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Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Awe lol... How did he find her so fast with the exact location? Hmmmm? (I know who it is be its up to you)

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 07:20 pm
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

So glad that Nate dispatched that jerk to hell. Roast, baby, roast.

Sol is not going to be happy being away from Nate. I love how he seems to know that Nate needs him. They have developed their own little routine. Like a little family.

Yes, the ass is gone, but there are two other asses waiting to cause havoc. Hopefully, they won't be able to cause too much trouble.

I hope that Nate and Eden continue their friendship. Eden will have to come to grips with her life with Curtis and his death. It's more than a notion to watch someone die. I hope she can find a job and become independent.

Let your muse flow, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 09:14 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

His ex wife has to be addressed. Her vindictiveness should not go addressed. Just got to come up when th something to put her in her place... in his past. She wants him alone and miserable, please make his and her ending sting his ex and her husband.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 12:03 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

I look forward to what's next.

 Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 10:32 pm
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

How did Curtis find her so quickly with the snow just now melting?  Did someone point him in her direction?  What is Wendy about to do as she see's Nathaniel getting over her and getting close to Eden b/c regardless of how she left him, she doesn't want to see him with another woman and ol' boy just wants Nathaniel to suffer b/c he knew he was second best.  Wendy chose Nathaniel first.  Wonder how he is about to impact her uncle's job. 

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 05:36 pm
Title: CAST

Dang, Nathaniel looks fine...forget Walter scrawny looking self...LOL

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 05:20 pm
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

I'm glad you didnt draw the story out wit her ex. Eden and Nathaniel have a lot more adversity to face with him out of the picture. I think your heading in the right direction.

 Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 05:09 pm
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Get Nathaniel and Eden closer together so that she can help him fight off Windex, opps I mean Windy, damn Wendy.  Lol.  I would like for them to admit to their growing attraction to each other.  

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 04:31 pm
Title: CAST

Love the cast!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 11:46 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

How about Wendy and her husband end up losing everything. How did Curtis actually know to find Eden.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 06:42 am
Title: CAST

Great cast pics, especially Nathaniel. 😍

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:42 am
Title: CAST

Nathaniel picture does not come through.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:26 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

so glad thay Nate got there when he did, I know that no one is going to miss Curtis, he's Satan's problem now... and you know that heiffer Wendy and her husband told Curtusi where Eden and Sol were, if those two are so happy why are they so concerned about wthat Nate is doing... IMO Wendy never really loved Nate, she loved being able to one up her friends, its all about apperences for her.

I soi want Nate and Eden to get together, those two deserve happness.

 Reviewer: rocky balboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:09 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Dating

 

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:07 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

One down...two to go, imo.

Well, with Curtis out the way. I guess the ex and her husband will have to find another way to be a pain in the butt.  

They can't get him for Curtis death bc he was on the run, documented proof Sol was hurt, and the cops were called right away to prove self-defense.  

How did Curtis find out where they lived?  What little birdie/s whispered in his ear?

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:00 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Finally he's out of the way!!! =) Suggestion: Eden getting on her feet, possibly getting a job and Nathaniel building a friendship/relationship with both her and Sol. Hey, maybe he can be task with some baby sitting duties in order to accomplish the goal while giving them plenty of oppertunity to interact one-on-one. Can't wait to see what you decide/ where the story goes. Keep that ink flowin'!!!

 Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:55 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

I'm so looking forward to the 2am feeding's, diaper changes and all the nine yards. In a little under 4 months our twin daughters will be here. I'm glad that Nathaniel came back when he did. I can't believe this a**hole made her drop the baby, the mother in me would have rosed up and I would have went Medieval on him. This fool thought she was going to let him kill her baby and then run off with him, this MOFO was crazy to the 10th power. I think Eden should stay with Nathaniel because her uncle being a cop will be out of town a lot,with Wendy and Walter gunning for her and Nathaniel they are safer together. Plus Eden needs a job being a new mother and all and don't Nathaniel needs help with his business with fishing and hunting season around the corner. I thought I better clean up this post a little.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:41 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Uh....Nate and Eden getting together of course. They already like each other, now you just have to make them acknowledge it and act on it. It doesn't have to be all in one chapter. You might want to span it out over two or three chapters or not. It's really up to you how you see Nate and Eden progressing. I know it will not be smooth sailing though because Wendy and her husband are notorious haters. I love this story!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:31 am
Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Glad Curtis is dead. And Nate ex had something to do with it. 

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:20 am
Title: CAST

I can picture each person as the character they are portraying.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 01:28 am
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1990

I love it!! Another great tale from you. This chapter was good, you can kinda tell that they're starting to bond, all three of them. Can't wait to read more :-)

 Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 05:12 pm
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1990

I love that Nathaniel gave baby Solomon a nickname. I agree with Nathaniel about the circumcision, but If she is going to have the procedure done I hope she does it before he's 1 month. I'm watching the love blossom between Nathaniel and Eden, It's a content and honest kind of love forming. A no holds barred kind of romance, where he knows all her secrets and hurt's and she knows his. I think Wendy thought the grass was greener on the other side, but found out the grass was neglected, dry and brittle. I think walter is broke and they need Martin's baby furniture and clothes, because they can't afford another baby. I don't think Walter really loves Wendy he just wants to take something away from Nathaniel. Jealousy is a powerful emotion. Great update!!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 03:10 pm
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1990

I can't wait for Curtis and.what his face to get shot!!   Jail is too good for Curtis and Walter the inmates would just love. Wendy deserves to be alone, busted and disgusted!!  I want her homeless and in her children taken away from her!   She could go to the prison and have conjugal visits with Walter.  I really hate thise three characters! 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 12:44 pm
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Grea update. :-)

i have to agree with lajack! I hope someone asks Wendy and Walter why they are so into those baby clothes and furniture. Nothing wrong with second hand. Or if the crib was a handmade hierloom. But they strike me as Extremely spiteful, Wendy out of grief and Walter out of a longtime jealousy? I hope that Walter realizes that what his obsession had (ie Wendy) wasn't that great after all. 

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 07:47 am
Title: JANUARY 30TH 1990

He going to have to kill Curtis, but I hope not--bad thing to explain to Sol when he grows up.  I will settle for Nate beating him up ready bad, with Eden getting some kicks in, too.

I hope Eden gets stronger, bc that crazy ex-wife is going to go crazy on her when she finds out Sol's middle name.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 05:40 am


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