I'm gonna go out on a limb and say emmeline brother is me. Chambers kid. His initials are JJ. His name keeps popping up. Branden and Alyssa are sneaking around. Alyssa was the one to follow Jason thru the black neighborhood. Emily and Alyssa are pawns yo Braden somehow.
Reviewer: LadyBugWales Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2021 01:34 am
OMG, Please write the next chapter ASAP!!!
The only reason I didn't give a rating of 10 is because I really need a another chapter. LOL
Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous



Date: April 23 2021 08:24 pm
Omg why did he do that ??? What has brendan on Michael ??
I hope we will get an update soon
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 02:18 am
Michael is freaking disgusting
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 02:07 am
I knew it, Emily is crazy
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 01:48 am
Oups, it's now no longer a secret
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 01:25 am
So Michael was cheating with two different women
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 12:59 am
Emily did it, she's guilty
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 12:43 am
I knew he wanted Emmeline for himself
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 12:29 am
I think at some point Brendan wanted to be with Emmeline
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 12:18 am
Michael is disgusting
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2021 12:17 am
Great start, I already don't like Jason friends
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2021 11:48 pm
Emily tried to push Emmeline down those steps. My goodness!! Brendan is a straight up DOG!! This man is sleeping with everybody... he might be sleeping with Mike too! Because Mike didn't shoot himself over just his finances and Alyssa's infidelity because he's cheating too! Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed




Date: April 20 2021 02:38 pm
Girl you best finish this! You got a fan here don't leave me hanging!
Reviewer: Maya Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2021 01:29 am
ON HIMSELF??? Does it have to do with Emmy? OMG Brendan is a POS. I hope he is not the child.
Reviewer: monsgors Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2021 09:10 pm
I am glad that you updated the story. I hope that your muse comes back soon because I was not expecting that cliffhanger.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed




Date: April 18 2021 09:03 am
can't wait for the next update. this story is amazing ! glad you're back at it
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed




Date: April 16 2021 06:11 pm
Rereading this story for the upteenth time, and I still love it! Hope all is going well with you and that you'll be able to finish this amazing piece of work!
Reviewer: Nanipon24 Signed


Date: June 19 2020 02:26 pm
Hey! I've enjoyed this story. Please post again and finish it. 🙏
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 11 2020 05:24 pm
Please update soon!
Reviewer: saquir19 Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2020 03:50 am
I really have enjoyed the story, please continue.
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Date: September 09 2019 11:38 pm
I am so glad this story was updated! I am glad that people are starting to see that Jason's friends except Joel are crazy.
Emily needs to let Jason go and move on; she is needy and acting like they broke up the week before when its been almost two years. She is also acting like she didn't cheat on Jason all of those years ago at the lake house with Brendan and her butterfly tattoo. Maybe she has been hooking up with Brendan all along.
I do feel bad for Alyssa, but how you get someone is also how you lose them. What did she expect? Michael cheated on Emmeline to get with her and she expected fidelity? I just hope that all of the secrets come out soon.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed




Date: September 08 2019 04:15 am
Welcome back!
Thanks for the update. I had to re-read this story because it's been a while. I hope that you can continue this story.





Date: September 07 2019 07:59 pm
Yup, saw this scenario too. Not one mention of any kind of birth control leads to little bundles of joy later.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed




Date: September 07 2019 05:39 pm
Oh I saw this mess coming a mile away.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed




Date: September 07 2019 02:32 pm