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Title: Chapter 4

Oh goodness...Dominic is in trouble and he needs to listen to Oliver about Layla. If he still feels the same way about Layla after he hears her out the next day and even if he does not get with her, he still needs to break up with Nicole because they would be miserable together knowing he is in love with someone else. He would always hold back with Nicole because of his love for Layla.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 4

OH goodness, please Nicole do not attempt to have a child as a way to keep a hold on Dominic.  This is not the time when a man is being distant the closer the wedding becomes.  If I was Dominic, she would have literally heard "skerrt" while moving away from the vajayjay.  I would have shrunk in size so quick she would have thought it was a re-enactment of Honey, I shrunk the kids.  Dominic needs to postpone the wedding because pretending will hurt everyone.  Layla is saying this to him because she has him placed on a pedestal and she doesn't thinks she is worthy of his affections. Dominic I feel ultimately holds the key.  He has to prove to Layla that he accepts her as she is now, in its entirety, all faults genuinely before Layla thinks otherwise and he has to let Nicole go if he isn't going to be 100% hers.  Now I wouldn't let Nicole go until after Layla's debut and interest in her as an artist shines bright.  After that move to internet based sales.....no gallery.  I would hate to be beholden to anyone regarding my talent.  

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 3

Great story! 

Wanting to read more! Keep it coming I need to know what happens :)

Reviewer: EB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2017 04:24 pm

Title: Prologue

Is it wrong of me to ship stone/Layla for now? I just feel that they understand each other more and that their friendship is really strong! Dom and her are in different places in their lives and Nicole can't just disappear. 

It will be interesting to see how Layla and Dom find their way back to each other.

Love your story:)



Author's Response:

Of course not,  but I have to tell you a Stone and Layla aren't meant to be. 

Reviewer: Marchbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Ahhhh stone is the best fucken friend or comfort anyone needs. I hope she sets him up with someone wahhhh. I'm a huge fan already 😭😭😭 stone is amazing. I hate how everyone was questioning her for not taking the job. That caleb.... Creep alert. 

Layla is fighting her own battles everyday... Once Dom finds out about everything she's been through he probably won't let her leave lol I wouldn't want her as his side chick though. I'm sure he would never want her as only a side piece. I'm too excited for more. Their love would be hellaaaaa addictive and crazy and passionate. 

I LOVE HOW YOU UPDATED SO QUICK BTW I LOVE IT 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your rate and review! I try to update as soon aas I can. I'm not always so quick, but when the words flow, I can't help it. I'm glad that you see how good of a person stone is.

 

-Maya

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 01:52 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I really like Stone...he has great chemistry with Layla as written...right now, I'm not even feeling Layla and Dominic...I prefer her with Stone...good story so far...



Author's Response:

Thanks Jahchannah for you review!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 3

This chapter showed the determination Layla has to turn her situation around and I hope she succeeds.  Don't let those women take away what you need to survive.  Work your hours, earn your paycheck, get your GED and keep it movin'.  They can move up that ladder there or someone else if they want to.  Loved how she discussed the situation with Betty and I think Stone has a crush.  I just have this feelings that things are going to go up in flames before they settle into happy future.

 

 



Author's Response:

lajack1,

That was very much my goal for this chapter. Layla does have a back bone when it comes to certain things, just like all of us.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 01:27 am

Title: Chapter 3

I just love this story more and more.  I am glad she turned down the job working for Dom; he is with someone else and sholdnot expect anything with her.

Layla is strong and smart; I was impressed with how she handled Bettie.

I hope Stone or someone has taught her some self defense moves for when Caleb makes his move.  Did Louisa have a 'special' relationship with Mr. Married IT Man Caleb?  Did Louisa have to fight him off?  If so, she should have warned Layla, but maybe there wasn't time. 



Author's Response:

Penelope,

It makes me so happy to know that you're enjoying this story with each new chapter. As always, thank you for taking the time to review this chapter and rate it as well.

-Maya

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 3

What did she do that she thinks is so unforgivable?  While in rehab display she ever talk about her rape?  She started taking drugs to deal with abuse she endured at the hands of her step-father, she will need to deal with that to truly move on prosper in her life.  This story is so sad!

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Pmgayles,

There's still a lot to learn about Layla's past. However, a lot more will become clear as the story goes on.

-Maya

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 03:51 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm... I don't like this Caleb guy! Again, wonderful chapter as always. 



Author's Response:

Amma,

Thanks for your review and watchful eye of Caleb!

-Maya

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 03:25 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Omggggg I can see this is going to be one heart wrenching beautiful and passionate love between the two of them. Dom is insanely in love with her and I don't think he'll ever stop. Layla my heart cries for her 😭😭😭😭😭 AHHHHHHH I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! THEYLL BE SO PASSIONATE AND CRAZY TOGETHER. IM EXCITED AND I LOVE THIS ALREADY

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 01:48 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, great start!  Poor Layla, she has a long road ahead of her.  I hope Dom puts her needs before his.

