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Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Wonderful update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 03:00 am
Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

I b25;Nathaniel! !  He's good man and I hope that Eden realizes that soon. i can't wait for Curtis to get shot.  Does Nate have gun?   Shoot that fool in his ass please?!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 02:48 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

She should've walked when he first called her 'bitch'; that was just the first sign of many signs of disrespect and abuse to come.  

What happen to Curtis job?  Why does he want her knowing she is almost due to have a baby that he will have to help feed?

She should make a call to the state police and tell all his business: name, car color/make/model, cell number, drawers size, etc.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 12:49 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

 Great update ! :) Hopefully he doesnt find her ! :/

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 11:51 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

I'm so infatuated with this story. Can't wait for more!!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 04:12 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

Very good update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 03:50 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

Interesting update! Curtis has some serious issues and needs to be exposed and stopped!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 02:36 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

This is one of the stories I been waiting on. See this speaks of the kind of woman Eden is she's strong, she had to be in order to put up with Curtis. She faithful showing her loyalty to a innocent child that was conceived horribly. She humble by putting her child needs before her own. She's a MOTHER. I think she should tell Nate the truth about Curtis, so he can be prepared and he can teach her how to be prepared, he knows his surroundings better than her. Nice update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 12:50 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

Tell the man Eden, he can prorect you.   Your uncle trusts him and so can you. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 12:34 am
Title: JANUARY 21ST 1990

Really Eden? Nate has welcomed you into his home and you can't tell him your crazy ass stalker may be coming there next? I feel for Eden, I do. No one wants to be in her situation, but she is not staying by herself. Tell him Eden, but even if she doesn't all Nate has to do is look at the paper providing Eden doesn't take out the vital part. 

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Date: June 23 2015 12:13 am
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1989

I knew that baby wasn't his,I knew Wendy was a cheating slut!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 12:12 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Sniff, sniff!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 11:51 pm
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Angel's come into our live disguise in many forms. I think they were destined to be together. I'm guessing she's carrying a little boy name "SOLOMON" which means "PEACE".



Author's Response:

You're right jacqua43 Eden is going to have a boy named Solomon because of the name meaning. Little Solomon is going to arrive early probably January 30th or 31st haven't decided yet. If he arrives on the 30th which was Martin's birthday then it would be like Martin spirit has come back through another little boy. 

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 05:55 pm
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1989

What a BITCH!!!, who does that leave the man on your dead childs birthday HEARTLESS. I don't like Wendy or Walter they deserve eachother. Plus she's carrying another man child, I am beyond piss.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 05:47 pm
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Wow! i'm crying reading this how sad, I work with children in the NICU, I have seen the grief of parents saying goodbye to their children. How sad.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 05:39 pm
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1989

OMG! I never wanted to cry for someone so bad. I really don't know what to say. It's not Nathaniel fault that his son died and Wendy...I am not gonna waste my breath on her. I just feel so bad for Nat.

Question, where do you come up with these stories? They are so good. You are truly gifted.

 Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 02:58 am
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

I am already hooked! 

 Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 11:00 pm
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1989

all I can say wow!

Wendy was cold blooded to Nathaniel, I hope she regrets leaving him. They are both hurting Wendy could've handle the situation better.

 Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 08:53 pm
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Loving this story ! Great start ! :)

 Reviewer: Heleana Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 08:02 pm
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

What a dirty bitch! Poor Nathaniel...he was too good of a husband for that whore anyway. Wendy and that bastard will get what's coming to them because karma's a bitch also Eden's ex and father too all four of them should burn in hell.  Nathaniel should've broke the  bastard's face. I hope Nathaniel and Eden can move on together and finally be happy because God knows they deserve it. Loving this story already. I hope we get an update soon.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 06:31 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

I think I'm going to really love this story!!!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 05:53 am
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Wendy so hateful,  hmm he can do better

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Date: June 16 2015 04:50 am
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Wonderful update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 04:03 am
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Eden got herself into the same situation as het momma only she didn't marry the fool. Nathaniel deserves love but I am wondering what is the age difference between Eden and Nathaniel? 



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles Nathaniel is around 30 or 31 years old while Eden is about 24 or 25 so about a 5 to 6 year age difference between them. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 03:46 am
Title: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Interesting story so far.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 03:39 am


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