Reviews For Lonely - Part 2
Title: Chapter 1

Hope you update soon because this series is EPIC! I love that it deals with so much and chronicles Jodi life in a way that explains why it is that she does everything that she does!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 28 2016 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

For a so called 42 years old she really acts immature

The sad thing in that story is that you got a plot, and a good one, but regarding your charecters you just stay at the surface. They have no depth, you could use this to create a great story full of knowledge and helpful to people who have been raped and the mental consequences.

The nymphomania can be one of them but ( and I read the  part I) this JODY has no moral how can she have sex with a guy no string attached or what and then flirt and kiss his brother. This is not nymphomania it is having no moral. What image of a black woman do you send to people !

She has a job , responsabilities, a good income , but she throws tantrums all the way for nothing. Impossible when you have that level of responsability and that trauma. You thrown tantrums all the time, or you don't; Except if she has split personalities and this is what I was talking about for the lack of depth for the characters.

 

Oh and sex is not just about blowjob, penetrations and pussy licking. People thinking that really miss what sex is really all bout: another form of communication and sharing. Your whole body can make you orgasm , not just the genital parts

 

Her attitude with the shrink is just tipycal.

What I really wanna say is work haerder doll, you could do such a great stuff with the storyline you have 

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 12:11 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I really like your story, cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2016 12:52 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Very happy you has return, I hope everything is well with you. Looking forward to the evolution of Jodi. She is finally waking up, and learning to love herself. Thank you Bain

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2016 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 4

I love this story and I am rooting for STEVE! I love me some him! Come back soon.

Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2016 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad that Jodi is in therapy, because a sister is tired of her stupidity.  Giving Beth advise on her relationship, really Jodi?  NOt to mention the bruising on her, is not helping her.  Jodi give Stephen a chance, he seems to have changed his modis operandi.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2015 12:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

I want to like Jodi, but she really needs to speak up and get help because all this avoiding the problem is getting on my nerves. She also needs to not succumb to sex so easily, like have some will power.

 

And wasn't Dan supposed to tell her about Kirk being in her house?

 

Hopefully in the chapters to come there is protest in every aspect of her life because all this bad luck is starting to get unrealistic. 

Ps. I think she tell her family about Kirk. 

Reviewer: Blue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Its not that I thought that Dr. Eason would be unethical or unprofessional and sleep with her.  I thought it more of Jody. Since in her mind, she thinks that that is the only thing she is good enough for. It may sound mean, but I just wouldn't be surprised if she in some ways tries to seduce him and get him to sleep with her. Like how she kept emphasizing how "too good looking" the doctor is.  Hopefully her sessions with Dr Eason will start to help her get some of her self worth and self respect back, because as of now she doesn't have any.

Reviewer: lily Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2015 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I didn't think at all, I loved how he read her and pushed all of Jodi's buttons.  Now maybe she can truly be healed.  Why doesn't  she trust woman?  Who specifically was the woman betrayed her?  Eric loves her she never trusted him enough to tell him what Kirk was doing to her. Jodi you do stupid things because you have no sense of self-worth.  Until you find value in yourself you will have love!!  Bravo Jodi, you are seeking help for yourself. I want Eric to whoop Kirk like Ali whooped Liston if Kirk is still breathing. 



Author's Response:

Read chapter 70 of "Lonely" to see how some of the treatment Jodi suffered from females. Are you referring to her brother Eddie when you said Eric? Thanks for your comments, PMGayles! I can always count on you! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2015 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

I had mixed feelings about the 1st book in the series and now I'm even more concerned. Please don't make her sleep with the doctor or add him as an add on to her and Steve. I noticed it now says 3 some on description. Thanks for the advanced warning, please let me know if this book is going to have it. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I really hope she won't end up sleeping with this new doctor as well.  Hopefully in this sequel we will finally see some progress from Jody .



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment !

Reviewer: Msmissy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

At the beginning, I was like 'what the hell! When did Jodi have Steve's baby?!' LOL 

The 2nd workout was freakin HOT! I hope Jodi opens up to Steve and let him know what's going on despite her fears. I think Steve wants to be in a fully committed relationship with Jodi and is willing to do what it takes to keep her. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks, Sheyahne!

Reviewer: sheyahne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

Supreb!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bain!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

I was a lil confused because I thought she had gave Steve the boot in the last chapters. I wonder why she agreed to go back to a sexual relationship with him. I thought maybe she would still take some time for herself. I am curious to see where this story will lead.



Author's Response:

Hello, Dallas5star! Please go back to Lonely and review the last chapter. It will refresh your memory :)

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 02:10 am

Title: Lonely Cast

Steve is smoking hot.....love this story.



Author's Response:

He truly is...I am so happy that you are enjoying the story, thanks! :)

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 01:54 am

Title: Lonely Cast

Yes Lord!! Eddie is fine!!!!  Steve is fine as well.



Author's Response:

Hello, PMGayles! Great to hear from you! Yes, those men are indeed fine!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

I admit I thought they were doing the doo!!  I am glad to see that that she is going to therapy. Steve is now treating her better than any man ever has except for Craig. I think his name was Craig.  You are off to a great start!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! I thought ppl  would think that or she was in a delivery room! LOL!

Yes, you have a great memory - it was Craig. He will be on the scene soon.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 12:25 am



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