 

Thanks

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 05:06 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Where is mother? Hopefully guilt made her kill herself? I hoping that momma is running around hell wearing gasoline draws with a pork chops necklace for the hell hounds.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Layla you are deserving of love and Dominc is the right man for the job.  Quit running from your problems and Dominic don't marry Nicole as you aren't in love with her. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 04:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2

This story makes me sad for Layla and Dominic.

Layla has been through alot can she recovering from her past?  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I believe this story will have you asking those age old questions....Is it really love when you are that young or just hormones?  Is he settling for Nicole because she was there and a good person?  Does Nicole deserve to have someone settle for her or fight for her like Dominic is willing to do?  It seems that Layla still doesn't have any idea of her self-worth and that she deserves love and happiness despite her horrific past.  Sometimes it's yourself that stands in your own way.  In this chapter I can't decide.  In this chapter, Dom's thoughts came across as more physical than emotional to me.  I feel like Stone has a better connection with her now.  Before I root for Dom/Layla pairing over Stone/Layla I need to see some substance to their encounters.  Plus thinking, Dom is a CEO, her background would be scrutinized and picked apart by the company he keeps, Layla doesn't have that mental fortitude at the moment to endure that.  Nicole may be the better match.  Part of me wishes I came late to the party and could read like 15 chapters in a row *wink*



Author's Response:

Lajcack1, 

Your questions are certainly valid! It would be so easy to make Nicole the villian, but often times it's not so cut and dry. From what we know so far, Nicole was there for Dom, but Dom from his actions had truly never given up on Layla. He continued down the path he thought most likely to see her. Going to the same school, going pro, and even becoming more than that. 

The good stories always make you wish you have more to read. I'll do my best to keep them coming!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 08:53 am

Title: Chapter 2

Damn! I honestly don't know if I want Layla and Dominic together as a couple because it seems like Nicole deserves Dominic's love considering she was there when he needed it the most. Idk meng this is gonna be hard for all 3 of them especially Nicole. I don't want her to be the villan either, she deserves better than that. 

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 06:43 am

Title: Chapter 1

Why did she have to turn to drugs? Why????



Author's Response:

Snow, 

There is a lot we still have to learn about her and what's been going on in the last ten years. As the story progresses we will see what lead her down that path. 

 

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2017 05:20 am

Title: Prologue

I like the prologue.  As much as some of us want stories where women are rescued by a knigh in shining armor, sometimes reality does not work out that way.  I wish it did though. 

I hope Layla, with the help of positive people around her, comes to realize that what happened was not her fault and that she deserves to have a good life.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! It would have been so easy to just have Dominic show up and save her but in reality that sort of thing doesn't really happen.  My goal is to make this story real enough that we all can relate to the characters in some sort of way. 

Reviewer: Prologue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love this story;) I hope Dom does things properly and ends things with his ex first. I can forgive the kiss because it was the first time in ten years and all those feelings overwhelmed them but Layla needs stability in her life. With her painful past, she doesn't need all the complications of a love triangle. I can't hate Nicole even if I'm rooting for Dom/Layla. I just hope she won't be the villain 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you;re enjoing this story. There is so much more to come and I hope you stay along for the ride. 

Reviewer: Marchbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Layla get yourself together, you deserve love and Dominic is that man.



Author's Response:

Layla will certainly need to get herself together. You know what they say, love yourself before you can love someone else.

-Maya

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 04:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, wow and wow! This chapter was everything and more! If I were Layla,  I would decline working for Dominic. I know that's a way to get them to reconnect but it's not worth losing her four hundred and forty-two days over! Please update soon. This story is good! 



Author's Response:

Amma, 

My goal is to keep you interested and have you love this story. Keep reading!

-Maya

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

I sure hope Layla doesn't fall off of the wagon, but she shouldn't pass over a great opportunity. I'm rooting for her!



Author's Response:

Please keep rooting for her! She certainly neeeds all the support! :) 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, Dom you have a fiancée, do not set her back being brought into this love triangle.  Obviously he has strong feelings for Nicole since he proposed and she seems like a nice woman.  Don't want Layla's opportunity destroyed because of vindictive agendas of spurned exes.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're worried about Layla's wellbeing. COntinue reading the story and love that you're looking forward to more!

-Maya

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 03:00 am

Title: Prologue

It's really hard to swallow it when mother's pretend that they don't see what's right in front of them. 😠 I hope she can get away when she turns 18.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I know it can hard to swallow, but I wanted to write a story that really had a lot of truths in it. I hope you continue to read and just know that Chapter 1 will be updated in the next couple of days.

-Maya

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 06:15 pm



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