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Title: Chapter 12

Damn good story! Excellent job of communicating Adele's struggle with work and their relationship. Love how you address the racial and class struggles they face without being over the top.

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter.  Loved the wedding and family interaction.  Gabriel and Adele are so cute together.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 12

I keep reflecting on your title Good Fit? and I wonder how will Gabriel become a good fit for her because at this stage he needs improvement.  Adele has gone thru her metamorphosis earlier than expected maybe but she has grown and is very realistic in her view of life and what she wants to accomplish and Gabe seems still viewing things thru entitlement glasses.  Some of the glare has been erased but he still has so much more to go before removing those glasses and having Lasix eye surgery to see things a lot clearer.  I really want to see you take us on his journey to becoming a good fit for Adele if he ever does.  Curious if he will speak with his father or mother about his feelings and relationship with Adele and if they can enlighten him anymore.  Also, why hasn't he spoken to Max?

Oh, thank you for sharing a cultural tradition.  That was a wonderful ceremony.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 12

Lovely ceremony. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 12

I read your story and loved the way their relationship is evolvong! I really like how Adele stands her ground on becoming who she thinks she can become!

Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 01:21 am

Title: Chapter 12

OMG! So now Gabriel is smitten with Adele to the point where he is annoyed and distracted.
I'm not sure of the time frame you have set for this story but I hope it takes years for her to fully forgive him.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 11:24 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, looks like Gabriel is falling hard!
Maybe they can make it work.....Humphrey needs to be exposed and given a reality check!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for sharing part of Ghanaian tradition with us!  

 

Dude is still asleep I see, but maybe starting to wake up.  He's just noticing the racism of his friend Humphrey which means Gabe is still clueless about his own racism and its impact on Adele.  Yet Adele has so much integrity that she shared a personal family event with Gabe to let him learn about a different culture.  He still needs a lot of work to actually be a good fit for Adele.  I want to see if/how he gets there.

 

 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 09:10 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Go Adele!!

Make him work for it.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I hope Adele's control isn't faltering.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 9

She should run, he is dangerous. Someone in his position makes a point to remember what he says. I don't believe that he can recall saying those hurtful words about her.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 11

This is a wonderful story

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 05:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Men hate being ignored or dismissed even though they have no problem dismissing women. Love it.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 03:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I can tell that he is a enormous prick.
I hope this isn't her love interest.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like the beginning. Can't wait to read the rest today.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for continuing this story.   Completely understand Adele's decision. Gabriel should just think about what Humphrey just said to see the attitude Adele still had to deal with working there.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

i should be doing my own damned editing, but I started this story and had to finish.  I love it. It's one of the most cohesive and well thought out stories I've read on here in awhile.  Please don't make me wait too long for an update! 😢

Reviewer: Annette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 11

You bet, I did enjoy these to lovely updates!

As always, I do enjoy you writing, you really have a way with words.

Now about our two protagonists; I really can't blame Adele for enjoying Gabriel's company, even thought he played such a did such good job of making her miserable in the past. But in the present, their relationship seems so intense that it's obvious that's they can't help themselves.

Some reviewers criticized Adele, for being weak or forgetting easily the hurt Gabe caused. HoweverThe matters of the heart are often incomprehensible to others and conflicted.

And there's plenty of conflict of emotions and feelings, here (love it!)

Hope you get more inspiration,

Much encouragements

 

Reviewer: Nua Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Wow..not sure how i missed this story but i love it. I just read all the chapters in one sitting and look forward to the more.

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 05:38 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Damn, I thought she'd forgiven Gabriel. Well I guess he needs to work harder for her. This story is great. I still haven't figured Max out yet I mean is he just a friend or does he secretly want Adele?? Great update. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 11:58 am

Title: Chapter 10

Gabriel is so jealous!!! :) I love it!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 11:51 am

Title: Chapter 11

Kudos to Adele! I love her character!!!! Man...Gabriel...when will he ever learn. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 06:51 am

Title: Chapter 11

g!  She walked away w/o a backwards glance...sorry Gabe, but you brought this on yourself.  Is he sucha simpleton that he don't even see that his words instigated something that make Adele's life hell?

I guess we will know he has seen the light when he tell knuckleheads, like Humphry, that he was wrong and insensitive in insulting Adele's looks and talent---and resign.  

I am so glad she was strong enough to walk away--who would want to be in a relationship with someone who works for a company that allowed that stuff to happen to her?  

The chemistry is there but little else and she can meet others and be happy elsewhere.  They don't know each other, well, he doesn't know her and she doesn't trust him enough to let him in.  Perhaps after some time apart---nah, he stays there then it would be over.  

Can't wait to see what you have as his wake up call.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 11

This story has me continuously thinking about these two. 

First Adele:  I am soooo happy she is not staying at this firm.  Humphrey's words conveyed exactly what they thought of her and how she would be treated at the firm.  Go to another firm where she has a clear slate and her actions/knowledge/abilities can shine without any additional preconceived notions based upon past looks and commentary.  She was right to leave Gabe standing there looking dumbfounded. 

Second Gabe:  WTH!!  She was being nice to your behind and you just had to open your big ass entitled/white privilege mouth and inserted (I hope for future purposes) big foot right in.  Did you not hear anything she said to you in the car that night?  Did you not hear how dismissive Humphrey was about her skills?  Are you seriously telling me he would stay in a position with a company that he would not get the respect he has earned or deserved?  I don't believe that BS for one minute.  If the shoe was on the other foot, he would be talking to Mommy and Daddy trying to start him up with his own firm.  He has yet to wake up, understand and acknowledge how the commentary he made helped shape her experience with the firm.  Lo and behold, it was ALL ABOUT GABE AND THE PERCEPTIONS HE WANTS TO PORTRAY to the management team versus ANY CARE ABOUT HER SPIRIT/EMOTION/JOY.  He gonna have to get it together and have a coming to Jesus moment before I begin to like him. 

Third Max:  Please don't let him be gay because I will take him in a heartbeat.  Just write me on in to the story and I will befriend Adele, we can hang out together as long as we was going home together.  :)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 11

Loved the update! Adele needs to focus on herself and trying to get her career started and not on building a relationship with Gabriel. He needs to understand that. Hope Adele does well at the other law firm. Gabriel needs to give her her space. If his feelings are true then he will not pressure her but wait for her to make up her mind what she wants to do with her life.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 03:52 am



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