Congrats John and Evangeline 😆
Yeah know I was going to say something in the last chapter about John talking about his bones and it first I want going to say anything about it but I changed my mind... Moses was 100 when he climbed up the mountain, Noah was over 200 when he built the ark, Abraham 100 and Sarah was 90 and my father is over 80 jumping fences, cutting down tree limbs and walking lawnmowers for over two miles by himself. It's how you view yoyourself cause the power of life and death is in word's.
Moonie Anonymous you are so right, age is just a number. The Lord wills and we abide. Thnx so much for your valuable insight. The Word is a light unto our path and a lamp unto our feet. Those of old endured so much but I do have to say an ache is an ache. My old 'young' bones talk to me on occasion too.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 05:40 pm
Well I'm glad they've seen each other again without any problems and are now spending some time together.
I guess opera is about personal taste, I can enjoy it if I appreciate the singer voice, I like Luciano Pavarotti but can't stand Josh Gorban.
Moonie Anonymous thnx so much for the review. Yes one can say opera is an acquired taste. I saw my first opera while in grammar school, The Barber of Seville, and loved it.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 04:52 pm
I don't know about this doctor, him acting this way in public makes me wonder.
Guess I will have to wait and see what that was all about.
Dr. Jamison's just trying to put John at ease. He's a good guy. Thnx for the review.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 04:42 pm
I give this story a prefect 10😆 My hubby took me to Bora Bora and Madrid for our two week long honeymoon😆 We made lots of memories😉 Thanks for this beautifully written story😆
A perfect 10, I am so thankful for your confidence and support of my stories. Evangeline dressed to hunt and subdue her prey. Poor John didn't know what to do but surrender.
👀 Wow Bora Bora and Madrid sounds like fun. Glad that you made some memories. I missed you though and glad that you're back.
It's funny that we only correspond on this site and you have encouraged me a great deal with my writing as have others who leave reviews and read my stories. I can tell you all how much that encourages me. I write because I like to write but it really helps when someone else appreciates the effort and expresses that appreciation. I only started writing two months ago. My first story was 'One More Time' a JOVAN story. Now I write something at least once a week. This writing spurt may not last long but I thank God for the inspiration and I thank Him for all of the readers and reviewers of my stories and those of other writers on this site. Thnx.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 04:23 am
Alright Evangeline time is always good, throw in some spa relaxation too(you know it took me a long time to get over my dislike of strangers touching me, had a lot of weird things happen) 😐
I know what you mean about strangers touching me. 👎 Thnx for the review.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 18 2018 12:18 am
It's a good place to start, couldn't stand they tried to have John open up more to Natalie on the show 🙄
Thnx for the review Moonie Anonymous. We'll make our own world here in our stories. The tv show missed an opportunity to create a great couple in Evangeline and John. They would have been the stable couple instead of the always in trouble couples like Todd and Blair, Kevin and Kelly, or even Bo and Nora. They would have been the younger version of the elder Hortons from Days of our Lives. OLTL could have used some stability. Well their loss is our gain and I will use it to my advantage. It may be a long and tortuous journey but love will prevail. Not sure whom Evangeline will choose yet but she will do what is right for her which is the most important thing.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 12:33 am
Glad Todd's mess was handled properly and he's free, she should use Todd's private plane and take a weekend away to de-stress from all the drama.
That's a thought but accepting something from Todd might come with strings attached but I don't think that he would do that to his good friend Evangeline. Girl does need some time away though.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 07:41 pm
I am side eyeing this jerk 😒 really now John you have this epiphany now that ya jobs gone and thirsty Natalie is giving you space 🙄
I normally like Jovan but this fool has worked my forgiveness way to far, I want him to work hard cause I'm not feeling anything he's talking at all. 😶
Moonie Anonymous you have me cracking up here! 🤣
John has a long way to go on his journey to finding his 'senses', even his 'common sense'. He just better hope somebody will be there when he does. Sometimes it takes something drastic to happen before we stop and think about our actions.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 07:34 pm
Evangeline is way too nice, I'd have a restraining order on him before I left his apartment and Michael better slow his roll with the quickness, getting in Evangeline face like that 😕
Moonie Anonymous I agree wholeheartedly that Evangeline was always too nice when dealing with John and Natalie. But she didn't want to stoop to their level.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 07:25 pm
I wish Evangeline would have raised the right hand of fellowship on John 👋lol (I heard that from one of the inspiration plays) 👊 but she is a lady and they were both not stupid enough to try her like that.
Give it to them girl bring justice to both their trifling behinds
'Trifling', an excellent description for these two. Clueless is another good description. Thnx Moonie Anonymous.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 07:15 pm
Thank you for the update. I watched the video on YouTube with Spencer and Natalie. Spencer sure packed a punch with his words. LOL. My stepsister loves Jolie - (I think that's what she calls them..John and Natalie), hates Jovan (John and Evangeline). She thought everyone made out that Evangeline was a strong woman, when in reality she wasn't. Her neediness with John was her proof of it. I thought that neither Evangeline or Natalie should have been with him. Evangeline deserved better and Natalie should have been made stronger...just by being the daughter of Vicki. Spencer was right. John was an emotional cripple...judging by the way the women in his life would...give, give and forgive, whilst he would...get, get and forget. Didn't he eventually fall for someone else? Evangeline had a great escape.
I think Evangeline still loves him. She wouldn't be picturing his face otherwise. (The opposite of love is indifference). I think she will take him back...she always does.
I got to say...you are the first writer that has me reading John McBain stories and kind of liking them. LOL.
Have a blessed weekend.
Wow Sarah Anonymous thnx much for that great compliment, 'reading John McBain stories and kind of liking them. LOL'. Yes John needed to get himself together before he got involved with anyone. Bit confused about how Evangeline had need of John (neediness). She was in love with the guy. When in love you do foolish things and that is certain. So if people think that Evangeline was weak because of her neediness for John then how would they describe Natalie when she was drooling over the man the entire time he was with someone else. At least Evangeline came to her senses and like the Pink Panther used to say, 'exit stage left' (you're too young to know about that). She left and would not take him back even though he gave those 'puppy dog eyes' glances every time he saw her after the break up.
That's a lot of weight to hate a character or a couple. JOVANers don't hate Natalie they just think that John and Evangeline made a better couple. Natalie was just a girl while Evangeline was a woman. John settled for the girl. But through it all he never committed to Natalie or anyone else. Although they had a baby together nowhere did I read that he married her. I stopped watching after the breakup. I only saw YouTube videos of later scenes with the two of them.
The one youTube video that really perked my interest was the 'John and Evangeline One More Time'. That started me on my writing frenzy in the middle of June. Now not a week goes by without me thinking of another story for these two.
I'm enjoying the journey. Come along for the ride. As always thnx for the review.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 03:13 pm
Hi Blessed Soul! Thnx for the thumbs up on the first chapter. I first put this out as a one shot but another reviewer asked for me to add more but at the time I didn't have any more for it but after writing my other JOVAN stories I find that Evangeline has a bit more to say in this story and I want to capture that. Who knows John may also find a backbone and be a man instead of a wimp. Are you ready for this ride? Come along for the fun!Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 03:21 am
I may have showed up at the party ten minutes before it was over, but I got the gist of it. Finally! Good on you Evangeline. John and Natalie. What can I say....you really shouldn't reproduce.
Loving Evangeline's speech.
Enjoy your weekend.
Sarah Anonymous I thought that you might like this story.
I have either another chapter in mind for this or a totally other story but on a different subject but where once again Evangeline shows just how fierce an attorney and woman she is. Still undecided.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2018 03:00 am