Reviews For PAUSE AND REFLECT
Title: MOMMA'S NOT HERE

Poor kids

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2016 09:53 pm

Title: UNATTENED MINORS

Hey,

I was gone last week and I didn't see this new story. I can't wait to see what will happen next. I hope they will not be separated. I don't know what their mother was thinking but I just can't imagine a mother doing that. She could have abandoned them at their grandparents steps. It would be easier.

Good job and glad you're back

Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 23 2016 10:09 pm

Title: UNATTENED MINORS

That ho just abandoned her children at a bus terminal.  Couldn't she reach out to her parents for help?  Where are their fathers family?   

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 01:00 am

Title: UNATTENED MINORS

Great start! I'm definitely hooked.

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 11:58 pm

Title: UNATTENED MINORS

Love!!!!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 10:14 pm

Title: UNATTENED MINORS

MP, you have left us with one tasty morsel. This is going to be EPIC. I can't believe that Barbara left her kids like that. There must be a reason why she couldn't get them to Rhode Island. DAMN, she has dumped all of this crap on a CHILD!

Gurl, you got me so afraid for those children as if they're REAL. Good job. Looking forward to your return, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 06:49 pm



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