Reviews For Transcendence
Title: Everything Above

Awww. Damn, what an roller coaster of a chapter. First they arrive in Japan (which was like a sigh of relief for me), then Roto does Rae's hair (which was adorbs!), then they talk about Rae's past pregnancy (which was sad, though I appreciate it. Way to answer my question from the last chapter in the best possible way: by making it a part of the story!), then that...ugh, IDK what to call that person that birthed Roto, IT called and will probably cause trouble for them sometime soon unfortunately, then things ended with Rae and Roto getting back on the pathway to love! lol. This was such a good chapter.

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 02:40 pm

Title: Everything Above

Another beautiful chapter!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 06:59 am

Title: Everything Above

I love this couple, Rae and Roto are perfect for each other.  THEy each give each other the love that neither of them experience while growing up.  They will make phenomenal parents.  I want Eri to suffer in silence while Rae and Roto live and love out loud.    Thank you for the update DarkandLovely!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 02:55 am

Title: Blue Wine

This story is one of my favorite's. I feel as though i'm going along for this ride too. Bring on Japan!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 04:21 pm

Title: Blue Wine

Yes!!! what goes around comes around. I'm so happy Peter got his ( doing a little happy dance!! ). Girl, yes! bring on the fun in Japan. Oh wait! didn't his fiancé go back to Japan also? I hope there is no more drama for Rae. Our girl Rae got paid!! Thanks D&L for this wonderful update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 02:37 pm

Title: Blue Wine

Fantastic update.  Thank you for sharing your gift

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2016 11:00 pm

Title: Blue Wine

Excellent love story...the love between Rae and Roto is beautifully spiritual...a true connection was formed and made believable with your prose...you do what few are capable of doing...bravo...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2016 10:11 pm

Title: Blue Wine

I loved this chapter for so many reasons, the main one being Peter finally got what he deserves. I hope that his everyday existence in prison equally horrendous. Prisons are not good places for those who harm children.  Rae and Roto have come full circle although she seems to be scared to take that final leap with Roto.  Roto has loved you for years Rae, he moved to America to get you back. No one in your life had ever sacrificed so much for you, get over your fear.  Rae does not need to give up her US citizenship to live and work in Japan.  Also Rae's marrying Roto wouldn'the require her give her US citzenship. Although we all know that she probably won't come back that often. Tre and Aimee are Rae's anchors and she won't want to completely several her home connections. Are Tony and Peter in the same prison?  They should be roomies.  So good DL!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2016 10:46 am

Title: introduction

I just finished re-reading the story (just because lol), and I noticed that in addition to your chapter titles being perfect choices for each of the chapters, all of the titles could even work as titles for a story! That just proves what a creative and dedicated writer you are. I'm SO looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 01:08 pm

Title: Bonnie and Clyde

Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 08:04 pm

Title: Bonnie and Clyde

Atmikha is a very beautiful woman with a big heart and gentle spirit ( I like her ). She's just what Rae needs in her life. I'm a firm believer that some people needs to be dealt with and Peter, Rossi, Kendrick and Shaundra needs to be dealt with real quick!!. I hope Rae doesn't let the actions of others stop her love for Tre and Amee. Hiroto and Rae will find peace soon. Thanks for the update D&L

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 06:36 pm

Title: Bonnie and Clyde

Such evilness and depravity has followed a Rae all of her life.  She was never truly loved until she met Roto.  I want all of those sap suckers dead, especially Pete as he is just too powered would hurt Rae from jail.  Shaundra and Kendrick need to prepare to meet Satan as when they die they will going straight to hell. By passing the hell out of limbo.  Something needs to happen to Erica as well, don't trust that heifer. Tre and Amee are a okay in my book, just don't call them Roto.  So good and so worth the wait.  Don't forget to kill Antonio and make it gruesome!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 03:27 pm

Title: Bonnie and Clyde

Such a good love story...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 02:19 pm

Title: Dense Blue

please, please, please update soon! I have to know what happens to Lugiano and Rossi, and of course I have to know how Rae is doing after thankfully getting out of there.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 03:29 am

Title: Dense Blue

So good! Hiroto is always there for her and I love that!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 08:06 pm

Title: Dense Blue

Roto came to the rescue.  They each need to deal with their own demons, Hoa for him and Rae's so called adopted parents and thst heifer Erica. Amee and Tre can stay around.  Hoa makes my teeth itch!!



Author's Response:

I agree Ms. Gayles! Once they get them out the way, it's smooth sailin. <3 Yes Noa need to gon somewhere. lol. 

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 03:31 pm

Title: Dense Blue

I hope when Rae gets better that she confronts Shaundra and Kendrick, and release them out of her life for good. I'm glad James was there for her, he was her guardian angel past and present. Until Peter and Rossi are captured Hiroto needs to take Rae far away. Thanks for reposting D&L.



Author's Response:

You're welcome Ms. J! <3 Yes Rae gon confront both of them! What they have done cannot and will not be excused! I agree! 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 01:30 pm

Title: Promise

DL honey I thought there were a chapter called " Land " I didn't see it. I'm glad Rae have two people in her corner who cares about her and who would fight many wars to have her back with them. Peter and Rossi needs to be locked up.



Author's Response:

Ms. J Thank you!!! You're right!!! I'll upload that one again too! <3 I appreciate it!! Yes they both need to be behind bars. I got somethin for each of them!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 01:21 pm

Title: Waves

It is a really good chapter. I think Hiroto will have to save her, she's his world. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2016 01:49 pm

Title: Waves

It is a really good chapter. I think Hiroto will have to save her, she's his world. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2016 01:49 pm

Title: Waves

GURL WHAT HAPPENED ???? LORD I THOUGHT ROTO WOULDA YANKED HER UP BUT NAHHHHH OHHHHH DONT LEAVE A SISTER HANGING

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 16 2016 02:36 am

Title: Waves

Why you always do this to me... We get so close then you gotta try to kill my babies.... Poor Rae just ain't never gonna like water. She has damn near drown like 3 times. but ROTO he's such a sweetie going over with her. Can't wait until you update.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2016 01:11 am

Title: Waves

WTH?!?!  Is one of them having a dream) 😨😱

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 10:59 pm

Title: Waves

Roto send Hoa back to Japan on the fastest thing smoking, that heifer is trying to mess up your blessings.  And Rae is your blessing that God created especially for you.  I love how they have grown, they are so good together.  I do hope that Rae's playing didn't end with them either being hurt to bad.  Thank you so much for the update, it was enjoyable as usual.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 09:40 pm

Title: Waves

That was beautiful!! I think the sex is about to happen. I love how they are growing with each other, they have to let each other be themselves. That no holds barred kind of love, that I feel what you feel kind of love. Thanks for this update D&L

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 07:03 pm



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