Reviews For IZZY'S CRAYON BOX
Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Chileeeeeeeee.... I hate when you make these stories on this damn site because girl they be too good!!!!! Do you hear me? TOO GOOD. But this right just... Man girl you get me hooked on one story after the other. But let me get to this story. You written it so well damnit. Clever title I must say. I damn near lost it when little Izzy said that her mother lock her in the room with disgusting trash. Like who does that THEIR OWN CHILD?!?!?! Next, when Luc talk to that bitch. In my opinion he was way too calm for me. Like I know he was serious. But he should of went and murder them like bitch i'm out for blood. You and him are dead. Then the kicker was that SHE DRUGGED HER OWN CHILD & LET HIM RAPE HER OWN CHILD TO GET HER RENT PAID. Lord Jesus Mary and the holy ghost!!! Luc This trash really held her own daughter down. Luc Needs to get full custody of that child; those other two need to get the death penalty. Sick basters. Some of y'all don't know if he did went to kill them two Izzy wouldn't be with him became he be in jail for murder. And she need her daddy more then ever.  don'tAlso as an professional MMA fighter  his body is basically a lethal weapon. He's trained to draw blood. He train to break his opponent down. So bless him for having the will power.

 

 P.S don't  me on this story now. I really can't you having me hooked one story then jump to another story. Keep blessing us with the stories because even tho this is very serious topic. It's starting become amazing piece of written work. Also what does Kenya look like. Describe her please? Let her melanin shine girl!

Reviewer: Moonlight Desires Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 09:27 am

Title: MEAN MOMMY REVISED

OMG OMG...I am glad that Izzy is opening up to Kenya about this abuse.  I wonder how long this has been going on??  I hope that Luc gives Keith the beat down of his life legally and physically.  i also hope that Regina is thrown under the jail forever and ever.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 06:29 am

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Sweetmarymotherandchild! Don't make him commit murder: his daughter needs him.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2016 12:05 pm

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Ugh. I'm so gad Izzy is seeing a therapist!!! I wwnt through  something similar with a student. Its absolutely  haeartbreaking to know that something like this is happening and two adults are doing it, one being a parent that is supposed to love and cherish her. I want to take her myself and make sure nothing happens to her. Kids this age are supposed to be having fun, making friends with other kids and just being kids. Oh I hope Luc goes the legal route first BEFORE whooping the landlord like the MMA fighter he is.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 09:51 pm

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

ANY 'mother' who'd trade her child sexually for any reason needs to be hanged by her ovaries.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 09:25 pm

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Interesting story. Please continue

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 08:17 pm

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Regina is evil and vile and needs to die or put in prison where she gets shanked!!  Either works for me.  Luc seems to be quite tasty and delectable.  Shouldn't Kenya report what she has to police becasue a crime is being committed against Izzy who is a beautiful and loving.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 06:06 pm

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

I can't imagine anyone allowing someone to hurt their own child in that was. Truly disgusting. I would be out for blood! 😤  I hope he can use his therapy as proof that Izzy should go no where near her mother and that house!  Interested to see where this is going. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 05:38 pm

Title: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Wow! It is very brave of you to address this topic, it can take you to a dark place that makes it hard to believe what people can do to such an innocent person. On behalf of all little girls that need voices thank you! I usually dont say much on the site but just read the lovely talent all of you wonderful ladies have but this one really hit home. You are a terrific writer and greatly appreciated for sharing your blessing! 

Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 04:27 pm



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