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Title: THE TRIP 2

After reading this, I'm glad that Giselle didn't survive the crash. I know that's harsh but some people just don't deserve the God given grace they have. You're mad that she was getting praise for doing her damn job?! How about you worry less about getting some dick and being half naked and worry more about what the hell you came there to do. You have no right to talk about those people. They didn't ask for their living conditions, they are just trying to make the best of what they have. How dare you speak down to them, who made you God!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 06:05 am

Title: THE TRIP 1

This is going to be interesting. I can't stand people with privilege. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 05:39 am

Title: DAY 56

That's sad. For his mother to be all over Sterling the way she acts, she has no relationship with him at all. It's truly sad. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 05:30 am

Title: BACK AT HOME 6

This woman cannot be serious?! Is she really making wedding plans for a son who has no damn idea that his mother is trying to marry him off because this damn girl's family is wealthy? She is something else forreal. I hope that Mr. Sterling leaves her ass. She doesn't deserve a good husband like him. I feel bad for him and their son. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 05:20 am

Title: DAY 49

I'm glad that she if facing her insecurities. You can't hold onto those forever. I would have never thought that she was a virgin still, even with the Jason thing... So she never went there with anyone else? He seriously did a number on her. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 05:09 am

Title: DAY 45

Anika, girl. Stop being such a sour thumb. Get you some good cuddling while you on this island. You have no obligations to anybody back home on that level. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 04:49 am

Title: DAY 44

Wow... Progress!!! They kissed and he saw her skin (with her knowing it). This is turning out great. I just know they are going to be together. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 04:46 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

Oh crap, what a trip...karma is a Bitc-!!!!

Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 12:04 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

What an insensitive group of people! When Anika gets home she should find a job where she is appreciated.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2016 01:39 pm

Title: DAY 21

I'm glad you recognize that some parts are cheesy 😁, but I will move on to the next chapter. I like the the story but I will admit I do skip parts when it gets too cheesy.

Reviewer: Black girl Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 10:40 pm

Title: THE TRIP 3

Thanks for he update. Look forward to the new island sequences and the relationship to blossom.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 08:32 pm

Title: THE TRIP 3

Well I wonder how Corrine is going to feel when she learns that Hunter saved Anika instead of Giselle. Seriously fuck that bitch. I'm going to agree with lajack that Hunter always was attracted to Anika. Just look at the way he tries to get under her skin all the time.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 04:19 pm

Title: THE TRIP 3

Girl oh got me holding my breath in anticipation! Update soon!! 😁

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 06:45 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

I can't beleive that Hunter saved Anika.  Is it wrong to be happy yhat Giselle and wicked crew are deceased?  To be thrilled that they were probaby terrifed when they died? Good riddance to bad rubbish!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 06:35 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

That is absolutely the one thing I hate is that "angry black woman" theme everytime you attempt to assert yourself to keep from being run over.  It is purposely put in place in an attempt to keep you quiet.  Now you just have to be real slick and keep it calm while going off on people.  In my imagination I am going to pretend that Hunter knew it was Anika he saved vs that Giselle chick because Anika's body/hair etc doesn't feel like Giselle's.  I actually think subconsciously Hunter may have been attracted to Anika from the get go but with his mother's brainwashing was fighting it.  I don't know, that's my theory.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 05:36 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 02:36 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

Very, Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 12:14 am

Title: THE TRIP 3

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 10:19 pm

Title: THE TRIP 3

So Hunter was the one who saved Anika's life and he was not aware of it, divine intervention. Girl.. who says words don't have power, when Giselle said it wouldn't be a bad thing to leave someone behind ( meaning Anika ), then the accident happen and she's the one left  behind ( because she's dead ) that was KARMA!. MP I had a wonderful weekend with my beloved and you just put the icing on the cake, thanks honey for the updates.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 08:15 pm

Title: THE TRIP 2

I like how you added the back story of the other characters.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 07:34 am

Title: THE TRIP 2

I wonder if Anika realized she had more power over her co-workers then they had over her.  She could've reported the harassment but she was too afraid of losing her job.  Did Hunter have the authority to fire her?  It's understandable she was afraid and didn't want to cause trouble.  I bet if her grandmother knew she would've insisted that Anika file a complaint.

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 06:40 pm

Title: THE TRIP 2

This is one of the best stories!! I love reading about their relationship growing on the island, but I love seeing what their professional relationship was like too. Sterling, is the stereotypical spoiled brat momma's boy. Anika, bless her heart. She's just trying to do right by her family and those she is helping. I am so glad Giselle and her croonies met their fate. If she'd survived instead of Anika, Hunter and Giselle would be dead in two days instead of surviving all of these months with Anika. Great update.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 01:54 am

Title: THE TRIP 2

Love it. Keep going 😁

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 06:22 am

Title: THE TRIP 2

Anika has so much compassion. I love how she stop the little one from crying by giving him a sucker.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 02:00 am

Title: THE TRIP 1

Can Giselle be any more self centered? I adore Nana. Everyone needs a  Nana like that.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 01:33 am



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