GGreat chapter I can't wait for the next one
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 10:40 pm
Crazy chapter
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 10:25 pm
Really Michael, I mean really 🙄🙄🙄!! In Which world does he think he has the right To say anything
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 09:41 pm
I love your story
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 05:42 pm
At first I though it was Brendan who threw the brick but now I think that it was Emily
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 03:32 pm
I think that what or whom Brendan really want is Emily
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 03:11 pm
I wonder who is the woman Brendan is in love with
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 09:38 am
Michael is a piece of shit
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2019 07:23 am
[Report This]Date: September 04 2019 01:07 am
What??!!; Omg, I never would've thought Brendan wanted Emmeline. This is getting good!!
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[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 12:12 am
I wonder who done it... so many people to choose from.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2019 05:11 pm
Wow. Never expected that ending twist.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2019 02:20 pm
I hope all is well! Please give us more. It’s a great story!
Reviewer: Navygirl5 Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2019 10:52 pm
Please update soon! The story is too amazing to be left unfinished
Reviewer: saquir19 Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2019 09:29 pm
????????? Are you going to continue this story?
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2019 11:57 am
I hope you are fine and well. Please continue the story. Can’t wait to see what happens
Reviewer: saquir19 Signed [Report This]Date: January 30 2019 05:13 am
Eagerly awaiting an update! This story is the bomb!
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2018 10:33 am
I think Emily is truly crazy
Reviewer: OMGAMG Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2018 02:26 am
OMG. Well I feel like Emmaline and Jason are loving on a prayer TBH. The way they interact is not the most reassuring that they have the strong emtional ties they say they do, and still seems like puppy love/lust. Espcially as Jasons tryna talk about his "wife" one second and then calling her a jealous bitch the next. Plus ...I think what would reassure me is if he confronts Michael and Alyssa for telling lies on Emmy and Emmy confronts Emily or Brendan.
And where is Michael???! Why is he so angry over a woman he was "glad" to have cheated on???? Is it just GP, cause he's acting as if it isn't. Why are they being soooooo shadddyyyy? Everyone has an agenda and I' not here for it. Please I'm hanging on for the next update.
Reviewer: monsgors Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2018 06:57 am
I don't usually post anything, but your story is really great. The characters are well develop. They are not generic sterotypes. I love the pacing of the story. It has pulled me in and I can't wait for the next update. I would buy your book if you were every to publish it. It is way better than a lot of the ebooks currently selling on Amazon. I really hope you keep writing your story.
Reviewer: mgirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 22 2018 10:48 pm
Why do I have a feelifeeling Morgan might not be Jason's...Brendan and Emily has happened before in the past meaning she cheated on Jason and with Emmeline here it might ruin the secret Brendan and Emily have...bimbo with the butterfly tattoo he was doing at the lake house...
That being said, there is so much to unpack here! Alyssa has had an affair with two men in Jason's life and once Jason is aware i wonder how Michael is going to take it, which serves him right tbh. Emmeline really dodged a bullet with that one.
I have a laundry lists of things i still need to know:
What is Brendan 's deal with Emmeline?
Miss Chamber's - JJ is definitely related to someone from the pit crew, but who?
why was melody surprised Emmeline and Jason were together? and what is the fascination with brendan?
Michael and Alyssa's relationship
Who was the someone Brendan found that didn't want anything to do with him?
Who threw the rock?!!
Reviewer: Cinna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 22 2018 10:21 pm
I don't like how Jason's people are blaming Emmeline for everything that is going badly between them. First of all, Jason and Emily are divorced and she is so jealous of Emmeline that she wants to break them up, but even if they broke up, would he come back to her? I think he would hook up with her a few times, but he wouldn't marry her again. I get it; divorce is complicated and it seems that Emily has suffered through more of the fallout, but maybe she needs to see a therapist.
But, it also seems like she hooked up with Brendan years ago while with Jason and that she secretly resented Emmeline all of this time. Why look for something bad on Emmeline? Emily and the pit crew and their people are the ones who hurt Emmeline all of those years ago. Why blame her for your problems?
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2018 02:48 pm
Great update. This chapter was fire🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. Brendan is a freaking scumbag. I cannot wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Fanaserie Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 22 2018 11:39 am
I think Emmeline needs to get the hell out! Jason needs to sort himself out abu his ex. You don't made that kind of slip talking about someone you are well and truly over with your current lover. Not after all that's gone down you dont. She's right, she's the fool it would appear at the moment. And screwing someone else is just going to make this already clusterf**k sooooo much worse!
Drama for real to come...
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2018 10:24 pm