Title: FOUR

I have many of your stories and...I have NEVER cried so much in my life like...omg. 😢 I know what I want to say but can't. However, you did an amazing job on this chapter. You are truly gifted.

Reviewer: Luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 06:21 pm

Title: ONE

You are such a talented writer, and I appreciate that you are always able to tackle difficult subjects. Thanks also for weaving Jackson into this story, as she has to have some semblance of hope. I personally know that I won't be able to continue with this particular one, but I do look forward to your others and I hope Aliyah has as much of a positive resolution as she realistically can given her circumstances and repeated trauma. All the best!

Reviewer: chrinae Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 01:06 pm

Title: FOUR

Her mother deserved to die, she was abusive.

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 01:17 am

Title: FOUR

Jesus have mercy, Valerie is one hateful bitch! And that rapist has to be that orderly from before. I hope he crosses paths with Jackson very soon.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 12:13 am

Title: FOUR

Thanks for the update, it is much appreiated

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 06:06 pm

Title: ONE

Thank you for the update! Maybe it's just me, but it may be best to revise the warning label of your story.

Reviewer: Ch. Four Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 04:20 pm

Title: FOUR

Wow! That horrible, what her mother has done to her. I couldn't even imagine that pain she had to go through.

Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 04:16 pm

Title: FOUR

Poor Aaliyah!  I felt so sick after reading that chapter.  I hope Jackson finds out soon what's going on so he can beat that bastard into a bloody pulp!

Reviewer: Chapter 4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 02:58 pm

Title: THREE

So that's why she's there. She killed her mom... I guess I can see why from the snippets of flashbacks you give us. It was nice to hear Jackson's story. I really don't blame him for killing his stepfather. I figure he would be doing it anyway but it would only be after he killed his mom or raped his sisters. Fucking bastard did deserve it so kudos to Jackson for saving the world from one sick fuck. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 11:14 am

Title: THREE

I really love this story please continue taking your reader on journey of these to wonderful souls.  Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 05:10 pm

Title: TWO

I am enjoying your book, Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 04:58 pm

Title: THREE

JACKSON 'ST MOTHER WAS REALLY STUPID. WHY IS INSTITUTIONALIZED FOR A CRIME THAT WAS IN SELF-DEFENSE. GREGORY DESERVED WHAT HE GOT.  EVIL ASSHOLE!!  I STILL DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY HE WAS DIAGNOSED AS A SOCIOPATH?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 12:37 am

Title: THREE

Jackson protected his family...he's not a sociopath...poor Al is messed up but hopefully we'll learn the reasons soon...good job...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 07:18 pm

Title: THREE

Well... Gregory had it coming. This makes me like Jackson more and more. He was only protecting his mother and sisters, but mom should've been the one to protect her children ( I would die for mine ) and Gregory was not going to stop until he had control and fear over everyone. I can't wait to hear Al's story on why she killed her mother ( but I think I know why? ). Thanks MP for this wonderful update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 06:59 pm

Title: THREE

Thanks for the update, it is much appreciated

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 05:43 pm

Title: THREE

Hmmm, from the way Jackson describes Wilson, I don't trust him. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 03:50 pm

Title: TWO

I'm glad that he was there when she had her episode. Nurse's and staff at mental institutions are quick to dope you up whenever something happens. Like they want to keep you in a damn comatose or something. Drugs aren't the only answer to helping these people get better. Looks like they both have found a friend in each other. I'm glad, they could use it. I do not like Wilson at all. He should kill him. LOl. Only kidding... 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 04:53 am

Title: TWO

Good story...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 08:59 pm

Title: TWO

Thanks for the update, i like the story

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 06:46 pm

Title: TWO

Al's mother seems like a piece of work. I would never want my children to fear me. I have my children respect and to me that means everything. Something is just not right with Wilson!! I can't put my finger on it yet but I have seen this type of behavior before, does Wilson have " The God Complex ". It only takes one person to show some kindness and you will be amazed how the person being kind to will change and open up more. Thanks MP for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 04:54 pm

Title: ONE

Don't  trust Wilson.  Jack killed his mother's abusive husband,  how does that make him a sociopath?  How did they come to this diagnosis?  The police deemed the death of ahole self defense, so why is Jack in a psychiatric facility?  His damn momma said that she was in the process is divorcing said asshole but still lived in the same house where her daughters were in danger. Really?  Don't like that woman. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2016 10:52 am

Title: ONE

MP I'm loving this new story. I think I like Jackson already. I got my side-eye on Wilson, something is just not right with that one. And last but not least is Aaliyah ( what a beautiful name ) I miss her ( the singer ). What have Al been going through to have her harm herself? I can't wait for the answers. Thanks MP!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 04:09 pm

Title: ONE

I have to agree with Jackson... I don't like this Wilson character around Al. I feel like he's some sick fuck having sex with her while she's knocked out. I feel bad for her. And Jackson, why label him as a sociopath becuase he was protecting his family from his step father? I don't think that's crazy at all. I think that Jackson and Al are going to get each other through this. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 05:08 am

Title: ONE

I feel like Jack is kind of an anti hero. He's not a bad guy but I can tell he's not all that concerned about doing good either. It is clear that he knows right from wrong and has a moral compass. I'm sure he had a good reason for killing his step father he sounds like he had it coming.Melanie sounded like a dead weight. I want to see more tension between Wilson and Jack I can tell he doesen't like him.

Al she seemed misunderstood and it doesn't help that she's a black woman since most black people turn a blind eye to mental illness. Al may choose to go by that name instead of Aaliyah as a coping mechanism; obviously something traumatic happened to her when she still willingly went by her birth name.

I'm lovin this

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 03:16 am

Title: ONE

Wilson is sex offender waiting to happen.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 01:02 am



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