Reviews For IZZY'S CRAYON BOX
Title: PROTECT

MP!MP!MP! Girl...What kind of mother that is that doesn't know her childs birthday, you carry this baby around for 9 months giving up your body so they can have a chance to live, and you don't remember the first day they breathe outside of your womb SCANDALOUS!!!! I'm so happy!! Regina will be living her life for now in a jail cell. I know that Luc is happy and relieved that Izzy will be protected and truly loved and cared for. With Regina it's seems the apple didn't fall to far from the tree's ( her mother and grandmother ). I believe Izzy will grow and prosper in life because of her father. I'm glad that Kenya had Luc to lean on and that she wasn't alone. I can't wait until she realize that Luc, Izzy and his family are there for her. Thanks MP for this update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 05:27 pm

Title: PROTECT

The fact that Regina admitted that information on the stand shows just how mentally stumped she is.  She doesn't see it as being so wrong.  I'm sorry honey but you are not the example of a black woman that Izzy needs.  She needs better examples and Luc is going to have to explain that what her mom did is completely wrong, morally and legally and she has to wait some time before seeing her mom.  She can write a journal for her mother to share in the future, so she has an outlet for missing her mom.  I hope they don't start a relationship right now.  I think she needs time to grieve her aunt and I'm not sure if she should still be Izzy's counselor if they start dating.  This could be confusing for Izzy as well because of her mom.  Excellent story and I hope Regina is found guilty.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 03:13 pm

Title: PROTECT

"A mother makes sacrifices." Of HERSELF, not her child! Fine time to be thinking about how society will treat Izzie when you've done worse than a millenial alt-right grease stain ever could. And only a POS parent doesn't remember their child's birthday - especially a child they raised and claim to 'love'. Ugh! Well, she's heading for jail (FINALLY!) and I doubt the women in women's prison like mother's who pimp their children. Good luck, Regina!

I'm glad Kenya had Luc as moral support at her real mother's funeral, and that she didn't have to deal with her trash incubator at all. Here's to more happiness for her and Izzie.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 03:39 am

Title: PROTECT

My heart was happy when the bailiff put hand cuffs on Regina, that evil vile heifer!  What the hell did Luc ever see in her? Izzy still loves her incubator but the child is better off without her donor in her life.  Regina didn't even know how old Izzy was, Really?  I can't stand a dumb ho and Regina suffered from generational stupidity passed from her grandmother to her mother then to her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 12:42 am

Title: I'LL BE THERE

great update

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 02:33 am

Title: I'LL BE THERE

Interesting. Wonder why Kenya asked Luc?

Kenya, girl, you need to stop with what you wished was true in regards to the beast who birthed you and deal with the reality of who that monster is. She is toxic. Why are you surprised at her reaction to her sister's death.

Good update. Thanks.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 12:59 am

Title: I'LL BE THERE

So Bernadette has no care for her sister, but she expects to be in the woman's will? If this doesn't make it clear to Kenya that her 'mother' is unflushed feces, nothing will. Stop trying to be a daughter to that woman when she was never a mother to you.

 

Glad Luc will be with her to lay her only real family to rest.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 12:36 am

Title: I'LL BE THERE

Yes, Kenya reached to Luc and he is going to the funeral with her.  Bernie is a bitch who deserve a thing of her sister's estate.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 09:02 pm

Title: I'LL BE THERE

Through the eye's and mouth's of babes, Izzy helped Kenya to find peace, because we all know that mother of Kenya is a snake and the devil reincarnated ( I hope there is nothing left to her in the will ). Oh how I love myself some Luciano, that's a Italian man for you, they always put the needs of the people they care about before their own. I should know because I have a special Italian man at home with me everyday. I'm happy Kenya will have someone there to lean on. Kenya, Izzy and Luciano really need each other. Thanks for this update MP.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 03:46 pm

Title: I'LL BE THERE

Wondeful update...Please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 05:16 am

Title: SAD AND LONELY

This is an awesome read.  I must admit that this is a heart ranching situation.  Especially when it comes to Izzy's mom who is not a mother at all only a womb.  I hope that when she goes to jail they show her what its meant to be held down with no way or hopes of being let go.  oh my GOD for her to hold her baby down and  drug her so a non human can rape her I want them to make her feel all the pain Izzy feels, feel how the nightmares terrify her...... In other wordsbinwant her tonwalk a mile in Izzy's shoes.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2016 03:32 am

Title: SAD AND LONELY

I dislike Regina more and more,Why is she not in jail too. She put her child in harms way, isn't that child abuse?. Children love their parents with all there hearts, even though some parents like Regina doesn't deserve their love. I hope Luc gets full custody of Izzy and Regina gets a few years in prison. My heart goes out to Kenya, she's probably feeling alone in the world, because we know her mother is no good for her. I think Luc, Izzy and Kenya needs each other in order to surive. Thanks for this update MP.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 02:02 pm

Title: SAD AND LONELY

Ok, one question - WHY isn't Regina in jail as an accessory or something? She dolled her poor child up and locked her in the room with a man she knew 'loved' children (hell, she probably sought him out on Backpage or some other seedy site). She later drugged her to make the little girl more compliant to being raped. She pimped Izzy out just as a sleeze-bag street pimp or sex trafficker would. WHY is she not in jail?!

