Reviews For Coming Alive
Title: Chapter 7

It's about to go down!! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2016 08:54 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Interesting story line. Keep it up! Looking forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 04 2016 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 5

You have a great story here. I like Bianca and Tye together and can't wait to see what they do next. The only suggestion that I have is to work on formatting your story. The paragraphs are so big that it's hard to read. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: MsWorldsick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04 2016 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 2

She got his phone number!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

YOu are off to great start.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 5

B!! girl... you better watch out! Mr.Tye is on the prowl. I like this story and I'm glad you are not stopping. GOOD JOB!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews. I know the grammar isn't great. But I'm trying and I promise I will have more by Wednesday thanks again for the support. I was hopping all over the kitchen with joy you made my day.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 10:36 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Age ain't nothing but a number, she's 22 and he's 29. They are both legal.

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Date: May 02 2016 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 3

There's nothing like a good step show. I have many of friends who are Delta's and they are some of the most intelligent, high energy, loveable women I have ever come across. I think Linda and Casey are just what their posse needs.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 10:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Tye was smooth, slipping oh girl his number. I bet it got hot real fast for B when he licked her neck, Tye is a freak!!. There's nothing wrong with a freak, she would learn some new things.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 10:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Tye seems like a dream. The older lady in the store was wishing she could go back in time, that was funny!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 10:17 pm



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