Now that is cold blooded. How could you kill your wife? You were probably cheating already, how can you be mad at your own game?? Mow I'm really glad he killed that bastard!
Dont do that to me! I really thought the story was over. Lol. Good oneReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 04:14 am
Aww, he is going to marry her! I'm sure she just got pregnant, the way they just went at it. Lol. I hope he does come back. That would be soo sad.
Lady I'm just seeing this!!! wow where have I been!! Thanks girl for the love and reading my storiesReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 03:01 am
Wait?? So she was a sex slave to the father but the son loves her. And he plans to kill his father? For her? Okay, you have my attention. Lol
why am I just now seeing this review!!! shame on me!! so sorry girl!! I'm glad you read the story and it got your attention lol!!!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 02:33 am
Wow nice for a short story. Now go to go back and fix those grammar errors.
Thanks for reading. I'm happy you liked it..I will go back and clean it up but for now I'm just happy I was able to just put out a good story that was enjoyable and the readers liked. Just getting the vision from your head and hoping your readers feel the way you do I think is the hardest part... That's my focus right now just putting out stories . Grammar is not my strong front but I will conquer that down the road!!!Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 10:06 pm
Nice wrap up. Thanks!
Thank you!!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 12:04 am
Nic had to get rid of the trash, but at what cost to him and his soul? I hope he can reconcile what he's done. What has it done to him inside? Enjoyed this.
Thank you so much for reading the story!!!! I'm so happy you liked it...Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 08:30 am
ding ding dong that bastard father is dead! so happy that you decided to share this story - it was a great read, thank you!! look forward to more from you :)
Thank you so much for reading and I'm happy you enjoyed itReviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 08:39 am
Great story great end. Thank you!
Thank you for reading and I'm glad you like it!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:14 am
Didnt see that,his father really is nuts he was the one who killed his own wife & unborn child. Now he saying Nik isnt either. Deserved him getting his brains blown out. Who was the woman Nik had gagged & tied up; what is she to his father
Nik's father was never really one to begin with but he was Nik's father, the woman tied up with kostya less than day old wife lol Nik had to play all his cards with his crazy as hell father! Thank you for reading!!!Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 08:56 pm
Ding, done the evil mf is dead and at the hands of his son at that. Yippee skippy!!
I felt it had to end this way between father and son,no tricks or extra effects lol l. I'm so glad you liked it!!! Thank you for readingReviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 05:37 pm
I don't know why some children always try's to right their parents wrong. If the person made their bed then they needs to lie in it. I love the connection between Nick and Tiara. I hope Nick shows no mercy to his father.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2015 03:23 pm
Can't wait for more to be posted. Is it crazy that I'm already addicted to your story and it's only been three chapters?
wow i'm so thrilled you like it!! Thank you for reading!!! i'll post more as soon as i can!!Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2015 12:19 pm
The anatomy is a bit wierd. you need more paragraphing to make it easier to eead.
Thank you for taking the time out and reading!! i'm still new to this thing but i will work on it for sure, so readers can understand it better!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2015 08:09 am
What did Nic's father mean by, "like you did the others?" Has Nic got involved with his father's women before? I hope Nic's not a Captain Saveaho. It would diminish my view of him and their "love."
Thank you for keeping up and reading the story!! lol i knew someone would catch on to that all i can say is keep reading!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2015 05:56 am