Reviews For The Human Story
Title: Bağlılık

Woah! She did way better than I would have. What a spin. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2015 08:48 pm

Title: Failure and death

So Daniel died wich was really unfair,  as she has no clue  Kurt dows love her she was the only one that didn't see it.   Send her back, please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2015 11:07 am

Title: Bağlılık

Very nice beginning.



Author's Response:

Thanks bredreaway for reading!^^

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Date: September 28 2015 03:08 pm

Title: Nana

I love Nana! I can't wait for Kurt to give Daniel another chance.



Author's Response:

Thanks drea! I like her too. Let's see how it goes, shall we?^^

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 03:19 am

Title: Nana

I just have one question,  can you kill Adonia? That bitch makes my teeth itch!! 



Author's Response:

I have logged your request and will see what I can do. :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:47 pm

Title: Nana

Nana going off on Daniel was uncalled for, Daniel has been dragged into a fight that isn't her's.  Daniel is an American  sister who was probably a raised a Christian and these crazy people are talking about God's as in plural.  On top of that she is now possessed by Caninae.  WTF!  Nana you're too harsh on Daniel.  I am getting the impression that Dani isn't religious as she hasn't uttered one word of prayer.  Interesting? 

 



Author's Response:

Interesting observation! Yeah, so she doesn't seem to be religious, no. But then, when ones experiences are such, I think the idea of one almighty supreme being would be questioned. Or at least mainstream religion.

Thanks gayles!^^

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:43 pm

Title: Who I am

Hope Daniel is able to cope with these changes to her body and spirit. She seems broken and I hope she can recover. Hope she allows Kurt back in her life to give her some support. Interesting update.

Author's Response:

Yes, she is very down here. There is a lot to deal with as you say. Thanks for your thoughts baha!^^

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 11:15 pm

Title: Who I am

I don't know if I like Caninae.  She seems very dark and selfish because all she seems to care about is that she gets what she wants; she is not compassionate towards Daniel and the enormous changes she has made in her life.  I hope that they can coexist, but if not I hope that Daniel can overcome her presence.



Author's Response:

Good points all of them. In my imagination, demigods would be that way. They only have one function right? I wouldn't expect them to be multifaceted. But I don't know. We will see how Daniel does.

Thank you!^^

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 05:18 pm

Title: Who I am

Caninae is evil and I don't like her.  Caninae has hijacked Daniel's body and is forcing her into a world she has no knowledge.  Kurt has it bad!!  



Author's Response:

Come, come gayles, she is a demigod how else should she be? Haha! Kurt does have it bad I'm afraid...no actually I love it!

Thansks for reading!^^

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 01:04 pm

Title: Reprimand

I think this is a AU, because it's not complete fantasy. She and I would probably have the same reaction.



Author's Response:

I'm getting mixed reviews on this, but thanks for your opinion. I might change it. I appreciate you taking the time monsgors! ^^

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 07:52 am

Title: Bağlılık

Awesome chapter!  No she didn't overreact. Anyone would react that way, or in a similar way, if they found out that their body was being used as a vessel for a powerful being. Keep up the great work, this is becoming a wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

Hello kinky and thanks! Hopefully more excitement to come!^^

Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 04:21 am

Title: Reprimand

Sticky icky indeed.  No need to recategorize, the story feels like a fable of the Greek and Egyptians rolled into one. Me gusta mucho!!!



Author's Response:

¡Gracias! Thanks for reading the story humorme. I'm glad you are liking it so far. I almost put 'legend' or 'myth' in the tittle, but didn't...

Hope you continue to like it!^^

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 02:32 pm

Title: Reprimand

Mir is great in this chapter, Sevgili too. 

I think I would be pretty upset myself. Lover the enter action between Daniel and Kurt. Caninae sounds pretty awesome too.



Author's Response:

It's my goal that all the characters fall into place as she goes through the experience. The understanding that there is always more than meets the eye with people and that by getting to know them, they make more sense... At least I'd like that to come through.

Thanks Tara!^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 04:36 am

Title: Whispers on the wind

Seriously didn't see that coming. Another nice dreamish sequence.



Author's Response:

Thank you!^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 04:19 am

Title: Young wolf

I think Kurt is a smooth operator. It's nice to see them enjoying time together and Kurt open up. I love the way you describe things!



Author's Response:

I like the relationship as well. I try hard not to overwrite Kurt. Thank you!^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:57 am

Title: Faza

What goes on here? Intriguing. Faza is suspect. Loved the dream, so very surreal just like they can be, though there was more to this one I think.



Author's Response:

He very much is at this point, yes. The dream sequences are fun to write. Thank you for ou!^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:29 am

Title: Five hundred Lyra

Voda is cute. I like the way Daniel and Kurt interact. Your throwing us crumbs.



Author's Response:

But Tara, don't you like the build up?^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:20 am

Title: Let me spell it for you

Daniel is active. I love it! So, is this about the depiction on the door? Oh, and your vocabulary is entertaining.



Author's Response:

I like that about her too. You are right! It does center around the depiction, yes. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:06 am

Title: Bağlılık

What I like about this is your descriptions. They are really well thought out. You give enough for the imagination to take over and run.

I also like that your heroine doesn't conform to the normal type for this board. It's refreshing. I really enjoyed this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Tara! It would be nice to see more diversity, but the heart wants what it wants, no? Thank you for your encouragement!:)

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 02:51 am

Title: Reprimand

Interesting update! Daniel as a vessel for another being whose purpose for manifesting through her is not clear yet. Daniel's reaction is expected as she's trying to deal with this entity the takes over her body at will. Wonder what is the entity's relationship/association to Kurt & family?

Author's Response:

Thanks baha! Hopefully it will continue to get interesting as things unfold.^^

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 02:18 am

Title: Reprimand

She has every right to be upset, but had she kept her ass in America she wouldn't be in this situation.  Allow them to help you as they truly care about you.  Daniel will never be same and she won't be able to go home.



Author's Response:

LOL!! Ain't that the truth. Things have definitely changed drastically for her. How bizarre. Thanks for the laugh! ╥╥

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 12:41 am

Title: Whispers on the wind

Interesting update! Wonder what's going on with Daniel, her dreams and her possible physical changes?

Author's Response:

I think the next chapter will begin to reveal it. Thanks for sticking with! ^^

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 08:27 pm

Title: Whispers on the wind

Wow, Daniel is judgy, why?  This family has opened up their homes and lives to you so appreciate and don't insult. I d84; Kurtarici!!



Author's Response:

I prefer the term out of her element. Plus, me thinks she should be cautious, not that it will change anything... I love Kurt too! I have to be careful not to overwrite him.

Thank you gayles! ^^

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2015 06:51 pm

Title: Young wolf

Loved the update! Daniel and Kurt seem to bonding. Can't wait to see how this progresses.

Author's Response:

Thanks baha! May true love conquer all! ^^

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 02:47 am

Title: Bağlılık

I'm loving this story so much! I can't wait to read more...



Author's Response:

Thank you kinkyncurly, love that username by the way. :)

Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 01:34 am



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