Know how you catch a cheater? When you least expect it. If this don't wake her up and put a fire under her....send the daughter to boarding school so she can hopefully find a stronger role model
Alice is a little slow on the uptake, ut she's waking up. lol. Thank you for reading!Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 01:45 pm
her husband is a classic gaslighted. My heart was pounding with anger.
Thank you for reading! just updated!Reviewer: Sherea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 02:09 am
Whoa, that woman should be glad Alice is saved... But the right hand of fellowship could still be raised with the quickness if she doesn't stop. 🤚
Can I please get a clearer picture of Conner because I honestly can't place a imagine in my head.
I've updated Conmor's pic, hopefully that helps. Tom Hardy is more or less how I imagined him. Thank you for reading!Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 12:36 am
Good start! Can’t wait to meet this neighbor.Reviewer: MaKel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 01:31 pm
the only way to describe Alice, is "sputtering". It's so hard to find an it story where the woman of color can speak up for herself. Door mat, abused, horrible and/or non-existent family. However, I like this and am following the progression.Reviewer: LissaB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 31 2018 09:05 pm
Very well written. Poor thing not picking up any vibes from husband...hopefully, she will get to his laptop. It's great wanting to please your mate, but it's a two way street...his food has to be cooked a certain way, she's walking on eggshells...least he could do is break her back with some good sex once in a while.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 01:30 pm
Conner needs a better picture, cause I really don't see much at all... Maybe it's the angle or I don't find him attractive but I'll hold off my judgement until I see a clearer picture of him.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 03:00 am
Please give this woman a backbone. She is raising a girl child of color; who eventually will be a woman of color. The lesson this child learns should not be lie down and let a white person; or any person; mother in law; or not walk all over her. She must learn she has value; the highest value; and if someone cannot recognize that value...they do not need to be in her life. I'm gettting the feeling that for Jonah; his relationship with Lis was an experiment...in winning. Anything to prove to his parents whose will is superior. He went as far as marrying their worst nightmare. He does not value his wife. The very baisc definition of love; the one the Bible gives; is that love is "kind". Jonah's love is not kind; its control. A person in love does not list their partners "hurts" in an effort of one man upship. Is Jonah ASD? I'm ASD. I have Asperger and even I do not act with such coldness toward my loved ones. Interesting start; I like what you have written so far.
All in good time. There’s a lot of hard truths she’s going to have deal with before she learns to stand up for herself. Thank you for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2018 02:05 am