Wow! how long was James abusing her? It has to be before they got married right? girl.. I just love myself some Isa, I hope she comes with the police and a gun with lots of bullets, because this MOFO!! needs to be ELIMINATED!!!. Loni girl you have some many weapons around you in that bathroom. I would turn on my curling Iron and get it nice and hot, I would get some razors to scratch down his face, I would fill the tub with water and If he get in, I'll be waiting to kick him in the NUTS! and when he goes down I'm drowning that FOOL!!. Please Deke get there soon!
Author's Response:
Hi Jacqua43,
You rock girl!!!! Thank you so much for the love! 💚 Hopefully the "MOFO" gets his just due. Loni is smart but I think also still carrying good memories of the two of them along with the bad. In her fear she forgets sort of how to defend herself; she needs to be reminded of her courage. Thank you for rocking with me since day one. 🙂
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 20 2016 10:07 pm
I love this story
Author's Response:
Hi PurpleLover23,
Awe thank you! *sniffles. Hugs 🙂 Thank you for the feedback.
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2016 09:29 pm
I love everything about this story! I am hooked and waiting for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Hi Naytherocker,
Thank you so much Hun for the love! Hugs🙂 New chapters will be posted soon. Just started school again to be certified to teach online so I've got the 9-5, school, the fam, and prep to teach fall semester courses. You guys cheering me on has helped tremendously. *Story mapping as I write 😉
Reviewer: naytherocker Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2016 05:20 pm
Wow.... Go D!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Keikei2,
I know right! Deke was so concerned about the girls but Hun James's day is coming!
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2016 05:12 am
As I'm reading this chapter, I feel the door shaking and rattling.
Author's Response:
Hi Keikei2,
The drama had to be there to feel this moment. Thank you so much for feedback. I hoped the gravity of the emotions and action was portrayed. 😉
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2016 04:57 am
Deacon please get there before its too late!
Author's Response:
Hi Janez91,
Thank you so much for the feedback. You literally drove me to add another chapter. I think you were the first to respond like right after I updated. Thank Hun! Hugs 🙂
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2016 12:55 am
Girl... I'm waiting on the next update with my glass of ice tea, my orange chicken, with my bedroom sleepers on while I'm chillin in my quiet room. But take your time ( I'm not in a hurry )LOL!
Author's Response:
Hey Jacqua43,
Well hope this does not disappoint. A few more chapters will go up this week. Thanks for the love hun!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 12 2016 06:46 pm
Can't wait for the new chapters to be posted. Hope that you have a better rest of your week.
Author's Response:
Keikei2,
The week did get better. Thanks Hun! *Hugs🙂
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2016 07:35 am
Lovin the story! Is it possible for you to separate out who is talking better. I'm starting to get a little confused when you put different peoples sentences next to each other.
Author's Response:
MissCo,
Thank you for the response. Glad to know you are enjoying the story thus far, hopefully you enjoy the revisions.
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2016 02:16 pm
Girl the supporting cast is Hott!!! my favorite is STACK!!!
Author's Response:
Jacuqua43,
He is cute. OMG!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2016 09:32 pm
I knew she was trying to protect her friend and she's on his payroll, she could really mess him up if she wanted to. When Deke finds out this mofo put his hands on her again, he's going to go loco and I can't wait. I say Deke should tie him down and let Nia stomp on his nuts, give her brass knuckles and let her go ham on his pretty face, give her some pliers and let her pull every teeth out of his mouth one at a time, then give her lighter fluid and her a match and let her BBQ HIS WEENIE!!! and then tell him she want a divorce, because he's not man enough for her and then walk off in the sunset with Deke. I hope Nia is calling Deke to help her. Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Hey Jacqua43,
Isa and Nia's friendship is complex but one I wanted to preserve, especially how much they care for one another. The showdown is coming *winks*! You are a trip, pray no one ever pisses you off, lol!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2016 09:30 pm
The first few chapters were really interesting, but the last 3 or so chapters were difficult to understand. The formating makes it difficult to read. I have to try to work out who is saying what, what is supposed to be internal dialogue and what is actual conversation. I would suggest a formatting change to make your story easier to read.
Author's Response:
Hi Dinndee,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The chapters have been revised. Please do share your thoughts. Hopefully the story will remain interesting for you *winks*.
Reviewer: Dinndee Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2016 03:17 pm
I meant RAZOR...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2016 04:35 am
Loving the story (and the fact that you update at an unbelievably fast pace!). It is,however, getting to be a bit confusing following along as its unclear who is talking/thinking at certain parts. In turn, im missing important pieces of this awesome plot--and I dont want to do that here. Hope this helps, but otherwise, great job! And yaasss Deke; fine specimen there :-).
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2016 04:34 am
WOW!!! Your cast is the REALLY GOOD! Deacon's Dad, whew... I cannot wait for more!! Thanks for the update! Neil looks fierce in that picture with the baby, lol. He also looks VERY protective, which is why he told Deacon to look after her. Wow, I wish there was a story on Kelly and Neil, but that okay, I'll take what I can get. I swear you could do stories on most of the guys' Linc, Stack, Raor, Ham and Bean!
Author's Response:
Anonymous Anonymous,
Thank you for the response. It took me hours of trolling the internet looking for the perfect representations of the characters in my head. Glad to know you are enjoying the story. Neil is just the epitome of fierce in that pic had that one for a few years and never knew what to do with it. This story may turn into a series *muse rolls over*. The guys are cool, I admire the character dynamics. Please do continue to share your thoughts.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2016 04:32 am
This story is good? The only thing that gets confusing is when you switch POint Of Views.
Author's Response:
Hi jael3205,
Thank you for letting me know I will try to correct it moving forward. I generally correct the chapters after posting and repost the corrected chapters along with the new one. Thanks for the comment and reading.
Reviewer: jael3205 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 01 2016 01:42 am
Hmmm. I wonder what's up. Sounds like some ish is abt to go down! 👀
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2016 06:10 pm
Girl.... The cast pictures are Hott!! girl I have the same dress that Lonilla/Sanaa has on. Good Job!!!
Author's Response:
Jacqua43,
Great minds! :)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2016 12:39 pm
I love Deke's and Nia new found friendship, but a married woman doesn't go to a man's house unless she wants something to happen between them, plus she knows this man is attracted to her, maybe this is her way of removing James out of the equation all together. I'm still feeling Isa and Nia friendship, I think Isa is undercover with the DEA and she's working to get that abusive prick out of Nia's life for good. Thanks for the update
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2016 12:35 pm
I think that Isa is on James payroll. I hope she's not that type of friend who sleeps with her friend's man, she just don't seem the type.
Author's Response:
Hi Jacqua43,
Hmm.......
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2016 12:26 pm
Great story keep up the good work. Poor Nia! She is so in the dark. And wth is going on with James and Isa?!
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2016 06:00 am
What's going on here
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2016 01:07 am
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!!!!! Ohhhhhhh damn
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2016 09:38 pm
My thoughts are that MAYBE Isa MIGHT be messing around with Jamie... Da da daaaaaaa!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Keikei2,
You never know where this may go, lol! Thank you for the love.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2016 09:14 pm
Ok, you got me wondering if I'm right about Isa; that doesn't happen often. I'm liking that. The pictures are good. I imagined Deacon younger, but it works. It seems things are about to start moving. I can't wait!
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2016 12:12 pm