Title: Chapter 7 I'm Not Ready

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Author's Response:

More to come so stay tuned.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2018 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 7 I'm Not Ready

Thank you for the update. Where do I start? Evangeline, Evangeline, Evangeline. Why won't you at least pretend to move on with your life. You do know that you can go out with him and nothing happens. You might even make a new friend. Why are  you even bothered by John's feelings of being hurt? He sure didn't care when he was walking all over yours. "I'm not ready", code for...as long as John's in the picture, I'll never want someone else. Hey the Tin man wished for a heart...why shouldn't you wish for John.

Agent Baxter the truth is you never stood a chance...she's used to douchbags...sad but, true. She filled  a need for him and whether  she wants to admits it or not he did the same for her. Like most women, Evangeline has a type. If you asked, they'll deny, but most times actions speak loud and clear. They can never explain it to you and in most cases, neither can they explain it to themselves. Count your blessings...you just dodged a bullet, believe me, you did not want to get caught in that storm.

I had such...well to be honest not high, but still a bit of hope for Evangeline. Oh well.

Good story. Enjoy your week.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Don't know why this review posted twice but since it did I will respond twice.  Only 2 1/2 stars wow Sarah I get the message.  Disappointed I see but you read it and thnx for the review.  Don't know if it so much that Evangeline still wants John or she just doesn't want someone else making decisions for here.  I am sure someone has met a guy like Baxter and kicked him to the curb just like Evangeline did.  He had plans for them and she was not at that stage in her life for such.  Oh well the story goes on let's see what happens.  Fortunately or unfortunately we'll have to wait and read if Evangeline and John unite.  The story has not finished.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 24 2018 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 7 I'm Not Ready

 

Thank you for the update. Where do I start? Evangeline, Evangeline, Evangeline. Why won't you at least pretend to move on with your life. You do know that you can go out with him and nothing happens. You might even make a new friend. Why are  you even bothered by John's feelings of being hurt? He sure didn't care when he was walking all over yours. "I'm not ready", code for...as long as John's in the picture, I'll never want someone else. Hey the Tin man wished for a heart...why shouldn't you wish for John.

Agent Baxter the truth is you never stood a chance...she's used to douchbags...sad but, true. She filled  a need for him and whether  she wants to admits it or not he did the same for her. Like most women, Evangeline has a type. If you asked, they'll deny, but most times actions speak loud and clear. They can never explain it to you and in most cases, neither can they explain it to themselves. Count your blessings...you just dodged a bullet, believe me, you did not want to get caught in that storm.

I had such...well to be honest not high, but still a bit of hope for Evangeline. Oh well.

Good story. Enjoy your week.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous so you didn't like the boot given to Agent Baxter.  Well the story goes on.  Thnx for reading it and reviewing.  Have a blessed week.  Can you believe it is Monday again!

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2018 06:04 am



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