Reviews For Dark Paradise
Title: Chapter 5

And things were heating up... Both Vera and Nicky seem to be feeling the sexual tension. And someone is about to loose his mind with all the interruptions. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 4

Maybe Adriano was one of her attackers. Could be wrong.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Wow, didn't see that coming. They beat the baby out of her. I wonder who they were? But I am glad she finally got that pain off her chest. Nicky is so tender with her and her son. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Brillant!!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Excellent!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Everything time you post a story on this site. I know that I'm reading pure magic. Thank you Bain

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 08:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Loving the story this far. The dynamic between these two clearly shows there is some serious passion and history. Nicholas is somewhat scary especially the comment about how he works. Looking forward to future chapters. Wondering what he has planned for the snitch and the Family moving forward?

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 08:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You are amazing! Love it!!!

Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 3

OMG... This is giving me life. Please continue!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 3

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! I'm soooo loving this.  You've done so much in just these few short chapters!!!! Fan-freaking-tastic!!!!

 

~EJ~

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 07:45 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter. For someone that moved on she sure keeps track of how long it has been since she was with Nicky. Wow, she just blurts out she was pregnant, I wonder what happen to her first child and how Nicky reacts to learning the truth. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 3

SO GOOD!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yaaasssss......oh, how I'm loving this! Staying tuned!!!

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 06:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yes!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 06:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Definitely loving it so far. This cliffhanger though!

Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I love it! Please more

Reviewer: Bel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting! More please - I dont like, I love!

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 02:05 pm

Title: Chapter 2

So Vera and Nicky have a past? I wonder if William actually made up those stories to get Vera? Because for some reason I get the feeling Nicky doesn't really want to run the family but is doing it because he must. Looking forward to learning more about Vera and Nicky's past. Another interesting chapter!!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 01:38 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting start looking forward to how this story plays out. 

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 01:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1

So far sooooo good. I need more

Reviewer: Unileo77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 12:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I 100% approve of the continuation of this story! I'm super intrigued and would love to read more!!!

Reviewer: Diamond Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 08:38 am



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