Title: Characters

Love these characters' pictures. 

Reviewer: Zetacrave Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 02:22 am

Title: Unexpected Circumstances

Wow... not sure how I feel about Alec. He's a little kookoo for coco puffs

Reviewer: Don't.wanna.give.it Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 02:22 am

Title: Unexpected Circumstances

I love how she is looking out for her brother and how she don't take crap from people ( this 🐔 has balls.) How old is Alec? I can't wait until the beast is released.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2016 04:44 pm

Title: The Beginning

Alec and his wolf are batshit crazy. This is getting to become an intriguing story

Reviewer: None Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2016 04:04 pm

Title: Unexpected Circumstances

Love it!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2016 12:29 pm

Title: Unexpected Circumstances

Wow... That's one way to make an introduction. Haha. Damn near kill a man in front of her. LOl. I don't blame her for being a bit scared of him. Hell he did it with his hand and didn't even look like he was trying to do anything. Didn't he hear her say that Ryan was her brother? Why would you be jealous of a little boy touching your mate? He's a kid. Anyway, his wolf is very aggressive. He will definitely need to exercise much more restraint on him if he wants a shot at Renee at all. Damn near taking the woman and claiming her will not work, no matter how much her body may respond to you. So that's what happened to their mom, she died. I wonder how? I wouldn't be surprised if their father had anything to do with it. Or maybe she committed suicide to get away from it all in desperation. Either way, it's sad. 

UPdate soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2016 09:12 am

Title: The Beginning

Wow... That's horrible that they would put a little boy in a damn wall. What happened to their mother? I'm guessing she either died or left them. That's so sad. And mister Alec... About to pounce on the poor girl already. She doesn't even know you and not only are you claiming her but you're about to shift right in front of her and her brother. 

Update soon. I like it. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2016 04:44 am

Title: The Beginning

Excellent work!!

Update soon!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2016 07:01 pm

Title: The Beginning

Don't be nervous.  This story is great. I love it.  I haven't read a wolf story  here and this sounds great.  I would love to see a mating, but let's be real--not in front of the youngin' big cockblocker there.  I love Ryan by the way---jus the whole "I'll be back faster than you can abacadabra." made my heart palpitate.  What happened to Ryan?  Was their father pounding on him?  Where is her grandmother? Is she dead?  How old is Renee?  She seems young---maybe in her teens or something or early 20s?  Alec? I need to learn more about him?  Any wannabe mates in the way? Where is his pack?  

Hey can you upload some pictures of how you think these characters look?  I would appreciate some visuals.  Again, just a great piece of work.

Oh, last question...did they end up in the same motel room?  How did that happen?

The only thing I'd like is a translatin of the language he was speaking to the wolf.  Also how does the wolf and him work---it seems as though the wolf in him is like a demon. I would also like to see more detail and longer in future chapters. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the gracious review. I'll try not to be nervous, but I'm just a nervous person, in general,lol.  As for their father and grandmother who is in fact still alive. You will learn more as the story progresses. Renee is 22 years old, and Alec does have some mystery behind him that aching to be revealed.

Yes, I will upload a visual of the characters, I'm just having a hard time finding some that fits my image of them. Renee and Alec aren't in the same motel room. They are in the lobby area. 

Uh, hopefully, I've answered all your questions, and I promise the future chapters will be longer and more detailed, and to include the translations.

Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2016 12:08 am

Title: The Beginning

Oooh a werewolf story this shall be interesting. So far I'm completely hooked. Please continue😊

Reviewer: Pickle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 07:26 am

Title: The Beginning

Love it!! More please!! Hope they get to know each other slowly, I bet Alec has a secret too. 

Reviewer: Loop Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 06:13 pm

Title: The Beginning

Please continue i would like to see where the story goes.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 01:16 pm

Title: The Beginning

Great start! Can't wait for the update. It would be nice if it is a little longer.

Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 12:36 pm

Title: The Beginning

I'm looking forward to reading this story.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 03:48 am

Title: The Beginning

Yummy story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 12:52 am

Title: The Beginning

I'm excited to read more! 😄

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 11:45 pm

Title: The Beginning

Yaaaaaassssss!!!!! I am so ready to get involved with this story. It's off to a fantastic start. Great job, I'm loving it so far. 

Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 11:19 pm

Title: The Beginning

By all means, please continue.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 10:30 pm

Title: The Beginning

I really like it and I can't wait for the next update, so please continue. Great Job!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 07:01 pm

Title: The Beginning

I am intrigued. Hope the next chapter is soon. Good job.

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 04:30 pm

Title: The Beginning

I'm intrigued. Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 03:16 pm

Title: The Beginning

Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: mekaky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 01:32 pm

Title: The Beginning

Good start! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 09:48 am

Title: The Beginning

Great start, can't wait to find out what happens. Just a small thing but do you think you could leave a translation in the end notes? 

Reviewer: roimata Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 08:36 am

Title: The Beginning

I'm your first review lol. I like your story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: Precious Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 06:57 am



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