Omg,omg,omg!! I love how Brandon is so strong, cool an d protective of Diya even against her parents .I knew this would be a shitshow, but I'm hoping for acceptance sometime in their relationship.  Gramps is hilarious! Anyway I need part 2, I think they are strong enough to withstand anything. Hopefully it won't be so bad for long!!

Wow!  The De la Roy’s most definitely showed up, and showed all the way out!!! 😆😖 I feel so bad for Diya in that she seems to have no real support from any of her family members. Even though some of them tried give the illusion of supporting her, I wouldn’t trust them any further than I could throw them!  Oddly, the only cool person was Paw-Paw, and that was generated from a lie. It’s crazy how people can accuse others of not being “worthy”, while they themselves spew negativity and hate (sounds a lot like the current state of our political atmosphere , but I digress).  William and Devaneesh are so busy looking down their noses, that they can’t see past it. They invited them to their house, and neither one of them greeted them during the visit. If I were Diya, I would be concerned with all the sneaky phone calls and why they are so intent on keeping them at the house. What’s really going on?  Devaneesh is the one that I would be most weary of. She seems to not care at all. I can’t imagine having that type of mother. At then end of the chapter, all I could think of was, “dum dum dum duuuum ... ruuuuuunnn!!!!”   What a cliffhanger!!!  I wonder what those papers are, and what they have in store now?  Phenomenal update! 🙏🏾♥a039;👍🏾👏🏾c4;🏾Just can’t wait for what comes next. I’m seriously nervous!! 😬 

Brandon was about to beat down Will...touching his Diya.  I can understand Will wanting the best for his daughter, but this man shows love via fear and intimdation.  

This family is so dsyfunctional: ruled by a grandmother living in another world, a mother and father blessed with riches, but still unable to hide their hatred.  i say run and run fast...never let your kids near them.  

Will has crumpled papers in his hand and took a phone call at dinner, before stepping out.  I am guesing he had Brandon investigated and now has proof of his racist family faxed to him.  Brandon suspects this, too.

I am glad Diya knows about them; Chandi chance to get back in sister's good graces...stand by them, because Papa Will is about to explode.  Wonder which side Willie D will choose?

Brillant to the tenth power!! That damn family of Diya need to stay out of her business, Brandon was so calm dealing with their rotten mannners. Diya needs to run from that toxic brand of family. Because if I was grab by my father, hell would break lose. That was not cool. Diya father is lucky his daughter was callm because Brandon would have been all over his ass. Joelle Jax you have made my evening. Thank you Bain

Ahh! the last line freaked me out! What the heck is Brandon hiding? Something definitely happened between Marisol and Brandon since Marisol is so disrespectful towards Diya like she believes she still has a chance with Brandon and Brandon does not want to be alone with Marisol like he's afraid she's gonna jump him or something. 

Those kids have such a hold on Brandon that he's kinda blinded but he's definitely not an idiot, he must know Marisol pulling shannaigans but it seems to all boil down to the kids. If Marisol didn't have children, Brandon most likely would have told her to feck off by now (Rafe's family or not) for disrespecting Diya but he loves her children and Marisol will always capitalize on it. 

I'm being totally pessimisitic but that family dinner is gonna be such a train wreak, I always felt like Brandon was being really naive about the Diya's family, like having the whole 'love will conquer all' mentality, I hope he's right but I think it's gonna be a strain on them especially with the add on of Brandon's secret.

Anyhoos, excited about the chapter even though I'm dreading what's going to happen. 

I love the way you write btw, it's poetry.

I'm at work- hiding out in the bathroom just to finish thus chapter! Sad but nonetheless true! Lol. So glad u posted.  Missed u lots!!!!!!

Had to reread the whole story as a refresher.  So glad I did. I've missed MY Branny too! Will give a better review later, however, I just had to get this off my chest....Marisol needs-tah-go!  I'm absolutely sick of her. And yes, I'm sick of Brandon's ever-present excuses for his 'friend' and DEFINITELY indulging that damsel at the expense of his beloved treasure that is Diya De La Roy!!!!

more later. Great job!

I’m not going to service the next month of waiting because that last line just dreaded me. My guess is that he is going to leave early because Marisol is DEFINITELY going to try something, or stir the pot and say the wrong thing about Di and he’s gunna shut her down sooooo quick. The girls too. 2/3 are gunna open their mouths about their feelings on it and accidentally snitch on their mother and allllll the curtains are gunna be pulled back

Thank you for the long and very good update.  Diya is not a hook up and Marisol knows this and instead of hounding Brandon, she needs to bring that disrespectful daughter in check. 

Is it my imagination...is Brandon scared to be alone with Marisol?  It would be dirty to ride in Diya's car and try to screw her man, too, but hey I'm sure it's been done before. 

Long past time to have a sit down with all three adults to let it be known that they are a couple and thirsty Marisol is not in the running for a threesome.

I have been WAITING for this! Thank you girl. I've missed this story and I ve been wondering what happened to my babies. Now that you're back I need Marisol to get slapped full force in the face. Please and thank you hehehe and thank yo again for such a wonderful chapter. Xxxxx

Please tell that Brandon is going to finally stop Marisol from disrespecting his girlfriend. It’s getting overly old. Two of her daughters are just rotten.

Wow ... Diya is a good one! I wonder what is she trying to prove?  Was Brandon right in his suspicions?  Especially after that intimate greeting between Brandon and Marisol. The crazy thing about it is that Brandon acts as if that’s the norm. Maybe it was before Diya came into that picture, but ... wow.  Would Brandon be ok with it if some dude greeted Diya that way?  Heeeyyyllll naw!! It’s so obvious that Marisol carries a torch for Brandon. No doubt in my mind after this last encounter. Again, think that Marisol uses the girls to maintain her hold over Brandon. She feels like she’s starting to lose that hold after he refused to come to her rescue when she felt that Oscar was going to come for the girls. 

Wow...I admire Diya being so unselfish in the midst of Marisol’s conniving to be with Brandon...I think she should trust Brandon as he is not as unaware of Marisol’s manipulation as maybe Diya thinks...but Brandon has to make Diya his choice above all else...if he can’t Diya has to let him go anyway...and Diya May be faced with a similar dilemma of choice after Bran meets her family...so brilliantly written as always...you are my favorite romance author...such talent...

Thank you so much for an updated chapter 😭😭😭😭 I didn’t know how long I would have to wait but I am so overwhelmed at receiving this gift of a chapter!! And Marisol FINALLY experienced being out in her place. YESSS but I know she’s gunna use the girls to turn them against di