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Title: Chapter 1

Long-time lurker review 😅. This has been one of my favorite stories for a few years and I just wanted you to know updates are missed. I still re-read it on occasion as I admired your cast choice and descriptive writing style. I enjoy stories that create easy mental pics and this did so for me throughout each chapter. I was curious to see Noah in full pursuit of Siri after banishing that wicked witch, Jennifer, away and was wondering what might occur to motivate Siriphana dropping her guard around him also. This reviewer is still interested in reading more, but I would like to thank you for sharing as much of this story as you did. It's really good 🙂.

Reviewer: Cereal Lurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2020 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 7

“I'm only going to extend this warning once, so If I were you, I would take note.” Siri’s voice was calm; too calm to mean anything good. “Don't you ever… and I mean this...ever come at me with this bullshit again. I also will not accept you throwing insults at me, so heed my words Jennifer. I will not hesitate in fucking up your pretty little prejudice face.”

See now, that's what I wanted to hear come out of Siri's mouth. She didn't shrivel up and die just cause some little pasty ass chick came at her. Nah, Son. She let it be known what she would and would not take from ANYONE, least of  all some random chick who can't seem to make it on her own and is willing to do ANYTHING for MONEY. Noah's "fiancee" needs to take a look in the mirror. Seems like she's projecting to me.

Well done, Chica.



Author's Response: That's one of my favorite parts of this chapter as well xD. I totally think that Siri is a bad ass lowkey, and some people are going to try to sleep on her. And to me money is the root of all evil, so with Jennifer wanting her relationship with him badly for money, could mean bad news for everybody in the near future

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Enjoying this story, I actually like Noah's character development.

Please update soon.



Author's Response: Thank you... I really appreciate that! I'm having a good time writing his development along with everyone's else. I just hope that everything comes together

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 06:24 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I acknowledge the fact that everybody has their own opinions, and all of this site's authors have the right to write whatever they want to write, but if one reviewer's opinion counts for anything, I'd like to say that I'm so tired of the same old- same old,  insecure, 'fat', dark-skinned, black girl stories. And it annoys me that this seems to be a recurring theme on a site that supposedly features women of color at the forefront. As a proud, curvy, dark-skinned, beautiful, black young woman, stories like these are somewhat offensive. I don't like the fact that people seem to be so comfortable writing about stuff like this, as if there's nothing else to know about us as black women. It saddens and angers me because if it wasn't for that aspect of this story, I'd probably like it a lot. Though I dislike Noah's character, there's still something that I like about this story. I'll look out for your next update before quitting, but I can't read another story with a 'feel sorry for me' theme.



Author's Response: I totally understand your opinion, because I too am a curvy chocolate girl :p but my point in writing this response is to let everyone know that this story is not a 'feel sorry for me, because I'm a plus siE black girl' no. This is about a beautiful black woman, thats finding herself and making something out of herself. That's my ultimate goal, because truthfully that is what my actual goal in life is. But wether you stick with my story or not is totally up to you. Because I've been writing for about 4to 5 years now and I REALIZED that I'm never going to be about to please every odu, and be everybody's favorite author, although that would be nice:D bit realistically I know it's not going to happen. As I said before I appreciate everybody's time and opinion on anything I write. So Thank you :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Yes Jennifer is leaving, good riddance to the rubbish!!  I knew that Nik had feelings for Siri.



Author's Response: Yeah,lol she was killing everybody's vibe so she had to go, but idk she may just make a come back in the future. After all things can't just end like that ;) An Nicholas is so protective of her that there had to be something there no matter how small it maybe. But as of right now I have no set plan for this story, I'm writing as it comes. But I'm really glad your enjoying stay tuned! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 08:32 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Please update!

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Glad you saw her true colors before you got stuck in a marriage

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2016 09:37 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Happy Belated Birthday.

Noah is acting less than smart. He needs to control his lust. Yeah, Siri is bound to fall into your arms with you acting like a dog in heat. Noah, nothing about what you've done so far shows me that you want to change for the better. Siri, don't fall for this bs. He's being totally disrespectful to Siri. Siri needs to stay as far away from him as she possibly can.

Noah, you have the self control of a four-year old. No disrespect to four-year olds. What is wrong with you?

Nic is being pretty clear how he sees Siri. And as written, I don't see him "hiding" any romantic feelings for her. I appreciate that. I hope the brothers can strengthen their relationship. And Siri being in the middle certainly wouldn't help in that endeavor.

I'm interested to see how or if Noah grows. I hope he does. He is yet to be the man for Siri, since he's still a man-child with emphasis on CHILD.

