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Title: The Change

I'm not feeling Ethan😡 I👀 really hope Shawn is her mate😀 Nice update😀

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thanks for reading! I agree on both points!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 11:07 pm

Title: The Change

Poor Mia indeed, I'm glad that she has a good friend in Shawn.

Author's Response:

Me too. I love Shawn.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 07:12 pm

Title: The Change

Your first person narrative is just fine. Very moving.

I think you dragged this chapter out  bit too long. I can't believe Ethan let her go through this alone! The fact that he changed her negates his blabla bullsh*t about not wanting to deal with humans. He's such a lowlife. How'd he ever get to be Alpha? Please don't tell me she will then be bound in any way to this fool's pack!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! He is gonna have to learn that humans have their faults but you cant be mad at them all.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 02:27 pm

Title: The Change

Love this story!!



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Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 09:35 am

Title: The Change

I think writing this chapter in mia's pov was a good choice. And she has so much right to be mad at Beth! Such a dangerous place to be in and all without no warning? Tsk,tsk. 

And as for Ethan, I can tell it will be chapters upon chapters until he'll be forgiven...if ever...maybe she'll end up with Shawn? 



Author's Response:

He might need more than one lifetime to make up for being a butthole.

Reviewer: Jamilla Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 06:22 am

Title: The Change

I feel so bad for Mia, Ethan is such an ahole.



Author's Response:

Me too! But she is strong she will make it through despite ethans actions. 



Author's Response:

Me too! But she is strong she will make it through despite ethans actions. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 02:00 am

Title: The Change

While I'm willing to give Beth a pass on events PRIOR to Ethan losing his damn mind, the way she handled Mia AFTER, NOPE, she's making decisions what she tells Mia without any regard to what Mia might want. It seems to me it's more about Beth than about Mia. Beth being uncomfortable with how Mia will react. Mia seems to be a strong person, yet Beth seems to want to treat her as if she's this fragile dove. At some point, after this change is done, Mia needs to have a talk with Miss Beth.

Now for that so called alpha, I hope that once Mia goes through the change that she becomes a force to be reckoned with. I hope that she rips Ethan a new one, in more ways than one. This woman is going thru hell because he can't control his behind and then runs away like the coward that he is. And he can miss me with the growling because Shawn might be taking care of what is his responsibility.  Shawn is there and helping Mia as best that he can. He's more of a mate to Mia than Ethan is at this point.

Ethan has me heated. hee

Thank you for the good update. It just makes me want the next one even sooner. No pressure. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah she definitely cant with hold information directly related to Mia and her personal life. its not fair.  Shawn is stepping up to the plate for sure. ethan should watch out thats how people get replaced. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 10:28 pm

Title: The Change

I REEEAAALLLY hope Mia makes a big deal about him being with someone else while she was changing



Author's Response:

If she ever finds out I am sure she wont let him off too easy.

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 08:14 pm

Title: The Change

Your 1st person pov is fine. Ethan is a worthless alpha.  Hope he gets rejected ultimately...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Dang rejection might be harsh, where's your compassion?

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 07:56 pm

Title: The Change

Great update!!!! 1st person seems to be flowing well to me.



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Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 06:14 pm

Title: The Change

Also I don' think it' a big deal that Beth didn' tell Mia about being a werewolf. Nothing was supposed to happen and how was she supposed to know that she was her brother's mate?there was no need to tell her about it til then



Author's Response:

True she had no way of knowing but from Mia's prespective she brought her to a place where she was surrounded by danger! That might be hard to forgive. Imagine your friend inviting you to their house and you walk in to find out the have pet bears hanging around! lol your friend isnt obligated to tell you about their household pets but in the case of bears it matters!

Reviewer: Golden Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 06:07 pm

Title: The Change

 I enjoy your writing so much! I know the end game is Etan and Mia, but I really dislike him. I can understand being dismayed about his mate. However, he rather have sex with another woman while Mia is begging for death because of the pain. The worse part is he knows too! I understand that humans hurt him, but it doesn't make it or ok or forgivable to hurt someone else.I really hope Mia falls for Shawn and I wouldn't even be mad if they consumated that relationship. Ethan really is contemtible! Oh, and I don't like Beth either. I understand she feels guilt over what happened, but she is still not being honest with her best friend. Rant over! Great job as usual.



Author's Response:

Ethan isnt my favorite person at the moment either. LOL Eh, I'm on the fence about beth maybe she can be redeemed.

Reviewer: Lemondrop Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 05:50 pm

Title: The Change

Maybe I'm a meanie...or just realistic but please do not let her do the I'm a human and a wimp thing and forgive her so called "friend" for putting her in that position. A real friend would not have done that. So far all I can see is one female who thought she was "superior" to her human "friend" and did everything she did all in the name of "she knew better". I'm liking the storyline, but there are times when the werewolf/human story lines get redundant and we get tired of werewolf=smart/superior; human=dumb/inferior/need a keeper to run their life. I'll keep reading as I hope this story is different and it shows a heroine that does not take crap from anyone; human or werewolf or vampire (as Ian seems to just go along with what his wife is doing with no opinion of his own). What Beth did was wrong and I'm feeling as if she had an ulterior motive; she did what she did for her brother and her people with no consideration for her so called "friend" and employer.



