Reviews For Transcendence
Title: You

Gah I just love Hiroto-kun. Just he reminds me of the second male lead in Korean dramas. The ones you just want to root for and hope they get the girl. Hiroto knows that he messed and he is willing to give his all to her but he knows that he has to earn his way back into her heart. This story just gives me so many feels!! It was fabulous as always.

Reviewer: Valentine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 01:15 am

Title: Found

Wonderful update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 12:21 am

Title: Conclusion

Wonderful update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 03:55 pm

Title: Search

Fantastic update 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 03:46 pm

Title: Conclusion

I really can't stand her adopted family!!   Why are they so against Roto?  He helped her survive being away from them and their hating.  Rae is still in so much pain, that should tell her she isn't over her first love.  Kwa was told to get to stepping,  it is about damn time!!  Thank you for the wonderful updates DL.  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 02:21 am

Title: Search

Awesome sauce!! Roto is in New York and ready to find his lady!!  Still wondering why he is bringing Hoa with him to America?   Kentaro is fine!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 02:00 am

Title: Search

Finally he's here!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 01:24 am

Title: Search

😄 I can't wait until Rae sees Hirito !!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 11:46 pm

Title: That Boy

Great update but I thought he agreed to marriage and a child? 10 yrs later and nothing? So he gave up Rae for $$, his inheritance?? Has he not had sex with Kiko? 10yrs?? Ok I'm on to Ch 3. Good job!! 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 06:38 pm

Title: That Girl

I'm glad you're continuing this story.  Very excited to see where u go with this. Hope you're feeling well too.  Ok I'm on to chapter 2...yay!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 04:35 pm

Title: The Past

Yes!!!! I can't wait until they see each other for the first time in 10 years, Rae let your heart guide you to your lifetime, like I always like to say people comes into our lives for a reason, some for a season and some for a lifetime and Hiroto is Rae's lifetime. Thanks for the update D&L

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 03:30 pm

Title: The Past

You keep torturing us! Hiroto needs to make his move...Kwasame was all kinds of wrong for taking her ring and throwing it away...in doing so Rae was objectified instead of treated like a partner in the relationship...and Antonio ain't slick...he still wants Rae but she belongs to Hiroto..gurl, you know how to bring the angst with this story...love it!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 02:36 pm

Title: The Past

Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 07:13 am

Title: The Past

When they meet, it will be a pleasure to see you weave their interaction. Your mind is like a trap. I fall beautifully each time. Ps yes I'm that girl that had to google what Trap Queen meant lol, similar but different context here lol

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 04:51 am

Title: The Past

How long has Roto been in New York?  Has Rae officially kicked Kwa to the kwurb?  Will Rae punk out at the gala and not stay to run into her baby Roto??   My mind is all over that first teaser,  is this where Roto confronts her?  Does Rae leave this event and Roto follows her??  Snap, crackle, pop, this good!!

Please tell me that Roto's leaving Japan caused his incubator to die a tragically by a knife wound to her none existent heart? That said knife was attached to Roto's hand,  just saying... As no one but her husband and Hoa would miss her.  His father is such a punk, ass bitch and I can't wait for them to pay.  Payback is a bitch!!!!!

Thank you once again DL, you are splendiferous!!!!!  SMARVELOUS EVEN!!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 04:50 am

Title: introduction

10 years... That's a long time I hope when they meet up Rae doesn't just stop the world for this man I love roto but he a goofy and I hope Rae makes him fight hard for another chance and is Aiko still a factor at all? I don't wish harm on nobody but God don't like ugly and that lil crustation that is roto mama finally got what was coming to her I hope she lives to see roto have lil chcolate babies with Rae then she can die of shock.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 03:41 am

Title: Black Coffee

Okay, I can understand his sentiments but I don't like how he took it off her finger while she slept.  That's sneaky maneuvers to me.  I felt he should have stated how he felt first and then asked her to remove it because of how it made him feel and let that be her decision.  It seems like he made it for her and then kinda guilted her into keeping it off versus her coming to that decision.  She has to close that chapter, no one can do it for her.  I hope she puts it back on and tell him, I will take it off when I feel ready and then see how he reacts.  I'm all for testing someone and waiting for an honest response.  