Looking forward to the next chapter, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, I'll probably never like Noah's character. And I don't like Siri's irresponsible behavior, especially when it comes to Noah. They're still practically strangers. Noah's been rude to Siri in the past and he's generally got a bad attitude. AND he's got a 'fiance.' Why would she allow him to take things that far between the two of them? She's clearly just acting out the feelings that she actually has for Nic. Noah is so immature. He's like a child, by being rude to Siri only in an attempt to hide his true feelings (which I think are just feelings of lust, anyway). Now this douchebag Noah wants to start attempting to make Siri jealous by throwing his fake realtionship in Siri's face? Yeah, I'm not 'shipping' Siri and Noah as a couple. And since Nic doesn't seem to like her romantically, hopefully by the time this vacation ends, she'll overcome her insecurities so that she can find love with someone that deserves her.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Mmmk... so I'm confused as to why Noah and Jennifer are engaged. Who doesn't it benefit and why? From my understanding they're just friends with benefits... so why the need to get married? Why does Noah feel like his parents favor Nicholas? And last... is Nicholas possibly gay? ... just things I was thinking as I was reading. Lovely story. Hope you update soon. 😊

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Again, feeling a little violated on Siri's behalf. Why does Noah keep doing that? Just taking her in ways when he feels like it? No matter what he says, that's showing a complete lack of respect for her and his sorry ass excuses don't cut it. Siri's got it right on that score. There's no reason to trust him. In reality, they aren't much better than strangers anyway, so the fact that he can't seem to keep his hands, fingers and mouth to himself is even more disturbing for me.

If my friend's brother did that to me not once, but twice; and going as far as he did, I'd probably be busy finding a way to get the hell out of there!

For Siri, I'm not sure I buy she's into Noah at this point. With the creepy way he keeps violating her body, and after just meeting him a few days ago? Where's the turn-on with that? Seriously. Not to mention I think she's confusing all this with her feelings for Nik because Noah looks like him.

Right now, Noah is a creep who is playing dangerous games that needs his face slapped for his behavior.

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

I am glad that Siri told Noah off, but I think she has a soft spot for him.  Noah's life is messy, he needs to figure it out before coming back to Siri.  I also want to know how Nik really feels about Siri.  I hope his feelings for her are not completely platonic :-/.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 6

Happy belated birthday honey!! Man... Noah has it bad for Siri, Noah came on a little strong at first but I guess lust got in the way of common sense. Poor Siri didn't know what to do getting her first taste of passion. I'm glad when the hazed lifted Siri had " Her mind right" as my kids would say, to tell Noah about hisself and to remind him about his fiance down the hall, pump the brakes Noah!!. Nick finally told Siri how he see her ( as just a family member ) so now hopefully she can slowly let loose of her Siri/Nick fantasies, plus I think she feels a little something for Noah. That was big of Noah to make amends with his brother, because they are twins they share a special bond. I'm happy the fakeness of Jennifer has showed it's ugly head and now they can stop pretending like they are a couple in love, and face the fact that they are just two people who like to have sex with each other, nothing more and nothing less. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

Y Nike can't see she love him

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 6

Happy belated birthday!!!  Noah you will get no where with Siri as long as Jennifer is your fiance.  You need to break up with Jennifer as she is not the one for you.  She does not value family as you do.  Drop the ho the Noah.  Why can't Nik return Siri's feelings?

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 12:03 am

Title: Chapter 5

I must confess that I have consumed this story tonight. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 5

I think Nick should tell Siri that he's not feeling her in that way, because he is throwing out mixed signals. I loved how Paula became mother hen to Siri. I knew Noah was a pussy cat underneath that bad boy persona. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 01:11 am

Title: Chapter 1

I personally prefer Noah to Nick because he has more shades in his personality. Nick is the guy who will always be good for Siri but Noah is the one who has the potential to be the best or the worse guy to happen to her. Noah is an asshole,true. But I feel he has so much more to offer than what we see.I am rooting for Noah/Siri because their journey looks complicated yet beautiful. I'm sure Nick/Siri will happen and they're beautiful but yet,the tension and intensity isn't as high as Noah/Siri

Reviewer: Marchbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Noah, that was all kinds of wrong on your part. This is all on you. No, she did not "vex" you. You saw, you wanted and you got. All on you hombre. If it's more than just physical, you need to square whatever you got going with Jennifer before you ome for Siri. Otherwise, you just a little boy wanting something you think that your brother has.

Enjoying this, Chica. It might not seem like it, but I like Noah. I like Nick. Both for different reasons. I dont think either is all bad or all good. I just think that Noah has some issues that are causing just the "bad" parts to be highlighted right now.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad Nic said what he did to Noah because I was feeling a little violated for Siri. Its a creepy thing to do and Siri won't appreciate it when she finds out. As well she shouldn't.

What going on with the twins? They don't seem to like each other very much.

And what's going on with Noah? He shouldn't be getting Siri into whatever strange set up he's got going on with Jennifer.

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I nisse this chapter and read chaptr 5. Irst.  Noah you were wrong for kissing Siri  as you had to know that she thought you were Nik.  Haing sex in parents house is disrespecful actually beyond disrespectful.  Noah is,jealous of Nik because he thinks his parents love Nik more.   Noah you are are so wrong, stop the madness!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Nik by pushing her away you made sure Siri would never open up to about her feelings. Noah if you are really interested break up with Jennifer, it should be easy since you aren't in love with her.  Nik I am so disappointed in you!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Does Nick have feeling 4 Siri 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 02:01 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I think her being THAT mad is out of place and a little much for what happened with their first inner action. I'm proud and glad Noah was man enough to tell his brother the truth about his feelings for for that surprised me. Great job
Thanks

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 11:29 am

Title: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed the beginning of the story on fictionpress I believe. Glad to see it here and that you are continuing it.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 03:55 am



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