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Title: Step in the Right Direction

i LOVED this update! I feel that Willow's reaction is more than realistic. She still loves Sebastian, but it's going to take a hell of a lot more than his mean ass stroke game for her to forgive him. However some good old hot sex is a good step in the right direction!

 Reviewer: Chapter 21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07 2017 06:41 am
Title: Step in the Right Direction

Screeeeeaminggggg!!! Love these two so much!! Is there going to be an update every Sunday then!? aghhhh great chapter!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 10:20 pm
Title: Far, Far Away

omg I'm sooo happy you love Willow and Sebastian! I'd wait years for an update on this story! I never want it to end

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 09:58 pm
Title: Step in the Right Direction

BEST STORY OF ALL TIMES !!!!!!!!

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2017 12:10 pm
Title: Step in the Right Direction

Ok first of all, thank you so much for this update. 

And, I am really obsessed with this story. 

There is something beautiful between the two of them. I used to think that Willow needed him to save her from her low selfestime but she's also like a therapy for him. 

I'm curious to see how and when she will forgive him (maybe never). But it is up to you Miss. 

By the way, you made my week. Really needed this !!

 Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 02:36 pm
Title: Step in the Right Direction

Great update I cant wait to see what happens next. I think that Willow's reaction is realistic. She loves Sebastian but can't accept what he's done. But whatever you take this story is your choice. If you want to keep us waiting and hoping it is in your hand. I just hope she can realize that Sebastian is great for her.

 Reviewer: Panthre Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 06:50 am
Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Willow's reaction is very realistic. That is one of the biggest draws that I have with this story. You have woven a beautiful tale of darkness, sensuality and realism. I love it.

 Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 02:20 am
Title: Step in the Right Direction

I know willow hasn't forgive him yet. He got a lot of work to do because she always second guessing herself. Love this story

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 11:44 pm
Title: Step in the Right Direction

My girl gave in and I don't blame her one bit LOL! hey... you have to get in, where you fit in. Thanks MJ you put out two amazing updates, I'm glad you have your inspiration back!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 05:26 pm
Title: Far, Far Away

Some parts of Brazil is so breathtaking and it seems he found the perfect spot. Sometimes you need a change of scenery to regroup and reconnect. Sebastian is during all the things in his power to get his woman back, but Willow is not going to make it easy for him ( stand your ground willow, and making him work! ) I hope she has the will power, because Sebastian is sex on a stick LOL!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 05:21 pm
Title: Step in the Right Direction

Damn...

 Reviewer: Janez91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 05:14 pm
Title: Step in the Right Direction

i don't think Willow is frustrating, simply being realistic. How many people can be with someone who killed another in cold blood, even if that person was viled and probably deserved it, especially if it was done on their behalf?

She'll probably blame the alcohol and be a little difficult for awhile. I would really her like to realize that she is not responsible for Simon's death. She had no clue about Sebastian's intentions. The reality however, is that she will always bear that burden and so will Sebastian.

What Willow will have to do in order to move on is accept what has happened and the fact that she can't change it. However, if she wants to with him, accept what he has done, that he never meant to hurt her intentionally. She can never change what he did nor who he was/is, but love him and let him love her, in spite of it.

 Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 12:46 pm
Title: Far, Far Away

Hot update!  I can't wait to see what Sebastian has in store for winning Willow over, but I  must say, he's off to a good start. But damn, he pulled a 1st degree ... I'm not quite sure what/ how he can redeem himself from that and earn her trust again. I so can't wait to see where this is going!  Love it!  Thanks for the update! d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;!!! 😁

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 10:14 am
Title: Far, Far Away

Willow Sebastian loves,  he proved his love to when he killed  that cruel sap sucker Simon.  However, his murder is not your fault the fault is entirely Sebastian's.  She is blaming him for the guilt that she feels and for not telling the authorities what she knows.  The guilt you feel is all yours WIllow, either forgive Seb or report what you know to the police.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 01:23 am
Title: Far, Far Away

Such a good story....

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2017 10:57 pm
Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

I'm in love with this story. Please update soon. Please!!

 Reviewer: twolyse Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2017 04:16 am
Title: Self Destruct

thanks for the update

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 08:43 pm
Title: Self Destruct

I love this story so much!!😍d84;d84; Update soon please 

 Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2017 03:03 pm
Title: Self Destruct

Whew, girl, please, please, please update 😜😜😜😤😤

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 10:26 pm
Title: Self Destruct

Omg, plz update. I'm loving this, trying to figure out what I'd do in her place....go absolutely crazy!

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Date: November 02 2016 11:39 pm
Title: Oh, Where; Oh, Where!

Omg!  I'm totally sucked into this fabulous story.... love it!

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Date: November 02 2016 10:44 pm
Title: Self Destruct

Obsessed with this story 😩

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 12:22 am
Title: Self Destruct

Poor Willow, when you love someone you usually love them so hard and that Is how Sebastian loves willow. But in Willow's defense you can still love the person, but hate the sin. I hope it gets better for them. Thanks for this update MJ.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 04:30 pm
Title: Self Destruct

Willow is really caught in a bad place! It's going to be tough deciding what to do about her situation. Good luck.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 05 2016 12:56 am
Title: Self Destruct

I loved this chapter. It seemed so real. It's all the emotions that any person would feel after learning those kinds of things about the one you love. Personally, I don't think you have to explain yourself to anyone, it's your story. I can see why you did it but you're the one writing this so go wherever your muse takes you. I'm enjoying the ride. LOl. I wonder where he takes her? She really needs to figure out if she's going to accept his life or not.. Until then, she won't be able to heal from anything and it will continue to eat her alive. Hopefully she can move on from this. 

Update soon. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 05:52 am


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