The more I learn about Regina, the more I suspect that she and Luciano had nothing in common outside of sex. Wouldn't shock me if she had gotten pregnant on purpose and Luc married her out of decency.

As for poor Kenya, it breaks my haunt that the only family who gave a damn about her is gone. Part of me hopes her gestational carrier will stay away from teh funeral whereas another part of me homes Kenya tears her several new ones and shames her in public if she dares to show her carcass.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 01:03 am

Title: SAD AND LONELY

Good update.

I so hope that Bernadette never gets her hands on Izzy, but I fear she might. Poor Izzy, the natural tendency is to want to be with your mother, but she is too young to understand that this person is not the one that has her best interest at heart. Luc will have to protect her at all costs. Kenya might be able to provide Luc with some perspective regarding what Izzy is going through. I mean, at her age, Kenya is STILL having contact with the viper.

So sad for Kenya. Will that viper cause havoc at the funeral? Oh, man. I hope that Kenya stops all commincations with this slimey witch.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 04:22 am

Title: SAD AND LONELY

Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 03:18 am

Title: SAD AND LONELY

Regina makes me sick! I had foster mother's just like her in my past. I thank God everyday for bringing my mama J into my life. This woman loves me like she gave birth to me, and i feel her love all the way in my soul, that's a true mother's love, not what Regina is trying to portray to Izzy. I hate that Kenya aunt died, she was the only true person Kenya had in her life. A person always remember a person who treated them special, like my mom. My dad surprised her with a trip to Hawaii, she would be back Sunday, I know this is one of your stories we talk about all the time, when she gets back i know your stories will be the first one she reads. I love this update.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 02:25 am

Title: SAD AND LONELY

Kenya lost her momma Phyllis, her incubator needs to suffer and feel pain.  Poor Izzy, Regina still won't admit her part in Izzy's abuse.  Why isn't she sitting in a jail cell?  I am wait for Regina to get shanked!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 09:26 pm

Title: HIS HEART II

Please update soon

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 05:37 am

Title: HIS HEART II

Aww auntie is going to die. I hope she gets close with Luc before then because she is going to need someone.

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2016 03:40 am

Title: HIS HEART II

"the only reason Kenya felt obligated to talk to Bernadette was because she carried her for nine months."

And that is ALL she did. The animal kingdom treat their young better than this b.

Luc, Regina is NOT a parent.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 08:51 pm

Title: HIS HEART II

So....can we throw Bernadette and Regina in a slow-roastin over or something? Pretty please?

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 02:44 pm

Title: HIS HEART II

Ihad to read the last chapter  again, what the hell did Luc ever see in Regina?  She wS never meant to be a parent as that ho is psychotic!  That flashback showed her true feelings about Izzy , there was no love there. How long after that scene did they get divorced? 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 02:21 pm

Title: HIS HEART II

Kenya's incubator is evil and crazy!!  Really, you allowed your husband and her father to repeatedly rape her and she is just suppose to get over that?  Regina that heifer needs to get shanked.  Was she picked up on her warrant? 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 02:32 am

Title: HIS HEART II

Love reading your stories. Please update soon. I hope mojo comes back soon so you can update A Child Called Soloman. I would not like to see that story goes to waste. Can I make a suggestion, you can always revise the story with a different plot.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 02:23 am

Title: HIS HEART II

OoooOOOoooh! Miss Clark and Mr. Salvatore sitting at a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g. LMAO! I am so happy the Luc knock the living daylights out of him with no name. If I was that neighbor, I wouldn't even call the cops. Poor Kenya, she hasn't quite healed from her tragedy either...yea because of what her father did to her but it's her mother who is not even acknowledging and take responsibility for not protecting her own daughter but having a sister to take Kenya as her own. Like I always say, you may carry a child for nine months but that doesn't make you a mother. Is how you care for the child 24/7 is what makes you a mother. I mean I could carry a child for nine months and not even care about the child's well-being while my sister takes care of my child by doing what real mothers do and that makes my sister a true mother of my child, but all in all...I don't have one and if I did have one I would never harm my child by no means and mothers that do that should never have one or get pregnant at all because there are women who wants a baby but couldn't have one and mother's like Regina makes me sick because they can give birth but women who could not give birth can't.

Great chapter as always. I hope Luc gets full custody of Izzy, and I hope that Kenya gets the healing that she deserves.

Reviewer: luvrayne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 09:21 pm



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