It doesn't seem like she would end up going to school for art and becoming a teacher since she was soo smart and always had her books with her. Her profile as a child doesn't match up with her as an adult. As a teenager there's no indication of her being interested in art so to choose art as her career field seems off. Instead of writing her as a "nerd" in high school maybe you should write her as one of those teenagers that were considered a little off beat.Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 06:45 am
Sh#t!! I know Layla knew this day was coming, but preparing for it is another matter. Be strong Layla. That ahole just wants to punish her and get her back to using. Oh, I hope she has been taking classes for self defense, if she has to fight, that you just did not incorporate into the story.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 10:46 pm
This is a deep story. It has the possibility of going in so many directions. I feel for Stone. So, he must have had someone dear to him leave and the circumstances were most likely horrible. Plus add in his no good father. Then you have Layla and this crazy ex in prison, or is he? I swear those dudes that came to the galley as buyers are his people. He has someone on her every move I bet, just in the background. Add in her monster step father and I do not know what is going to happen once she starts pursuing legal action, but he needs to be dealt vigilante style. Nicole seems to be handling things as good to be expected, but I hope she's not a problem when she finds out the other woman is Layla. Great update.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2017 01:18 am
IM SORRY I DIDNT COMMENT ON THE OTHER CHAPTER. I FULLY THOUGHT I DID. OMGGGGG BUT THIS JUST HIT ME SO BAD. I LOVE STONE SO MUCH. MY HEART IS CRYING. HIS DAD IS A BLOODY PRICK! WTF DID HE JUST SAY COLORED GIRLS CAN BE BOUGHT OUT AND THAT DID THAT TO STONES EX?! I WANT TO STRANGLE HIM.
Welppppp now we know stone had an ex that his dad clearly didn't want there. I can't wait to hear more about his love.
Im not kidding... I love their relationship. They've been each other's rock. And for Layla to see him crumble is just crushing. They're so close it's beautiful. I loveeeee them. She is so protective of him and I'm glad she isn't pushing him aside just because she's with Dom now. Love it
spesking of- Dom is one beautiful specimen. Cannot deal. Period. Haaahha he gets all putty anytime she opens her mouth or just looks at him hahahahaha
I LOVEEEEEDDDD BOTH CHAPTERS. ONCE AGAIN SORRY I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT I COMMENTRD ON THE OTHER CHAPTER. BEEN SUPER BUSY.
thank you thank you I loveeeedddd it
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Date: February 26 2017 01:16 pm
OMG, I'm crying!!, I hate his dad. I LOVE THIS STORY. Keep up the great work.Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 23 2017 01:10 pm
Stone, I'mma need you to get yourself together before you attempt to drive our girl back to drugs herself. Stone's dad needs an epic smack. Hope Dom can help our girl. Maybe she needs to call her sponsor as well.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2017 05:42 am
What the heck is Stone's dad deal?! I don't like or trust this guy and I wonder what he has on Stone. I love your writing!!!
Pleeeeease update soonReviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 11:08 pm
Slow down Dom, everything doesn't have to come in a day. Take this time to date, re-learn each other, old habits and new. This should be an exciting time. The new love feeling, smiling for no damn reason...lol. Keep it up. I wonder how she will react to him investigating Chuck. That might be her and their first real test.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2017 01:23 am
Well now Dom :) I wonder if that was the attraction so long ago between them. Their natural tendencies sought each other out. He's aggressive, powerful, in control more often than not and she is quiet, caring and somewhat meek. Pondering this thought. Anyway, I hope Dom forgives himself for Nicole because honestly I don't think he treated her horribly. He did what any person does, tried to move on with his life and find happiness. I mean he was looking for Layla for awhile and she switched up and thn he just recently met Nicole after Layla was gone for 8 yrs. I wouldn't expect my first love to pop up out of thin air after 10 yrs missing. How long was he suppose to wait. Then after seeing Layla he was trying to get his thoughts together on what to do in order not to hurt anyone and Nicole noticed this preoccupation. I would rather know before I married a fool if he wasn't 100% there with me. I hope she finds someone who can give her that. Lastly, for a moment there I thought they were only seeing each other in this savior glow. I definitely want them to see each other as real people with flaws, who are not perfect but perfect for you. Each seem to focus on how each saved them or maybe it is me. Great chap and looking to read more. You can help me make it thru these last 20 wks of school.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2017 04:42 pm
This was so hot!!... I think moving in with him will not be so good for her. I feel like she needs her Independence considering all that she's been through. This is the time Layla is finally tasting freedom and I want her to enjoy it.... please update soon!!Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 08:17 pm
BOY I KNEW YOU WERE FREAKY BUT DAMNNNN NOT THAT FREAKY YAH NASTY WHOOPPPP WHOOP!
Id agree with her on not moving in. I feel like she still needs that space. They need to go slow in certain areas... But then again they've been apart for so many years... 😩😩 conflicted.
He sure knows how to put it down and by the sounds of it, he'll be doing much more 😳😳 I'm gonna pray for my sins. that was soooo hot! I fuckken loved it!!!
YOU LEGEND.Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 03:02 pm