Was it me but some spidey senses were tingling when her sister was talking about her boyfriend.  I'll wait and see what you will write.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 01:37 am

Title: Black Coffee

You never throw out someone's tooth brush without immediately replacing it. Fishy I tell you, something's off with ol' boy. Your forgivin btw D&L 😊



Author's Response:

EGGGGGGG XACTLYYYYYYYY. Ion know either we see bout hims. YASSSSSSS *dances* <3

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 05:53 am

Title: Black Coffee

Amazing chapter as always! But I get where Kwasame is coming from. Anyone would be upset if the person you were with was still clinging to an old relationship. But the thing about saying she's his is just a little museon (scary). I'd keep my eye on him. 



Author's Response:

Hi Lady V! Thank you for the kind words and support! <3 :D To be honest, I do too. I totally get where he's coming from. The woman you with still holdin on to a relationship that both ended badly AND deeply affected her. And she still wearing HIS stuff around you... I get it. BUT, the way he went about it... was NOT. COOL. AT. ALL. And the whole rant about you don't belong to him, you're mine mine mine thing. *eye roll* Yeah, we see *sucks teeth*

Reviewer: Valentine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 04:52 am

Title: Black Coffee

I don't trust Kwasame, I think he may be dangerous he very possessive. How dare he take her ring off her finger.  I don't like the fact that he threw her toothbrush away, like she is just a casual guest in his house and not his suppose girlfriend. I'm keeping my eyes on him. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

!!!! T.H.I.SS. That toothbrush thing was a loud big red flag. Bruh what? And then the reason he threw it out was not excusable. You're welcome!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 01:56 am

Title: Black Coffee

Kwasame, is just the place holder for Roto.  I am glad that Rae put her father in his place, they were for abandoning her. Just like her biological mother did. Yeah, I still don't  like her parents! !  I am not feeling Kwa, I'm side eyeing that mofo! !  My spidey sense is tingling!!!



Author's Response:

hahahhahahahahahaha place holder!!!! *DONEEEEE* Yes she had to cause Poppa Doc musta forgot lol! MOFO!!! I AM CRYING. YOU Ms. Gayles ARE THE MVPPPPPPP. <3

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 01:40 am

Title: Black Coffee

Kwasame is physically beautiful but Rae belongs to Hiroto...they both made mistakes and let cultural practices dictate their lives instead of being true to who they are...I hope in time they will rectify their mistake...Rae and Hiroto 4-ever!



Author's Response:

Yes he is oh so beautiful but that alone is not enough. Rae and Hiroto have always belonged to each other and always will, no matter what through time and space they shall remain each others. They were young and didn't think things through... let pressures get them both. But now as adults.. they need to be honest about what it is they want and go for it. Life is too short to remain unhappy! Once you taste true love, you can't let it go in their case. 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 01:32 am

Title: characters*

Antonio Rossi, Nakamura Tobu, Tre Marshall, and Kwasame Jones are HOTT!!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehe yes they areeee woooooooo!!!!!! I wanted to find a man to be like a supa upgrade even though in my opinion Kentaro (who is Roto) is really freaking fine too lol. But like I needed my girl to get her a upgradeeeeeee. lol. Adonis is so it. Like he is just black silky smooth fine. Don't get me started on Antonio and Tobu lol. Tre too! He is beautiful man...

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 09:49 pm

Title: characters*

Yippee chapte 3!!! Can't wait!! Love the cast!!



Author's Response:

hehehe thank you Ms. Gayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 09:33 pm

Title: characters*

Wonderful pics



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 09:30 pm



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