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Title: Twelve

I can't wait for the reveal!!!!

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 01:26 am

Title: Twelve

So excited you are back! I can't wait to read more. Admittedly, I had to go back and read the last chapter to figure why Christian had a stick up his ass but that's to be expected. 

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 01:12 am

Title: Twelve

I really liked this story but I'm not going to get to invested again . Until I see more updates .

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 01:08 am

Title: Twelve

Thank you for the update . I feel so bad for Taylor . But she really needs to tell Christian the TRUTH soon .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 01:05 am

Title: Two

What about her voice, he couldn't by tha.t that he was a she?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:44 pm

Title: One

Starting over. Like it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:30 pm

Title: Twelve

I screamed when I saw this update. I'm sooooooo glad you've updated and are continuing. I'm beyond addicted to all of these characters and I'm loving the pace you've set up so far. Can't wait to see the next update. 

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:24 pm

Title: Twelve

I'm happy to see this story back! but ugh i need tayolr to come cleaaaaan already. this is the one thing i hate about these types of story lines it drives me crazy that  know the girl is not a guy! hoping for an update soon!



Author's Response:

I know how you feel but please be patient. It's coming. :)

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:17 pm

Title: Eleven

Ahh I love this story! Made be laugh and gasp at the end of this chapter!!! Hopefully Taylor tells Christian the truth soon. Please update quickly :-) 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 08:59 pm

Title: One

WHERE ARE YOU??????? 

Are you lost somewhere?? That's why you don't update??????

I watched the CP series and I want to see your version!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

.............................please

Reviewer: Nutella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 09:32 pm

Title: Eleven

If Only...you'd update I'd be super happy and forever grateful :D 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 07:58 pm

Title: One

I miss this story soooooo much! Where did you gooooooooooooo!? :( :(

Reviewer: loveinno Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 12:00 am

Title: One

It's a great story ! I really love how the feelings are growing for both sides, especially for Chris, it means the real love of the soul despite apearence. I can't wait for the moment he finds out he's a she ! And I really apreciate your writing, straight to the point and without unecessary details... Just excellent !

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2012 10:25 am

Title: One

i think its really interesting how Chris is catching feelings for Taylor when he thinks shes a guy. to me, that just shows that he is falling for her on a deeper level than just looks (considering she supposedly has a penis and all). its everything about her thats got him geeked. i know its messed up because hes all confused and questioning his sexuality, but i think its so cute that they have such a connection that he just cant help but be drawn to her. the suspense between them is great, you cant rush these things, it only adds to the dynamics of the story line.

awesome work, even if you are being slightly jerky for taking so long. ch 11 is such a horrible cliff hanger, im dyin here man -__-

but im still a fan, so no worries 

Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2011 10:44 am

Title: One

please update. i keep reading the last chapter over and over again because i want more! its so good, dont leave us hangin for long. please and thank you :)

Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 06:51 am

Title: One

I don't think that anyone is being too hard on Taylor. Yes its not her fault that Christian is falling in love with her. But the fact is that she is lying to him. And that is not right. I totally get that she has her problems and reasons. But still its not an excuse to continue with a lie as serious as this. She needs to come clear.

Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 14 2011 03:59 am

Title: One

Great update,

I think everyone is being too hard on Taylor, yes she should have come clean in the beginning but she is in a really awkward situation right now. Its almost like she's in too deep to come clean well without doing serious damage at least. She may be making him think he is gay but other than this chapter she has never consciously done anything to encourage his affection.

Its not her fault he is falling in love with her, plus she is battling her own feelings of inadequacy and unworthiness to even think he would feel the same.

Plus another reviewer made a valid point, whats up with her voice and hair? Her voice won't be manly and her hair should be getting longer. Plus how about how she walks? 

Anywho.... Stop taking a million years to update *_*

This story is just too juicy to wait for :D

Reviewer: mims Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 03:53 pm

Title: Eleven

Does she have a deep vocie for everyone to think she's a guy? Wpuldnt her hair be growing making her look more feminine? cant wait till Christian finds out!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 09:05 am

Title: Eleven

too be honest i just want him to know shes a woman already its getting frustrating waiting and waiting

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 06:19 am

Title: Eleven

okay, woman . . . whew!

where to begin?!

for one, you must know, above all, that you are talented beyond words. your characters are feasible (despite, or possibly because of their stupidity), tangible, very real. i can feel every tick, every breath, every hesitation in their movements - truly amazing writing here and i commend you.

that being said, holy hell, these two are idiots!

