Reviews For Fever
Title: Chapter 2

Yasss!!! Get it Camille.  I say the more the merrier.  Why does a woman in a book only  have to have one man. Let her get her lovin' on.  I can't wait to see how Adam will handle her.  Whoooo, I need a shower from all of my imagining's.  LOL.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 07:36 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Things are happening pretty quickly!! I'm  curious to know if Adam and Sawyer will be sharing Camilla?  Inquiring minds want to know. 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 06:27 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I'm sorry to say this but...you might wanna check your lead character. I mean i don't know if this is supposed to end up being a ménage story (in which case I may understand your portrayal of her although i still not like it) but she just comes across as a sex-crazed slut who's attracted to basically anyone at this party. Not flattering at all.

Reviewer: Denise Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 05:54 pm

Title: Cast

Damn girl, perfect casting... And who is this Adam looking fine af.. Still waiting for that update. And don't apologize anyone with a brain knows this is a fictional story with FANTASIES. RL boy would of got fucked up putting his hands in a black woman's panties lmao. I love where your going, don't let anyone stop your creativity. 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 06:52 pm

Title: Cast

Love the casting! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Well alright,  what happened ti getting to know a person? Damn!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 04:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I don't know where Camilla is from, but it's illegal for somene to stick something where no consent was given no matter how handsome or gorgeous they are. Where are her friends? I thought was always a rule amongst females arrive together, check on each other, leave together. Maybe something was slipped in her drink or they've got some kind of scent or chemical pumping through the AC. I don't know, but I'm intrigued to see where you take this. 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Was that non-con? Oh, um, I guess. But just because there was a shooting in the US does not mean you have to spout all this about violence against BW. We know that. We're to escape all that. This a website with stories, fantasies, so please give the author a break.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 02:37 pm

Title: Cast

Great choices for the cast, all the men are YUMMY!!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 02:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Fever you got that right. This story gives me fever, because  it's so HOTT!. GOOD JOB! more please.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 02:11 pm

Title: Cast

interesting, its a good start! please continue!

Reviewer: lala Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 05:59 am

Title: Cast

Looking good!!!  I hope you know that pics was misspelled in my previous comment. Color me mortified. 😳 Anywho, love the cast! 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 05:41 am

Title: Cast

Ohhhh my Sawyer is yummy!!!!

Reviewer: Saylfo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 05:26 am

Title: Cast

Interesting start!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I hate to be a downer here, but I feel like I just read an account of sexual assault (made even worse by the fact that this is the apparent sexual assault of a black woman by two white men in the United States, given the sordid history of such things). There was no clear establishment of consent from Camilla throughout all this and this made me feel very icky/disturbed reading this story- a nonconsensual/rape/assault warning would definitely have been appreciated.... Nice writing style but I think I will pass on this one...

Reviewer: Eren Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm moving to Motana

Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

What the hell kinda party is this?!! What the hell kinda people attend said party?!!  Pis would be nice. I like it so far.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please Continue!!!!!!

Reviewer: janea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start, loving it so far. The warning of Threesome+ tells of good things to come. Was getting bored with all the one man-one woman stories.

  Nice to have something new and exciting to look forward to...and like Raptusmind said, we need an update ASAP

Reviewer: lannasage Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ok 1. These guys have no chill around Camilla 2. I hope this is not a love triangle 3. I'm hoping Camilla can have both men because first guy and sawyer sound hot as fuck. 4. UPDATE now now NOW!!!! 5. PLEASE 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 08:57 pm



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