I just feel like even though Nic has cancer, it doesnt give him the right to sleep with his bestfriend's wife. But I mean like Emery said, it's up to Olivia. I'm excited to see what she says.
Reviewer: Universauhl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2016 01:09 am
First: Your warnings didn't say anything about: Charachter Death. Iif he doesn't die, how can they look at each other? . If the cancer doesn't take him out I'm sure her husband will. Can't wait until the next chapter. Great start.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Tracy. There are a lot of possibilities with this one.
Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 19 2016 12:01 am
That's a pretty disgusting request to commit adultery with the husband's brother...dying or not, it's still adultery and shows deep seated lust of the brother for his brother's wife...it's definitely just as disgusting to consider the request...definitely lacking a moral compass here, especially to use death as an excuse, but some say to each it's own...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
[Report This]Date: April 18 2016 09:35 pm
Oh yeah, this is going to work out just fine. just fine.
So this dude has been lusting after his "brother's" wife all of this time. That should make Emery question a lot of things. Sorry, I don't care that you've got cancer, dude, that doesn't mean all of your morals go out the window. That says to me you've been coveting their relationship from the jump. Instead of trying to find someone for yourself. GAH
Nah Son, Nah, you don't get a free pass just cause you're supposedly terminal. And what if a child results? Or is that what you're hoping for? Or what if you go into remission? Emery will have to see your damn face EVERY.DAY knowing that YOU'VE seen his wife's ecstasy face.
Gah, SELFISH. Way to dump shit on your "brother's" marriage. But then, if they go along with it, I won't feel a bit of sympathy for the shitstorm that will result.
Author's Response:
I love comments like these :P It's not going to be pretty that's for sure. Thanks for reading, sounds like you know this is a bad idea but youre gonna stick it out and read the drama anyway? Pretty please??? Lol thanks for reading Bella
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2016 08:03 pm
I also lost a very good friend to cancer, and when we found out she had cancer there was nothing I wouldn't do for my friend. BUT there are boundaries in marriage and in friendships, there are lines you just don't cross and sleeping with your friends spouse is the #1 lines you just don't cross. I love my friend and she loved me and there is no way she would have asked me anything to that nature. Oliva should have not been put in that situation and she should have said " HELL NO!" end of discussion, because these lips that on top or on the bottom are made for one man and that's my husand EMERY. Thanks for this update honey.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2016 07:57 pm
I know he is dying, but that is wrong for Nicolas to ask for something like this. He will be gone and won't be around to witness the potential destruction this can cause. Yes, that is very selfish of him. Go and find someone who can love him like he wants versus tearing his "brother's" marriage apart. I'm sorry, Olivia, the answer should have been an automatically no. Would you want Emery sexing up another woman even if she is dying. Then hell, how do we know when he is going to actually past and will one night lead to more. Nic, get some counseling and go do the other things on your bucket list and just remove this one. Sorry about you dying but I still have to live with the decision.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2016 07:43 pm
If she has sex with Nicholas I don't think that Emery get past that. Olivia is granting Nicholas his dying wish worth destroying your marriage?
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2016 07:32 pm
OMG! What a bomb to drop at the dinner table...even if it was outside. Wow,
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2016 04:08 am
I like the first chapter so far. Really engaging and I like the characters too!! It's so sad to hear when someone has cancer but im excited to see what comes next!
Reviewer: universauhl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2016 07:25 pm
Very good start. Please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2016 11:44 am
Love the cast, but damn Nicholas has the big C. This going to make me cry!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2016 12:37 am
I love this story already please continue with it. It reminds me of my friend, we use to talk everyday and we saw each other everyday. When she found out she had cancer I was with her, we cried together, we prayed together and our love for each other became even stronger ( If that is even possible ). When we found out that her cancer had spreaded through out her body, we was like we are going to make everyday seem like the last of our lives, my friend was so happy which made me so happy. When she died we had a celebration of her life ( I miss my friend ). Thanks for this story.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2016 09:11 pm
Yes, i am definitely intrigued by the start of this story. I feel like Nicholas is going to ask for one night with Oliviia or for Olivia to give him a child. I cannot wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
You knew it was coming.
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2016 08:40 pm