Taylor is doing nothing but digging this hole deeper and deeper for herself. not only is she messing with her own emotions and torturing herself unnecessarily, she's doing precisely the same to Christian. the guy now thinks he's gay, for goodness' sake! for a man that may not be open to exposing himself to that lifestyle by even association, this shit must be incredibly hard, confusing, just a clusterfuck. and as for Taylor's intention to tell the truth, what on earth will she expect to come of it once it's out there? he won't trust her, won't trust himself afterwords. he's already been betrayed in his definition by his family, how in the world would he deal with having these conflicting feelings of affection and lust for a man when he's not gay, only to find out said man was truly a woman the entire time?!

lawdy-lawd!!!

i get why Taylor has backed herself into this corner. she thought she'd be in and out of this dude's life without much issue; pay him back for the damage to the car, pay him back for the money he gave the family. she doesn't feel indebted and he can go back to being worry-free (as far as money). everyone's happy. but the heart can be a mean son-of-a-bitch, can't it? and i also understand why she continues with the lie. b.c of how much she's invested, how scared she may be of her feelings, and, hell, it's hard as stone to tell the truth when people are comfortable with a lie.

i have a saying above my desk at work: Always be honest for the truth has an ugly way of showing itself.

damn, damn, damn, Taylor!!!

don't get me wrong: i still like her. love her character, even. she's a strong individual. stronger than most would give her credit for. she's protecting herself above all else and that's what makes her so realistic. too often are we exposed to characters that give in willy-nilly and the resluts of nothing short of a faerie tale. this is what makes this story so captivating and deliciously frustrating at the same time!

did i say i love this story? cuz if i haven't . . .

having said all that, Christian is a fucking idiot.

dude has got to be dumb as rocks not to see that Taylor is a woman. or at the very least, he's nowhere near as worldly as he thinks. i live in the New York area all my life, have barely left, and am able to tell a Drag from a Tranny to a Transgendered. c'mon, guy!!! but then again, dudes don't really study other dudes when they're around one another. it's not much of a question for a woman to observe people, whether it's the same sex or not. but for a man to do it, pride and reputation gets in the way.

dang it, woman! i done wrote a dissertation and the story's not even done!

i never do this, but this story is one of the best i've read in a very long time. you breathe such life into this scenario, into these characters that it's hard to deny the awesomeness of this.

keep going. do not stop, hesitate, or pause. brava, lady. brava.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 01:35 am

Title: Eleven

Amazing :)

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 12:42 am

Title: Eleven

When will Taylor finally tell Christian the truth. I know he was an ass towards her in the beginning but this is not right at all. At least he was honest with her since the beginning and she is not. This is a serious situation. I know that its all fun in the beginning and stuff, but you don't do these type of things to people who is starting to consider you as being his friend. I hate the fact that because of this lie, this is basically making the Christian question his sexuality.This is an extremely deep issue.  Playing with people's trust is not nice and Taylor is doing just that. She needs to be honest with him as soon as possible before things gets out of hands.

Reviewer: A fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 05:02 am

Title: One

Taylor is seriously pissing me off. When will she finally tell Christian the truth about her being a woman. She needs to come clean before things gets out of hands. Especially if the person puts a lots of trust in you. When he finds out she will have to work hard to gain his trust again. Especially if she gets caught instead of her telling him the truth herself. I still don't understand why Christian isn't able to realize that Taylor is a she and his friend did see it the very first time he saw her.  And why does Taylor dressed as a woman anyways. But seriously, she needs to tell Christian the truth.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 04:48 am

Title: One

I'm really not liking Taylor at the moment. This is really serious and She needs to tell Christian the truth. Christian trust her and even allowed him in his house. The least Taylor can do is be honest with the guy before things get out of hands. I hate people who lies to other people and after they get caught,they want to say that they are sorry. Yes they may be sorry, but just for being caught. Its not right at all. She has to be honest with him and tell him the truth after all he had done for her. I know she didn't ask for his help. But still, its not right to keep lying to people who are honest with you and really cares about you.  She needs to stop with this nonsence. I don't care what her reasons are. She needs to come clean.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 04:40 am

Title: Eleven

omg i cannot wait for the next chapter please update soon

Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 04:33 am



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