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Title: Prologue

Great start! can't wait to read more!

 Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2017 10:47 am
Title: Prologue

Wow Lacey is mad rude for being her girlfriend to her ex's party, then has the nerve to act like he's overreacting when you ask her to leave. Jesse needs to get a grip I know quitting is easier said than done but he's got a kid, seeing you dad high or overdosing is traumatic. Hopefully he gets a grip before he does something he can't undo. Nat girl I hope you know better than to go there with Jesse trying to saves addicts will nearly kill you, gotta want to change themselves.

 Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 06:14 am
Title: Chapter 5

Jesse got so many issues and I really don't think Nat could help him😕 this dude needs professional help😑

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2017 12:37 am
Title: Prologue

Jesse cares too much about what others think. So immature and he has a kid! He really should be putting his kid first and he needs better friends. 

 Reviewer: Alexis208 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2017 03:55 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Really Jesse you went bat crazy over a relationship that's no more. Jesse let his emotions get the best of him, why? have a party when you know there will be drugs around and you are trying to quit cold turkey( he self- sabotaged himself )and Lacey was wrong for bring Tiff to that party and showing off their new relationship around her ex- boyfriend and his friends in his house ( Lacey got balls! ) Jesse got to realize his life isn't all about him now it's about Syd too. This is going to be a long journey for all of them. Great update honey!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2017 03:06 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Jessie you ain't got nothing coming until you go to rehab any maybe not even then.  I don't like Jessie, Sydney deserves better.  Both of her parents are useless, that boy baby.

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Date: April 29 2017 12:18 am
Title: Chapter 4

The ice is melting around Jesse heart💕 oh Lacey is moving on. Nice👍

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 09:12 am
Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad she's willing to help him, because I can only imagine how hard it is to do it by yourself. Girl... Lacey is wild! LOL! she didn't waste no time moving on. I would love to be a fly on the wall when Jesse finds out. Great update honey!

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Date: April 25 2017 08:35 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Talk about a small world.  Lacy gets around, these fools need to get tested for HIV.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2017 07:00 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Jesse is to hot blooded and too temperamental for me but maybe he can change. One thing I know is Natalia is not the one to be played with😆 nice updatesa86;

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 05:43 am
Title: Chapter 2

Well damn! Lacy tell him how you really feel😃 that spoil baby had it coming😆

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 05:36 am
Title: Chapter 3

That's why i like Lacey😀 she don't have time for the bull.

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2017 01:55 am
Title: Chapter 3

I guess all that sexual frustration toward Natalia came to a head( get it! )this a great story and I can't wait for more. Good job!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2017 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Jesse is trying to fight the attraction but he's in for a rude awakening.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2017 03:33 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Not liking Jesse at all.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2017 03:31 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Leave it to children...lol!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2017 02:36 am
Title: Chapter 3

Jesse be father to your daughter she deserves only your best. I don't know why I thought to Gina was his  mother. Go figure!  Sydney is sweet!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 01:48 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Daaannggg. She was real honest. 

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 01:55 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Lacey kicked Jesse to the curb, I give that action two thumbs up!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 12:59 am
Title: Chapter 1

Jesse has some serious issues. Natalia is doing nothing but loving your daughter which is shat you would want in a nanny. I kinda like Lacey.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 12:58 am
Title: Chapter 2

Almost surreal that Lacey would have sense enough to know she deserves better.  Jesse is mean and so crude, I hope Nat makes it hard for him.  He needs to go to rehab, and while there get some anger management. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 08:56 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I actually like Lacey and she's right.

 Reviewer: Janez91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 02:40 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I'm so loving this story, Can't wait unti the next chapter.  Keep up the great work

 Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 02:26 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I like Lacey.  I hope she figures herself out and find what she is looking for.

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Date: April 09 2017 04:49 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow!  I wasn't expecting that.  Great update!!

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Date: April 09 2017 04:21 am


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