Glad it all worked out
It took work from both of them to make it work. Glad that they realized that life was better together than apart. Thnx Moonie Anonymous for reading the story to the end. Thnx for your comments they offer encouragement for me to continue writing.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:47 pm
Well it's progress
Well Moonie Anonymous the depths that these two have taken each other we hope that they can only progress upwards from here. They have hurt each other so much it is time for some healing.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:41 pm
Glad that Evangeline has changed her mind
Moonie Anonymous it looks like John's not the only one who needs therapy. Our girl Evangeline has to make amends for her actions.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:39 pm
Whoa this is getting crazy
Moonie Anonymous look Evangeline's not playing any more. She will protect her son and herself with any means necessary. Is the right in what she's doing, that remains debatable. Thnx for your comments and continue to read the story please. You might like it.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:32 pm
While Michael is wrong and what he is illegal but I guess John won't know if Michael didn't push... This is messed up all the way around.
Moonie Anonymous yes it is totally messed up. Michael may have put his career on the line by having that blood test done but he's looking out for his brother. Too bad the writers on OLTL did have imagination enough to make a good story line for Evangeline and John. They would have been a great power couple for the show.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:29 pm
For shame Evangeline, for shame smh
I am not agreeing with what she is doing, at all
I know Moonie Anonymous she's trying to protect herself. Let's wait and see how this progresses. Thnx for the comment.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:15 pm
I've been remiss of reading Jovan story's lately but I ready to read now
This never did make any sense to me why they ruined a great thing between John and Evangeline.
He's behaving like a jerk, you better bring it Johnny... E ain't taking you bs no more.
Well Moonie Anonymous thnx for returning to read some JOVAN. Yes John is clueless and Evangeline is fed up.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 09:47 pm
Thank you for the update. Although, I don't like John. I am glad that he is getting help and is being allowed to see his son. This is similar to many real life cases, where women screw men over, just because their feelings got hurt. Not realising or caring that their child/children are the ones who will the price. I am happy Evangeline realised her part in the situation, and made steps to rectify it.
Johnny boy, calm down. Take it one step at a time. Try being friends, getting to know each other. Go out as friends, without Peter. Learn about each other as individuals, likes, dislikes rather than being parents or wanting to be a family. Maybe if you and Evangeline had been friends, before you guys got into a relationship, some of the things that happened wouldn't have. She probably would have known you weren't in a good head space to become someone's boyfriend. You would have known what she expected and wanted out of a relationship. Maybe, just maybe, you would have possibly realised...that what she wanted, you didn't have in you to give, definitely not at that time.
You have written this beautifully. The storyline caught me from the first chapter. Hoping to see more.
Have a great weekend. Stay blessed.
Sarah Anonymous thnx again for the review. They both have much to do to make any kind of relationship work, whether as friends or not. They are Peter's parents and must minimize the tension between them. That's not to pretend that it doesn't exist but to deal with it. They evidently have feelings for each otherwise they would not have been in any kind of relationship at all. The journey continues for these two. Have a great weekend too. Thnx for the congrats on the book. I appreciate it.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 09:42 pm
Thank you for the update. This chapter has made things so very clear to me. I think, I rushed to judgment with John. Don't misunderstand me, I still dislike him. However, this seemed to be more about a woman that was hurt/scorned. Her mother's 'help', made that glaringly obvious. "I'm not saying that you dislike Evangeline but you painted her into a corner when you didn't return her love and she found herself pregnant with your child. She didn't want you anywhere near her so she did what she thought she had to do to accomplish that." Evangeline loved John and he did not return it, so she hit him where it would do the most damage... keeping him from his child. She even admitted that she liked the fact that John was fighting for their child and probably subconsciously wishes that he had done the same for her.
Personally, I think a lot of her keeping their child away from him, has more to do with her feelings being hurt and less to do with his mental state. Why stick around and dangle his child under his nose? She was being a bit vindictive, understandable, but still vindictive. What she wanted, he didn't have in him to give and therefore it made them both miserable. I do believe that John isn't the only one that needs professional help. Evangeline should seek some as well, if nothing else to figure out ...why she stayed as long as long as she did, with a man who was clearly not boyfriend material and still continued to be intimate with him, knowing he did not love her. I hope for their son's sake, they both get help and past the pain to be better parents.
Your stories are great. They bring out my analysing skills..I know it isn't always a good thing. I can't help it. LOL. You are great a writer. P.S. Congratulations on your book, I will be purchasing a copy, soon.
Have a great and blessed weekend.
Sarah Anonymous thnx again for your review of the story. Yes Evangeline was hurt and really not thinking clearly when she made the decision to keep John away but she was also protecting herself from the pain. Can you imagine physically carrying inside of you a constant reminder of the love that you gave and did not have returned growing day by day? Her actions are really reactions to that pain. They both need counseling.
