Thanks for the new chapter. Even though the way the story is unfolding is quite frustrating. Like I get why Nayely is being defensive toward MJ, and why Maya is telling her to stop being in contact with him. I, for one, don't want MJ to get thrown into all the Terrence + creepy journalist bullshit, seeing how very vulnerable he still is, being in recovery and all. Now I need Nayely to stop trying to solve everything by herself. And also remind Maya that she is the boss, not the other way around.Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2019 02:50 pm
MJ's incubator should have never procreate. Damian ain't nothing but a donor.Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26 2019 09:52 pm
Can we get an update please so goodReviewer: Li Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2019 11:40 pm
I wish Nayely would secretly record all her interactions with these thugs😬 In Terrence entitled mind he believes he made Nayely he can break Nayely😕 I wish she turn the tables on Terrence, his family and the judge😆 bring out all their dirty little secrets😆 I'm digging this update😆Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2018 06:25 pm
Terrence and his family got the police in their pockets😕 Nayely should go to the media if the police won't do anything. Since Terrence want to be in the public eye👀 put him in the public eye👀 Kahlil is a good friend😆 I'm digging this update😆Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2018 06:40 pm
Khalil is trying to fix it. Why is that cop protecting Terrance? That child molester needs to be under the jail and shanked.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2018 05:13 pm
I hope with age comes wisdom. It’s my hope that Nayley now understands why MJ went ballistic on her all those years ago. If someone who I’ve known, loved and trusted kept something very important (i.e., the truth behind my mother’s death), I probably would have reacted more the same way as MJ. As for MJ, he needs to hear Nayley’s point of view. All those years wasted because they were so damn prideful are now gone. Hopefully MJ’s overdose and Khalil’s persistence will help those 2 realize that they need to talk and fac their shared past once and for all.
As for Terrance, Nayley needs to out his child molesting ass to the world! Otherwise he will do this someone else and I don’t think Nayley would want that on her conscience. It’s scary as hell to reveal that someone who trusted betrayed and humiliated you, but I feel that Nayley is stronger than she gives herself credit for.Reviewer: darqchild Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2018 09:18 pm
I am so glad to see this story updated! I check this sight everyday for this story. I can’t wait till MJ and Nayely meet face to face. I hope she gives him a taste of his own medicine.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the ride!Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2018 09:03 pm
All that rat🐀 Terrence need to do now is rummage through her trash... and blackmail her into doing whatever he wants. Girl, why you put that garbage in your trash, and drive that car without your license, with drugs on your hands😕 This story is so good... I'm digging it!!Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2018 03:31 am
Not very sensible of Nayeley to use her personal trash can for MJ’s drug Paraphernalia. Goodness knows who’ll be searching through it considering she’s having her own problems with her dodgy coach (who needs to be fired asap). Also that nurse could still talk to someone. Kahlil should have driven MJ’s car and Nayeley should have driven Kahlil’s.Reviewer: K Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2018 02:58 am
Nooo. What a way to re-enter her life? Your chaarcters are well crafted.. I, especially like Nayely she did not let her abandonment and self esteem issues prevent her from being successful and true to her self. But you hinted of a secret she and Terrence share how do her issues play into that. MJ just shows how when the right/wrong person enter your life your resolve can easily be broken. I like how he kick out Danny strike ONE you out. But how will he climb out of that hole she put him in. Spiteful!!
Like where you ended climatic!! Will you be regularly updating or sporadic. Thanks for the great read.
Thank you so much for your thoughts! I plan on updating weekly so definitely make sure you keep an eye out for anything new!Reviewer: Francis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 10:37 am