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Title: ~Chapter Three...~

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. I love Norvi and I love Nick, but I really wish they weren't fighting over Kelsey. I am certain, the only thing that stopped Nick from causing serious harm to Norvi or James is when Kelsey screamed Lauren's name. Since I really like both guys I wish there was an extra woman in the beginning of the story that one of them liked, but I know that would have been too easy, lol.  Complication and drama is high right now, so who knows what will happen. I can hardly wait when you post updates to your stories, they are all so good. Norvi is just going to have to accept defeat in this, because it is ultimately Kelsey's choice, but if Kelsey gives him reason to think something can be there, this is going to be a long ride. 

 Reviewer: Anna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 01:52 am
Title: ~Chapter Three...~

I absolutely love the interactions of your characters! Norvi is going to get his ass beat and James ass beat. James told him not to do it. Kelsey even removed his hand from her body. She does not want him. She even told him that she was just trying to get information from him. Now he is going to break up the team before they get to rescuing Lauren and Trace. I love me some Norvi but that boy sometimes got to know he ain't always the sh$$ (LOL) Nickolas is the man! Loving this

 

 Reviewer: Water Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 12:35 am
Title: ~Chapter One...~

Too much Norvi unless you are planning a threesome. I really want her and nick to gel.

 Reviewer: lovedrama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 12:14 am
Title: ~Chapter One...~

Too much Norvi unless you are planning a threesome. I really want her and nick to gel.

 Reviewer: lovedrama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 12:13 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

I so love this!!!!  Can't wait for the link between the cousins to be made clear. PS: Norvi needs to meet his woman in one or both of the stories.


Hurry up with the next instalments!!!!!!!  Pretty please.

 Reviewer: caribbeanisland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2016 11:28 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

absolutely wonderful i love how my three favourite stories are all interweaven together it's making me giddy with anticipation of what will happen next between all the characters and i can't wait for some more plot twists love it absolutely love it.

 Reviewer: Adore Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2016 06:08 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

What a FANSTATIC update I loved every minute of it. So awesome that we have made a connection to the Concrete Dog. I want them to tell my girl Kelsey that Lauren is in trouble. I know she will get Nickolas to help her. Someone needs to keep an eye on her that girl is dangerous LOL. Love it LOVE IT

 Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 09:48 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

Sooooo Goooood you are my hero as they say! I am loving this already. Love the intertwining stories . I love this cast of characters and can't wait until all the gang gets together. Awesome !

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 12:44 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

You are just making me more anxious than before. I love this series and now you are going tomake me crazy about it. I love Kelsey. If Nickolas and Patrick dont kill themselves being annoyed with her I bet they will fight over her and I am looking forward to that. I love the conversations between them. You are so awesome!

 Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 12:27 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

I love it! Kelsey is my kind of girl with her room full of karate movies!lol I love her. she and Nickolas will be Percy for each other if Patrick don't decide that he wants her then .....it's on. I love the banter between the four of them. Love the way that you have connected your stories absolutely so cool. I hope Joey falls off a cliff in an exploding car. Randall better watch his back because Kali if on his a$$. Excellent chapter

 Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 12:17 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

I'm excited 😃 you are awesome!

entwining all the stories together. Thank you for returning the wait was worth it.

Antonio and Kelsey don't seem to be a couple and Novi likes her

Wait until they fine out Lauren is her cousin.

Joey is still a weasel

 Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 03:09 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

The gang is together....well some of them. Loving Kelsey that girl is TOUGH! I love that and Nickolas has that calm aggression . You don't know what he is going to do next. I want James and Norvi to tell them what's going on. Is Lionel Parker bad Parkers  brother? They want Nickolas for his money. I doubt that Parker has the money to get Lauren. Love the banter and the possible triangle with Nickolas, Kelsey and Patrick. Love it .....more

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 06:38 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

Randall better watch his back, because Nickolas is not playing. Nick said it was about his time being wasted but we know it's about his woman being tested by a NUT! like Randall. Our girl Kelsey got moves ( I like her ) men need to know we as women can fight too. I like Norvi discernment of Joey, that backstabbing, no good, spawn of satan. Oh Randall is about to feel some real pain after Nick get through with him. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 03:02 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

Stunning!!!! This chapter is so much fun. Love the dialogue between the characters.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 01:41 pm
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

It's official BEST SERIES EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 11:55 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

I love how you've networked all the bad guys. And how all the good folks are somehow connected. I am glad I was following your stories separately a while back.  It is all starting to come together... And those evil SOBs are going down!

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 11:27 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

"I talk with my hands"

Love it. Nic is a hoot.  Kelsey is my kinda women. That Randall guy is in for a surprise. While I would like for Nic to stomp his butt. I want to see what kind of hurt that Kelsry can rain down on his behind.

Alas, Joey does have a weak mind. What an idiot.

Oh my, this chapter was EVERYTHING!

 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 03:21 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

Loved the update! I really like Kelsey and Nick. Randall, Joey, and the others need to meet their demise. Norvi though, I wish could get his own story. I would love to see him meet someone. OMG please give Norvi a story! If Nick was not in this story I would want Kelsey and Norvi to progress, but I do not see that happening, even though Norvi seems to have a bit of a crush on her.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 02:06 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

Loved the update! I really like Kelsey and Nick. Randall, Joey, and the others need to meet their demise. Norvi though, I wish could get his own story. I would love to see him meet someone. OMG please give Norvi a story! If Nick was not in this story I would want Kelsey and Norvi to progress, but I do not see that happening, even though Norvi seems to have a bit of a crush on her.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 02:05 am
Title: ~Chapter Two...~

AntiVenom you are the suagady!!    Randall is going to get his ass handed to him, Norvi back off  Kelsey is Nicholas'.  More please!!! 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 02:02 am
Title: ~Chapter One...~

Oh I can't wait to read more now that all of your stories are connected. That is awesome. Please update this I wish to find out more about Kelsey, Nickolas and Randall

 Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 12:12 pm
Title: ~Chapter One...~

So cool linking all your stories I Love it. Please update want to know more about Kelsey , Nickolas and rat Randall

 Reviewer: Spiderbite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 08:54 pm
Title: ~Chapter One...~

Thoroughly enjoying the links of all your stories... can't wait to see chaos visit Randall to stalker!

 Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 10:58 am
Title: ~Chapter One...~

Oh no you didn't your stories are CONNECTED! I saw that you mentioned Carter Thorne in the Concrete Dog and I was like WHAAAAAATTT? NOW I see why this is so COOL!!!!!! 

I can't wait until we get into this one. Kelsey is Lauren's cousin. Randall and Kyle are no good bastards. Nickolas is not a good boy. I love him already!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Xaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2016 10:43 pm
Title: ~Chapter One...~

Yes I love the connections that all your stories have. I will be waiting for more.

Randall willbe the villian of all villians I have this feeling

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2016 02:27 pm


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