Evangeline has a major task ahead and so does John. Stay tuned. Thnx again for the great review.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 04:46 am
Thank you for the update. I have to say, you have made me see both sides of this fight. I must also say, that I actually feel a bit of sympathy for John...never thought that would ever happen. LOL! It will be devastating to realise that you lost your child due to your very own actions and it could have been avoided. Had he treated Evangeline better and had their relationship ended on a better note, this could have been avoided. I can't imagine a much worse feeling. However, they must both be careful, there is a child involved. They both made their beds...why must their son lie in it?
Darn it, you are good! I...actually have sympathy for John McBain! Check the news...hell must have indeed frozen over. LOL!
Have a blessed and great day.
Sarah Anonymous once again thnx for your thought provoking comments. Yes they both made mistakes in this relationship so let's see how they work through this, if they can. Have a blessed and joyful weekend as God wills it.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 31 2018 03:32 am
Thank you for the update. I think subconsciously, Evangeline wanted this and also knew this would happen. Truth be told, if she really wanted John out of her and the baby's life, moving away would have been the rational thing to do. John fighting to be part of his child's life and by extension hers as well, seems to be what she must actually desire. This coupled with the fact that she gets to punish him for his ill treatment towards her. I am really liking this story. I can't put all the blame on John for the fall of their relationship. Evangeline, more than played her part by staying as long she did. Hate to say it...actually, I don't. I can't wait for John to find out and fight for his son.
You have done it again... your story has enchanted me.
Have a blessed and wonderful weekend.
Sarah Anonymous you flatter me again with your kind words. Yes Evangeline did stay too long before kicking John to the curb. As far as John fighting for his son let us wait and see how the dust settles. What does John really have to offer?
A blessed and peaceful weekend to you too!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 01:23 pm
Thank you for the update. Wow! I can't blame Michael, that's his brother, right or wrong, he will stand by him. I can't for the life of me understand how John, himself haven't figured that he's the baby's father. Wait what am I saying? Of course I can. Evangeline keeps saying.."The baby's father waived his parental rights." If John had a quarter of his brain cells that were functional, he'd remember that Evangeline made him sign a parental waiver form, earlier her pregnancy. This is going to get messy. I guess, she takes him back, no doubt. I do wish she'd reconsider.
You have done it, again and again. Making me... I can't say it...making me like a Jovan story. LOL! You're good!
Sarah Anonymous remember John wasn't paying much attention when Evangeline had him to sign that form. His officers were in the office at the same time and so he was concentrating on what they were saying and not on Evangeline. 'She takes him back, no doubt' I have not decided on that yet. Let's just enjoy the ride. Thnx again for your continued support.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 10:11 pm
Thank you for your update. I can't believe that I am about to say this..but, I don't blame John for thinking that a simple apology will gain him entrance once again, into Evangeline's life. People like John are never really held accountable for their actions..not really. Especially not the first time around. They always have an explanation or excuse on hand, most times they are read easily forgiven. How many times did he have to hurt Evangeline, before she stopped it? Don't take him back. Right now he's toxic. Love him enough to let him go. However, love yourself more, to stay away.
I can't stop reading. What have you done? I am actually reading and enjoying a Jovan story. Ahhhh! LOL!
Sarah Anonymous thnx again for your kind words. Continue to enjoy the story. We are only beginning the drama for these two.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 09:50 pm
Thank you for the update. You're good. I have to give you this much deserved praise. You have me chomping at the bits, with your updates.
Evangeline, you can always make a deathbed confession in about...fifty, sixty years. LOL! You are strong woman you don't need a boy-man in your life.
Have a wonderful day.
Sarah Anonymous the link for 'Broken Heart' is https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07GSG7PRW
As to your opinion of John I am sure that Evangeline agrees and if he is truthful John would also agree. As he is now he has nothing to offer Evangeline.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 09:30 pm
Thank you for the post. Welcome back! I saw your name and couldn't resist! LOL! Well..well..well. John McBain is a scumbag.. what a surprise. Who could have seen that coming? Who, Evangeline, who? Dump for good. You are much better off without him.
You are the only writer who can make me read a story starring.. John "how the dickens did you ever become a detective" McBain. LOL!
Have a blessed day.
Sarah Anonymous thnx for your kind words. I missed writing so here I am again but I'm on vacation and could not resist writing a few chapters. I probaby won't finish until I return to the site in a week so don't fret.
You know that I am a romantic so you know somewhere in all of this they will come together but not right away. There's work to be done.
By the way I did publish "From Broken Heart to True Love" on amazon.com so check it out for only 99 cents. I'm self promoting her. Check the valentchamber home page chat for the link.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 09:21 pm