Reviews For A Rival's Claim
Title: Chapter 8

She said she has love for Mike... Not that she was in love with Mike😆 It's to late for Mike anyway😆 ole girl is pregnant with Rick's baby😆

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 06:37 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Hot damn! I just love Rick!! He's so sexy with his blue eyes and bowed legs!!! Good lord

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 2

Shane vs Rick?!!!! So unfair, lol. But I'd choose Rick every time. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

Rick is my favorite so this story is definitely for me.  Love how you're mixing up his love story with Michonne.  Excellent start and I'm excited to read more!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 07:56 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Happy New Year! Thank you for the update. Correct me if I'm wrong, isn't Mike getting professional help for his behavior? If so, it doesn't seem to be doing any good, he still makes snide and hurtful comments, his temper doesn't seem to be much better. This is the man she still loves? Wow! I hope she won't be like the typical woman, who after coming out of a relationship with an abuser, user and a three time loser, gets someone better and cocks it all up, because of that said loser. She should remember Rick is worth ten of Mike.    

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I hate mike so much that I feel like I can't breath

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Date: January 01 2018 03:47 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Mike go away you are not needed, Michonne has a real man in Rick. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2018 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 8

Hi she is pregnant for sure. 

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2017 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Shane wants what Rick has😡 1st his wife now Michonne😕 seems to me ole boy is jealous of Rick. He''s in for the fight of his life... Rick already CLAIMED that!!!😆

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2017 01:46 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I really Jessie, not to find find of that ho Lori and Shane makes my left eye twitch.  Great update!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2017 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 7

thank u for updates

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2017 10:07 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update. I knew it! I was right. The baby is Shane's! Of course Rick won't say anything to Mich, thereby allowing Shane to have the opportunity to get further between them. He should have told her from the start. Shane will use this as leverage to brand Rick as probably a liar and say he's bad mouthing him. I smell trouble ahead.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2017 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update. Mich, Mich, Mich (smh). Anyone can see Shane is a snake in the grass. I suspect he is right about Rick and Jessie, however, don't give in to him. Kissing him was just idiotic. LOL! I guess that's the point when your feelings get hurt, you do foolish things. I think there is more to the story between Shane and Rick's ex. I hope she can work it out with Rick.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2017 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I hope they have kids together. Let Mike and Lori, suck on that! Please Mich, let Rick be there for you. I'm really liking this couple. You always write this couple so flawlessly.Thank you for the update.    

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2017 05:25 pm

Title: Chapter 5

They promised not to hurt each other.  Thank you for such a wonderful update.  Michonne can get pregnant she just wasn't meant to have any more children with Mike.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2017 06:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5

The romance😆 The sex😆 The communication😆 DAMN!!😆👍👏👏👏👏👏

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2017 02:29 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update. I really like this couple, I'm always excited to read your stories about them. Mich really needs to let Mike go and give Rick a chance. Good men like him are very difficult to find.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2017 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 4

Michonne words got flipped back on her by Shane😆 wasn't that the same load of crap 💩 about the type of relationship she's looking 👀 for😆 that's what she told Rick😆👍👏👏👏👏👏

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2017 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 4

There's a spark between Michonne and Shane... but there's an explosion of fireworks between Rick and Michonne. I'm team Richoone myself. Great update honey!

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Date: November 16 2017 03:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3

👍😆👏👏👏👏👏

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Rick don't allow Michonne to use you for sex because she's to scared to start an relationship.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

I just feel the love from these two. It's more than the sex, it their connection to each other. They were meant to be. Great update honey!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2017 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I'm digging this😆

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2017 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update, even though i couldnt make text big enough to read

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2017 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

Rick is better than Shane, Michonne. Listen to what Andre said about Shane.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2017 10:40 pm



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