Author's Response:

I am trying to keep this different so i hope you keep reading! I dont know if Mia can forgive Beth. Maybe after some time but it probably wont be right away if at all. Beth's actions caused the course of Mia's life to change forever. 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 04:55 pm

Title: The Change

I think the first person is fine. Also I'm such a glutton for jealousy, just thinking about Ethan walking in on Shawn supporting Mia instead of him, gets me so excited. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Ethan is gonna experience a lot of things he probably isnt prepared for in the future!

Reviewer: Golden Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 02:59 pm

Title: The Change

Gotta dsay high five to Shawn way to be a friend and I don’t blame home girl if she has a steamy wolf moment or two with him , Ethan Ethan Ethan smh your an alpha you pack begged you to stay after you changed someone and you still bounced he deserves everything hoop he’s gonna have to jump threw. Can’t wait for your next update



Author's Response:

Shawn is amazing isnt he? What girl wouldnt fall hard for him? 

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 02:38 pm

Title: The Change

Ethan Ethan Ethan tsk tsk tsk😒 man I sure hope they drag him through hell and back when he decides to pick up his balls and face his mate who's in so much pain! Wahhhh my heart hurts for her. She really doesn't deserve it and I love that she wasn't holding back any emotions! Shaun is a true Friend who is so caring and Ethan can go be jealous In the corner for all I care at the moment lmao I love how he brought her alcohol to forgot the pain. She begged for death 😭😭😭 Mannnn oh mannn am I feeling petty towards Ethan hahahahah he could've made everything much easier by being with her but nahhh he decided after ripping out a chunk of her throat, he'll just hope for the best lmaoooo

I'm hella excited for more thank you for the update (which was great) and yes I loved he first pov! So goooddd! MIAAAA YOU GOT THIS GIRL!  



Author's Response:

LOLLLL @ pick up his balls! Ethan has a lot to make up for so i hope he gets his act together. I am sad for Mia too but i think she is gonna come through the other side much stronger after all of this. 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 01:57 pm

Title: New Reality

Nice update😀

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2018 03:00 am

Title: New Reality

Some alpha he turned out to be. After he ran, he knew and still stayed away. Hahaha. He's going to have to move mountains if he wants to right that wrong!



Author's Response:

Yeah. He’s making some terrible decisions!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2018 03:38 pm

Title: New Reality

I love feisty Mia! You know how uncommon it is for the female to be unaccepting of the new lifestyle? Very! Usually they just get mated and straight away accept it and follow them around like lost puppies zzz I'm soooo happy Mia didn't take no shit lol she is going to make Ethan wish he didn't just leave her with a chunk of her neck hahahaha dick move btw! Hoping she drags him lmaoooo ALLLLL HERE FOR HER! Whoop whoop! Oh and I'm liking his friend Jenny? That's another rare moment- a supportive female friend who is actually happy he found his mate. She was bloody telling him off for leaving her like that. Ahhhh I just cannot wait for more I'm so excited!! Already loving it :) yayyyy thank you for the update x



Author's Response:

Yes I know!! Every time I read a werewolf story I think to myself that the lead character is way too understand for someone who not only just discovered werewolves but is also changing or going to be changed into one. Mia isn’t gonna go for this without a serious fight. Jenny is a rare occurrence she likes him and enjoys thir time together but she knows their reality! I hate to see women portrayed as power hungry and desperate enough to kill to be with a man who doesn’t want them especially in stories where mates are a thing.  

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2018 01:12 pm

Title: New Reality

I think this will be the first story where I dont like the alpha lol ..great update keep em coming 



Author's Response:

Yeah he is turning out to be a pretty big jerk!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2018 01:04 pm

Title: New Reality

Ethan made an asshole move.



Author's Response:

He most definitely did! 

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2018 11:32 am

Title: New Reality

Ok, Ethan is an absolute and total prick here! Poor Mia!



Author's Response:

Yes, he definitely is a but maybe we will discover that he has his reasons.    

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2018 05:06 am

Title: New Reality

She shouldn't have run, and now her life is forever changed.  I love this story.



Author's Response:

She shouldnt have but you cant really fight instinct. If i was her i probably would have run to...if i didnt pass out first

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2018 12:54 am

Title: New Reality

Great start! I love supernatural stories!! Waiting impatiently for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2018 10:49 pm

Title: New Reality

I'm enjoying this story. When Ethan appears before Mia, I hope Mia knocks his behind out. She's about to go thru some things. I guess Ethan knows now that he needs to control his wolf a little better. I want to punch him.

Great job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you ma'am! Ethan may be an Alpha but he has a lot to learn.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2018 07:37 pm



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