Great start for your story. I like the idea of aliens that look basically like us. And Mr Kalena sounds fine!! Excited to see where this goes!!
Thanks for your feedback!!! In a perfect world i think every men would be as fine as him!Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2018 10:58 pm
Interesting. Waiting for the next chapter.
Thank you for the feedback! Ill be posting the next chapter on Sunday!Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2018 03:21 am
Interesting idea and nice beginning. Keep it up!
Thanks so much for the feedback! Hope to see you again when I post the new chapter on Sunday!Reviewer: Activereader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2018 03:00 am