake so you will spell it out for him.  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Love Max!!  Adele quit plwying with Gabe.  Tell the man how hearing his words affected you. Sheesh!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 02:30 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for the update.

Slowly but surely Gabriel is getting his eyes opened to what a crappy place that office was for Adele. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 09:46 am

Title: Chapter 13

'Gabriel felt shame trying...but mentally shook it away"  He still hasn't learned., but he will.

I like how you write the story to where the important parts are there--you just have tos ee them.  I read this chapter twice and found things I had overlook, for example, When Dennis told him it wasn't their job to go easy on Adele, but basically Gabe & Co. job to protect her--and they failed, Gabe couldn't hide his shock.  

Adele is protecting herself and putting him off (hell, she move him to the friend zone), bc Gabe has shown from the very beginning his true colors---hopefully this leopard can change his spots.  I would continue to evade him because even with Dennis enligtening him about the positive aspects a diverse workforce can bring, Gabe still seems slow on the uptake.  If he stays and takes that promotion, Adele should never speak to him again and keep it moving.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

First, as an african woman, I was delighted to see the bit about the african culture and the puff puffs (love'em!)
Secondly, I really appreciate how you make Gabe progressively aware of the errors of his (former) ways.
and I think his love wouldn't be worth as much, if he didn't evolve at all.
Great Update as always

Reviewer: Nua Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 08:23 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter! Do I see a love triangle in the making??? Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 01:52 pm

Title: Chapter 13

So Gabriel has gotten a bit of schooling from a friend. The man is still clueless.  I hate that he approaches Adele wanting more than friendship when he still refuses to truly understand how his firm treated Adele with disdain and can't remember his part in it all. Having him remember that he was not so differrent from Humphreys when he first assessed Adele would be a start. At least the competition was more open minded and struck at a golden opportunity to get an excellent candidate in getting Adele.  Gabriel still has such a long way to go, so he needs to be stuck in the friend zone.  Adele would have to compromise too much of herself to be with him which is unacceptable. Maybe he'll learn in time. I'm really liking this story more now as you take us on this journey with Gabriel and Adele.  

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 01:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This story is too real. I understand why it would be hard for Adele to want to be in a relationship with a man who benefits from that white male dominated industry and is indifferent towards how they treat others. I've been there and in the end of the day I couldn't date him. I couldn't respect his indifference and his 'It was my fault.'  It's hard to get involved with a colleague in an competitive environment like that. Especially when you're set up to fail. I really liked the guy but I couldn't be with someone when I'm a little ashamed about it. Mainly because he helped and represented the systemic problems. Like Adele I left and went to a place that appreciated my talents and made room for me to grow. Not just use me for my talents. The guy and I didn't end up together because who they represent sadly matters to. Needless to say I totally support Adele being cautious. If Gabriel gets what he wants from her without learning than she is accepting the system. 

(That was a long winded review but it hit close to home)

Great job!

Reviewer: Hatty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 12:47 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Adele, you that Gabe is in love with you, his treatment of you was horrendous but he had since proved yo you how sincere he is. Adele piss or get off the pot. He still doesn't know that you heard everything that he said about you in that conference room.  Please tell him and get out all of the excess aggression.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 12:13 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Adele your still angry at Christian but he doesn't know that you heard what he said.  Make up your mind Adele, either you are letting him or kickibg him to the curb? Quit playing with the man.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 12:00 pm



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