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Title: JANUARY 30TH 1990

Fantastic update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 04:09 am
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1990

Love the friednship their building ! Cant wait for it to turn into something more

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Date: July 16 2015 04:08 am
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

Loved the update! Glad Solomon arrived safely!

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Date: July 14 2015 03:53 am
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

I read all seven chapters and it's so good. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope they do have peace with baby Soloman.

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Date: July 13 2015 01:11 am
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

I like the fact that Nathaniel is opening up about Martin a little. Man all modesty goes out the window when you are in pain and pushing out a baby. Nathaniel stayed calm which kepted her calm. I'm glad there were no complications with mother or child. What a amazing honor to name her son after his son. Great update!!!

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Date: July 12 2015 11:56 pm
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

I truly hope Solomon can bring peace, possibly by helping to remove all obstacles in the way of his happiness like Walter, Curtis and Wendy.  I really do not understand Wendy.  Why ask for your dead child's things when you have so called moved on.  Why can't your rich, have it all husband buy new items.  Walter, why do you want your son to have hand me downs with your snobbish behind.  This is just another way to attempt to hurt Nathaniel who has done nothing wrong to either of you.  Karma will definitely, I hope be a bish to all of them, I hope.

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Date: July 12 2015 11:36 pm
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

aweeeee its so sweet!!! alright I can say you did a birth good. If only it was in a tub they got to remove all of the sheets now.

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Date: July 12 2015 07:19 pm
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

Awww 

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Date: July 12 2015 03:28 pm
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

OMG!!! More. I love this story soo much! I think Nate and Eden need each other and her baby is just a bonus. 

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Date: July 12 2015 02:58 pm
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

Hiw did Nathaniel know all of that?? Solomon is here and he has brought Eden and Nathaniel  even closer, i bet that he coukd repel evil?  We will soon find out.  I can't wait for Curtis and Walter to get shot by Nathaniel  and make it a kill shot please?  That ho Wendy needs to rot in hell! !  Just saying. ...  This story is the sugady!!!

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Date: July 12 2015 11:36 am
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

Awwwwww ! This chapter was amazing ! 

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Date: July 12 2015 10:12 am
Title: JANUARY 29TH 1990

A truly wonderful update

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Date: July 12 2015 07:49 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Cool!

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Date: July 07 2015 06:41 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Wendy is evil incarnate and her new husband is just evil.  It would mKe me happy if somethong bad happened to Walter especially since he wants to help Curts.  I would love for Leonarf to shoot him and for Wendy to loose her little boy.   Nate you seserve love and happiness as that bitch Wwndy never truly loved you.

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Date: July 06 2015 11:16 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Wendy is plain evil! Can't wait to read more!

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Date: July 06 2015 04:35 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Loved the update! Hope Eden and Nathaniel survive all these crazy people. Wendy and Walter are so evil! They need a reality check and harassing Nathaniel needs to be stopped. If they so happy they need to move on and live their lives without trying to draw Nathaniel into their black web. They need to go buy their own baby clothes!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 03:35 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

I really do not like Wendy!! Why is she so angry at Nathaniel if she has moved on??  She wants him to be miserable and lonely forever.  If she was as happy as she claimed to be, she would not want to rub her pregnancy in his face or be angry at the fact that he moved on.  Wendy and Walter are both hate filled, and spiteful; they totally deserve each other. 

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Date: July 06 2015 03:25 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

I really, really love your book, please update soon...

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Date: July 06 2015 03:05 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

This witch has some nerve coming to Nathaniel house, demanding their little boys baby clothes and furniture. This man is already hurting from the death of his son, how heartless and evil can this women be.  What has he done to her, she was out on the dock to and she couldn't save him either. I hope the grave that Wendy and Walter is digging become their own. My hope is for Nate to stop Curtis in his tracks. I hate to say it but some people you just have to kill or you will never have peace, If it comes down to you are them choose your self.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 02:27 am
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Hard to think that Wendy has moved on since she and that rat husband of hers seem to be obsessed with Nate. What idiots.

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Date: July 06 2015 02:04 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Plotwise, nothing has happened. Except for dialling up the suspense with waiting, and him climbing into bed to comfort her. either she needs to go into labor, Curtis needs to show up or our hero needs to have another confrontation with his ex to keep the story moving forward...

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Date: June 29 2015 09:32 am
Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Interesting update! Curtis needs a reality check!

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Date: June 29 2015 05:59 am
Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Oh my god that was so good. Nathaniel was so caring and protective. Poor Eden that probably wasn't even the first time that happened to her. She probably had nightmares on the run all the time. Thank god Nathaniel was there this time. I also see that the baby maybe coming soon too

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Date: June 28 2015 10:02 pm
Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Now Nathaniel is what I call a real man. The child Eden is carrying isn't his but he vows to protect both mother and child. Curtis needs to be stopped in order for Eden to have peace, I know that much stress can't be good for the baby or her. She needs to know how a real man treats a women, and sometimes you have to look outside the box. Nice update.

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Date: June 28 2015 07:33 pm
Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Thye need to find Curtis ! Great chapter ! :)

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Date: June 28 2015 05:15 am


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