Title: Chapter 3

Interesting story...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!! interesting is good i think lol!! more to come

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

love ! love love!!! keep it coming!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 3

i love it! need more of it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!! i'm glad you like it!! more to come!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 05:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the back story helps to know them a little better. Great job more please

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 11:57 am

Title: Chapter 2

Kostaya is evil, any man that his own chikd the way that he treats Nikolai is evil.  If he doesn't respect his chikd he will respect no one else.  Take him out Nick!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 11:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nikolai us my hero!!  Will we find out how Tiara git trapped into her existence as a human sex toy?  Is it her dedt ot her father's debt that she working off? I hope that Nick can save her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 11:38 am

Title: Chapter 2

Does he truly love her? The dynamics of this story are conflicting. I can't wait for the back story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 07:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Terribly confused. Tiara was one of the father's girls, but hooked up with the son.She slept with him at least once, then ran away? Was she a mistress or in a brothel? Or a "waitress" or dancer in oneof his clubs?

If she was a mistress or aworking girl, then someone will be coming for her/ them, right?

so many questions, but this IS definitely a promising start.



Author's Response:

Thank you first and foremost for taking the time out to read my story!!! i'm so happy and humbled!! There is more coming i promise and all will be revealed as each chapter comes forward! just keep reading!!! thank you again 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 07:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

More more please. Would like to know more of her history with Nik's father and how her & Nik came to be.

Author's Response:

More is to come i promise!! Thank you first and foremost for reading my naughty thoughts!!! i'm humbled

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 05:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

Well damn!!!! I like, more please.



Author's Response:

LOL!! thank you so much for taking the time to read my naughty thoughts!!! i'm humbled girl! thank you and keep reading more to come!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 1

Damn.



Author's Response:

Damn i like that!! LOL thank you for taking the time out to read my naughty thoughts!! i'm humbled! more to come!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Very good start.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my naughty thoughts!! i'm humbled!! i'm so happy you liked it!! more to come!! 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 12:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh Nick, it seems you're going to have to make major amends for the sins of your father to have your woman by your side. I'm liking this story so far and I can't wait to see where you take it next. Update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my naughty thoughts!! i'm so happy and humbled!!! more is to come i promise!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 12:13 am



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