Loved the surprise ending! Well done!
Thnx for the review. Glad that you liked that little surprise. Your response encourages me to continue writing.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 08:11 pm
I figured it was a triathlon at the"people standing around" point. Liked the storyline. Good delivery. Thumbs Up,!!!
Thnx so much for the review. Your kind words offer much encouragement.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 07:13 pm