Twins, a boy and a girl just perfect
Two babies in one pregnancy. That's the way to go. Thnx for reading and commenting.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 01:33 am
Just so lovable
It was nice that everyone was so happy for them.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 01:00 am
Alright a jovan baby on the way
Yay a little Evangeline or a little John running around. What joy! Yes these two lovebirds will be parents. Thnx for the review.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 12:42 am
Finally! It seems like it took forever for these two to get their acts together but they did. Thnx again for your support.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 11:55 pm
Yes their engaged.
Evangeline and John actually agree on something. Will wonders never cease? Thnx for the review.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 11:50 pm
Now we're moving, go Jovan
Welcome back Moonie Anonymous! Thnx for the review. Yes JOVAN has a lot to do.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 11:42 pm
Thanks😆 This story was Amazing👍👏👏👏👏
Thnx for the review Tre and I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. I have a few more ideas for stories about Evangeline and John but for now I will take a brief break from writng after I finish my other stories.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2018 12:51 pm
They excepted the marriage I don't see why they won't except the baby😆
Tre you never know how people will react. Let's just hope that Evangeline and John can weather this approaching storm.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2018 06:13 pm
I like how you intertwined Margie into this story😆👏👏👏👏 You are on it with these updates👏👏👏👏 GOOD JOB!!!👏👏👏👏
Two strong black females who have been through some major trials, yes I thought that they should meet. That's probably the only time you will see Margie in this story. I guess you could say she had a 'cameo' appearance in the story.
As to the update I wanted to get the proposal out of the way. I didn't want to drag it out but I did want it to have an impact. There's still more ahead for these two. They both deserve some true love.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 04:05 am
I loved their talk😆 Put it all out on the table so there will be no misunderstandings👏👏👏 moving forward in the right direction😆 I'm digging this😆
Thnx for the comments. This was probably the most intense and truthful conversation Evangeline and John have had with each other. At least this time a telephone call or someone walking into his office didn't interrupt the conversation. Still debating whether to end the story here or not. Will sleep on it.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 10:21 pm
Blessings indeed😆 I love what you said in the chapter end notes about reviews being like seeds😆 so true. We need to support each other. I like how you take the time to respond back to you reviewers, readers like that. That makes them support the writers even more😆 so you are on point😆👏👏👏👏
I really appreciate when someone takes the time to respond to my story. It encourages me. I love to read and I am so overwhelmed by the many talented writers on this site. I try to give reviews when I read stories so that the writer knows that I appreciate their effort. It does take effort to write and to read. It is a community. We need each other so let's support each other and have a 'great harvest'.
Thnx for reading the chapter. More to come soon.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 12:58 pm
You got me I thought they were going to meet on their blind date 🤣
Boy John did not waste time or beat around the bush huh he just spat it out at Evangeline's feet 🙂 also her fainting was spectacular reaction 🙃
So how will she responded to his marriage proposal 🤔 you know I heard this weird expression and I thought if she did except his proposal at the coffee house it might be fun to use it went "coffee, tea or me"... But I can't seem to remember where I heard it from 😐 oh well I look forward to more.
Just Googled 'coffee, tea or me' and it's a catchphrase from the 60s. An old airlines joke about stewardesses/flight attendants. It's still used today as a 'come on line' when meeting someone.
Anywho. No John did not waste any time. He did what he said he would do. Now we just have to wait for Evangeline's answer.
Thnx for the comments.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 03:44 pm
Whoa, that was intense... Just laying it all out there huh John
So how will Angie take his letter?
John poured out his heart to Evangeline in the letter not knowing if he would ever see her again. It served as a bit of cleansing for him really. We shall see how Evangeline responds.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 01 2018 01:28 am
Wow surprised to see you used moonie as a nickname for one of your characters but entertaining non the less, lol I shorted my old social media name from moonkiss... I either go by Moonie or MK if I review a story
I'm glad Evangeline has decided she wants to get married after all.
Looking forward to more updates
Thnx for the comments. The use of name was just my way of saying 'thankyou' for reading and commenting on my story.
Yes Evangeline has decided that she wants to get married. Now who shall it be?Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 01 2018 01:12 am
In John's letter to Evangeline this part really stuck out to me " If you go around in the dark long enough you get used to it so that when you see light it hurts your eyes. " You are a true poet😆
Thnx. Glad that he finally came out of that dark place. We all need the light.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 05:59 pm
Dang! John is opening up completely in that letter😢 I hope she gives him another chance🙏 Nice!
John needed to release all of that toxin in himself to really make a fresh start. As to Evangeline giving him another chance. To be continued.Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 04:09 am
There are plenty of men out there that fits that bill😆 I have one and we're planning to get married September 1st😆 I also know many of strong marriages 😆 Love, respect, communications,, sexual faithfulness, patience, honesty and trust is the key👏👏👏👏 I'm digging this update 😆
Well congratulations to you! Yes all of those things are very important in a marriage. Keep God first. Thnx again for the comments.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2018 10:47 pm
Evangeline life is flying high😉 I hope John don't mess with her high😕 I'm not feeling him😕 I'm digging this update 😆
Yes Evangeline's life is flying high and John won't mess with that. They both have more to do in self-discovery alone and together. No meeting as yet but soon. Thnx for the comments.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2018 12:57 pm
Let's go can't wait to see how their first meeting after being away from each other for sometime 🤣🙃
Will they causally meet up somewhere on the streets or does john live on the same block... Next door maybe. 🤔🤓🤗
These two have a bit more self-discovery to go through before they meet again. I won't drag it out but it will occur just not in the way one might expect. Thnx for the comments.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 28 2018 08:40 pm