Beautiful! English isn't your first language, love is.
Ps: I wouldn't have known you were multilingual had you not said anything. You write very well. I figured you spoke the queen's English, seeing the spelling and such. Please write more.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]
My first language is Portuguese actually, but I've been taught British English, mostly (and maybe I've read a lot of those Jane Austen/Brönte classic novels, hence the romance). Anyway I'm really glad you like it!
Date: December 04 2016 06:17 pm
Usually with a story this short I would still want more, BUT this story was GREAT! I loved everything, the characters and the way you wrote the story and also, how long the last chapter was. Morena and Travis made a beautiful couple.Reviewer: Love This... Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 12:39 am
Loved this story! You are so talented; you kept everything real, this was not a Cinderella story, no, this was a real life love story with its ups and downs! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us! Hope we'll get the chance to read you soon.Reviewer: Kia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2016 03:50 am
This was wonderfully written! To his moms reply; sleeping sexing, eating, breathing, loving, talking, photographing , caring... Sorry mom, did i leave anything out?Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 30 2016 04:24 pm
Girl... you been gone for a minute, but what you brought back with you was so worth the wait. You would think seeing her son happy and well, made her happy and well. But instead she was just downright wrong ( what a racist ) Welcome back honey and Good Job!!!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2016 05:15 pm
She just had to go there. It's not your business who he's sleeping with. You racist pig.
This is such a well written story. Travis is so complex. And Dindi is one strong young woman. I hope she doesn't let that racist woman affect their budding relationship. Well done, Chica.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2016 06:43 am
I had never read a male character so deep emotionaly
Oh, thank you! I'm so so so glad I managed to make you see him just as I wanted.Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2016 05:48 am
Travis(pretend) reply: 'Yes, Mom, I am sleeping with that girl and it is because I love her'.
I wonder if the Dad's long time mistress was black?
Ten for length of update and double 10's for the quality being damn awesome!Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2016 12:37 am
Aw, suki suki now! That was hot! I love your writing style.Reviewer: LeosLove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 04:41 pm
I came here to apologize for one thing, now i must apologize for two!
As to your other comment (I deleted that! Not on purpose, I swear! I meant to delete my answer, but ended up deleting everything).
As to my description of Morena: She's actually mix-raced, and I had a bit of trouble finding a picture that embodied my idea of her. So, yes, the girl on the picture is a bit lighter than I imagined and wrote the to be character. For that, I ask you to forgive me, and disregard the picture. She's a curly haired, black girl in my mind. I'm sorry if I couldn't convey that to you. (Promise to be more careful nxt time).
Happy you liked it, anyway!
Reviewer: LeosLove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 04:19 pm
Girl, I love when my beloved sings to me. Dindi girl make sure you get those negatives to those pictures, he better not use those pictures without her permission. People do evil things when they are mad and hurt. I hope those pictures don't come back to bite her in the butt later on. Oh boy! Travis put it down!! in the bedroom, this love scene was HOTT!! Thanks for this update.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 04:35 pm
Magnificent chapter sweetheart I could feel myself being totally drained in to their world
I especially like it when Morena/Dindi aks Travis: It is just sex right ?
They should know they are both lying to each other because what they do this connection is better than sex ad so much more than just sexReviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:31 am
He's taking pictures!! Well, at least she gave permission. He is a little stalkish and clingy, and will be more so now that he is whipped. There is too much chemistry for them to be just fwb and they are old enough to realize this.
I am just so cautious around beautiful people--most have some kind of tic. I can barely wait to see what secrets these two have. What is Travis trying to forget that it makes him screw anything to the point that even George knows he has a big dick? Why did George tell her it is time to let someone in?Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 01:54 am